2021年陕西省商洛市大学英语6级大学英语六级真题(含答案)

（2021年）陕西省商洛市大学英语6级大

学英语六级真题（含答案）

学校:班级:姓名:考号:

一、l.Writing（10题）

1.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessay

entitledReadOnlineWorksorPrintedWorks.Youshouldwriteatleast150

wordsfollowingtheoutlinesgivenbelow

1.有的人喜欢阅读网络作品；

2.有的人喜欢阅读印刷作品；

3.我的做法。

2.Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowriteacompositiononthe

topicMyViewonChoosingtheRightCareer.Youshouldwriteatleast150

wordsandbaseyourcompositionontheoutline（giveninChinese）below:

1.选择适合自己的职业的重要性；

2.如何选择适合自己的职业；

3.我的看法

3.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessay

entitledonGraduateMania.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowing

theoutlinegivenbelow.

1.目前很多人报考研究生；

2.你认为此现象的原因是什么；

3.你的看法。

4.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowritea

compositiononthetopicTheImportanceofReadingClassics.Youshould

writeatleast150words,andbaseyour

compositionontheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:

1.阅读经典书籍对人的成长至关重要。

2.现在愿意阅读经典的人越来越少，原因是……

3.我们大学生应该怎么做？

5.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed,30minutestowriteashortessay

entitledWhataCollegeEducationMeanstoMe.Youshouldwriteatleast

150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:

1.学习一向优异，理所当然应进大学深造

2.大学是满足求知欲的最佳场所

3.大学生活能开阔视野，提高思想境界

4.高等教育为开创职业生涯做好准备

6.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacomposition

onthetopicChangesinPeople'sWaysofCommunication.Youshouldwrite

atleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:

1.以下图为依据描述1975年和1995年人们交流通讯方式的变化情况

2.说明引起变化的各种原因

3.预测未来的情况

口PhoneOt.'ompuier

国I.ener

7.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacomposition

onthetopic:OverseasStudyatanEarlyAge.Youshouldwriteatleast150

wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:

1.目前很多父母在子女高中毕业前就送他们出国学习

2.形成这种趋势的原因

3.我对此的看法

OverseasStudyatanEarlyAge

8.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessay

commentingonthelatestchangeinthepostgraduatecraze.Youshouldwrite

atleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese.

1.6.5%考研人数在持续上涨10年后于2007年开始减少。

2.考研热降温的原因。（收费改革；研究生就业难；用人单位重视工作

经验）

3.我们应该如何选择。

Post-graduateCrazeCoolsOff

No.ofPost-graduateTestTakersmShanghai

YearHuaberofApplicants■argin

+32.6%

04

+1.8%

>.1%

9.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowritea

compositiononthetopicCompetitionandCooperation.Youshouldwriteat

least150words,andbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)

below:

1.现代社会中竞争无处不在；

2.竞争和合作的关系。

10.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowritea

compositiononthetopicToCurbSpending.Youshouldwriteatleast150

wordsaccordingtotheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese.

1.现在许多大学生普遍花钱大手大脚，消费水平高

2.有人认为社会整体生活水平提高了，大学生花钱多一些无可厚非

3.你的看法

ToCurbSpending

二、2.ReadingComprehension(SkimmingandScanning)(10题)

11.

AccordingtoaFTCreport,U.S.mediacorporationsaremarketingviolent

entertainmenttochildrenactivelyand.

12.Studentsgetmoneyfromnotonlyfederalloansbutalso.

13.

Inordertomakesuretheircustomerswerehappy,PizzaHut

introduced.

A.twocustomersatisfactionprograms

B.a1-600numbercustomerhotline

C.acustomercall-inprogram

D.happycustomersprogram

14.AccordingtoMr.deWahl,whyisJoostignoringthetwobusinessmodels?

A.A11peoplearenotfondofsimplywatchingTV.

B.TheyareirrelatedwithpleasuresderivedfromwatchingTV.

C.TheyarethesameasthepracticesthatTVhaslongbeenusing.

D.JoostwantsaninnovativebusinessmodeldifferentfromYouTube.

15.

Thenutritionalqualityoffoodproductvariesinaccordancewith.

16.

Therearemoregrindsinmilitarycollegesthaninothercolleges.

A.YB.NC.NG

17.

Mr.Bellavancecashedouthispension,soldhishouseandunloadedthingshe

didn'tneedatgarageafterlosinghisjobinordertochangehisfinancesinto

______mode.

18.

TheBermudaTriangleseemstoform,atrianglebetween,,

andtheoceaneastofPuertoRico.

19.

Eachfederalurbansearch-and-rescuetaskforceismadeupofatleast60

members.

A.YB.NC.NG

20.

Owingtosomelifeexperiences,peopleoftenlackinmany

workplaces.

三、3.ListeningComprehension(10题)

21.听力原文：M:Hello,thisisCad'sbookstore.WefoundMr.Wood'swallet

andidentitycardhereafterhelefthiscarthismorning.

W:Hehasbeenwonderingwherehecouldhaveleftthem.He'llpickthemup

thisafternoon.Hehastogoouttothebankandthepostoffice.Thankyoufor

calling.

Q:WhatcanwelearnaboutMr.Woodfromthisconversation?

(18)

A.OnlyMr.Wood'swalletwaslost.

B.He'llpickuphiswalletandidentitycardatthebank.

C.He'llnotgotothebankandthepostoffice.

D.He'llpickuphiswalletandidentitycard.

22.

[Bll]

23.

[B3]

24.

[B5]

25.(24)

A.Asmallplacewithaniceviewofthecity.

B.AspaciousapartmentthatincludescableTV.

C.Anapartmentdowntownwithfreeparking.

D.AsmallplacewithutilitiesandcableTV.

26.(26)

A.Hethinksit'smainlyforchildren.

B.Hefeelsitwouldbeworthwhile.

C.Hebelievesitistoocomplicated.

D.Hethinksitmaynotbeveryprofitable.

27.(22)

A.SheshareddifferentbeliefswithDennis.

B.Dennislovedherverymuch.

C.HernameisSarah.

D.Sheisold-fashioned.

28.听力原文：Asurveycarriedoutineightcountriesfoundthatpeople

aroundtheworldareannoyedwithguiltaboutthesmallpleasuresinlife.This

doesn'tstoppeoplefromindulginginalcohol,cigarettesandhigh-fatfoods,

butitdoesstopthemfromenjoyingthem.Thesurveyquestioned4000people

abouttheirattitudestowardsalistofindulgencesincludingsmoking,eating

chocolateandcakes,drinkingalcoholandfailingtoexercise.

ItfoundthatAustraliansaretheworld'smostguilt-dominatedpeople,while

theDutchwerethegreatestpleasure-takersandalsoleastregretfulabouttheir

indulgences.Germanscamesecondintheguiltleagueandwereleastlikely

totakeenjoymentfromphysicalpleasures.

Scientistssaidmoderateindulgencereducesstress,abenefitthatcanbe

completelyoutweighedbyfeelingsofguilt.Afavoritetreat,suchasacupof

teaorcoffee,aglassofwineorbeer,acigaretteorabarofchocolatereduces

stressandhelpspeoplerelax.Butwhenpeoplegetcaughtintheguilttrap,

theyeithertrytosacrificetheirenjoymentorlivewiththeguilt.Thiscan

underminethepositivebenefitsofenjoymentwhichstudiesshowcanprotect

againststressandstrengthentheimmunesystem.

Atitsworst,stresscanleadtodepressionandillnesssuchasheartdiseaseand

cancer.

(33)

A.People'sindulgencesinsmallpleasures.

B.People'sguiltyfeelingsaboutindulgences.

C.Theenjoymentfromphysicalpleasures.

D.Theworld'sgreatestpleasuretakers.

29.

[B8]

30.(32)

A.Theyinvitenewideaswithgreatenthusiasm.

B.Theychoosegoodideasthroughastrictprocess.

C.Theygivequickreactions,toproposalsandideas.

D.Theyhavenostandardregulationsonassessingsuggestions.

四、4.ReadingComprehension(ReadinginDepth)(3题)

31.Carownerscouldgoto,besidesthedealerships,toreplacea

mechanicalcarkey.

32.

Whatdoes"internalmechanism"(Line3,Para3)mean?

A.Secretmachine.

B.Mentalprocesses.

C.Oversystem.

D.Mechanicoperation.

33.

[C6]

五、5.ErrorCorrection^题)

34.

[S3]

35.

[S4]

36.Itisexcitedtoapplyforajobthatreallyappealstoyou.[SI]

Inmakingyourapplication,therearethenumberofpoints[S2]

foryoutoobserve.

Inyourletterofapplication,aimtosayjustenoughto

giveagoodaccountofyourself,withouttedious.Ifyouare[S3]

answeringanadvertisement,anyinformationforwhichitasks

must,ofcourse,begiven.Youwillusuallycoveryour[S4]

scholasticrecordandanyfurthereducationandmining.You

mayalsobeaskedtogivethenamesofoneortwopersonsto

supplyreferences.

Forthispurposeyoushouldchoosepeoplewhoknows[S5]

youwellenoughtovouchforyourcharacterandability;

andincourtesy,youshouldseekinadvancetheirpermission

tobenamedafterreferees.[S6]

Itwilldependoncircumstanceshowmuchyoucan

usefullyaddaboutyourselves.Yourpurposeistobringto[S7]

thenoticeoftheemployeranygoodreasonwhyyourather

thansomeoftheotherapplicantsshouldbechosenforthe

job.Ifthereforeyoufeelyouhaveanyspecialskillsor[S8]

aptitudefortheworkor,forexample,anyparticularinterest

inthelineofbusiness,letthisbeknown.

Finally,thereisyouruseoflanguage.Youcannotgo

wrongifyoukeepyoursentencesandparagraphsshort,

makingsurethesenseisclearandgoodexpressed.[S9]

Chooseplainwordssomuchastheyconveyyour[S10]

meaning.

[SI]

六、6.ErrorCorrection©题）

37.

[sio]

38.[S5]

39.

[S6]

参考答案

1.ReadOnlineWorksorPrintedWorks.Somepeopleprefertoreadonlinefor

itsconveniencewhichliesinitseasyaccessspeedydeliveryandrelatively

lowprice.Onlineworksarealsowide-rangingandup-to-date.Besidesthe

websoftenprovidethemaplatformforsharingtheirviewsandcomments.In

thiswaycommunicationbetweenreadersandwriterscaneasilybeachieved.

Inspiteoftheadvantagesofreadingonlinemanypeoplesticktoreading

printedhooks.Forthemthelanguageinprintedbooksisclassicalandrefined

whichpossessesalastingbeautyandmakesreadingmoreenjoyable.They

derivepleasureevenfromtheverysmellandfeelofthebook.AsfarasIam

concernedIpreferprintedworkstothoseonline.Ihaveevenagoodstoreof

books.ButwhenIneedtobeinformedofthelatestworksIwillturntothe

netforonlineinformation.AndafterreadingthebooksIwouldverymuch

liketodiscussthemwithothersonline.ReadOnlineWorksorPrintedWorks.

Somepeopleprefertoreadonlineforitsconvenience,whichliesinitseasy

access,speedydeliveryandrelativelylowprice.Onlineworksarealsowide-

rangingandup-to-date.Besides,thewebsoftenprovidethemaplatform,for

sharingtheirviewsandcomments.Inthiswaycommunicationbetween

readersandwriterscaneasilybeachieved.Inspiteoftheadvantagesof

readingonline,manypeoplesticktoreadingprintedhooks.Forthem,the

languageinprintedbooksisclassicalandrefined,whichpossessesalasting

beautyandmakesreadingmoreenjoyable.Theyderivepleasureevenfrom

theverysmellandfeelofthebook.AsfarasIamconcerned,Ipreferprinted

workstothoseonline.Ihaveevenagoodstoreofbooks.ButwhenIneedto

beinformedofthelatestworks,Iwillturntothenetforonlineinformation.

Andafterreadingthebooks,Iwouldverymuchliketodiscussthemwith

othersonline.解析：[审题]这次考试的写作题属于常见的三段式作文。

第一段要写为什么有人喜欢阅读网络作品。可以列举几个好处。如：方

便快捷、成本较低、更方便交流等等；

第二段要写为什么有人喜欢阅读印刷作品。可以说人们喜欢印刷作品的

语言，读书时的书香等。最后，要说明自己的观点和做法。

［提纲］

1.Preferenceofonlineworks:

easyaccesstotheInternet,speedydelivery,relativelylowprice

wide-ranging;up-to-date

interactionbetweenreadersandwriters.

2.Preferenceofprintedworks:

languagemoreclassicalandrefined

thesmellandtouchofthebook

3.1preferprintedworks

turntothenetfordiscussiononthem.

2.MyViewonChoosingtheRightCareerChasingtherightcareerisvery

important.Mostofusspendagreatpartofourlivesatourjobs.Forthat

reasonweshouldtrytofindoutwhatourtalentsareandhowweusethem.

ThMyViewonChoosingtheRightCareerChasingtherightcareerisvery

important.Mostofusspendagreatpartofourlivesatourjobs.Forthat

reasonweshouldtrytofindoutwhatourtalentsareandhowweusethem.

Th

3.OnGraduateManiaInrecentyearspeoplewhowouldliketogotograduate

schoolbecamemoreandmore.Foronethingthousandsofenterprisingyoung

mensitforNationalGraduateEntranceExameachyear.Forexample50

thousandcandidatestookpartintheNationalGraduateEntranceExamlast

year.Foranothernotonlytheundergraduatesbutalsotheworkemployeestry

theirbesttobepostgraduates.Thereareseveralreasonswhichleadtothis

phenomenon.Tobeginwithitisbecauseofemploymentpressurethatlarge

numbersofpeopleenrollintheNational'GraduateEntranceExam.Owingto

enhancementofeducationalstandardabachelor'sdegreeisnolonger

evaluatedasasufficientqualificationtoensureadecentjob.Secondlysome

peoplethoughhavebeenemployedforseveralyearsfindtheirknowledge

inadequatetomeetthedemandofthisever-changingworld.Finallymany

peopleonlyfollowthesuitwithnospecificpurpose.Inmyopinionwehave

tothinkcarefullybeforewedecidetoapplyforgraduateschool.Cangraduate

schooloffermewhatIwanttolearn?DoIneedpracticalworkexperienceor

theoreticalknowledge?Beforewemakethechoicethesequestionsneedtobe

answered.OnGraduateManiaInrecentyears,peoplewhowouldliketogoto

graduateschoolbecamemoreandmore.Foronething,thousandsof

enterprisingyoungmensitforNationalGraduateEntranceExameachyear.

Forexample,50thousandcandidatestookpartintheNationalGraduate

EntranceExamlastyear.Foranother,notonlytheundergraduatesbutalsothe

workemployeestrytheirbesttobepostgraduates.Thereareseveralreasons

whichleadtothisphenomenon.Tobeginwith,itisbecauseofemployment

pressurethatlargenumbersofpeopleenrollintheNational'Graduate

EntranceExam.Owingtoenhancementofeducationalstandard,abachelor's

degreeisnolongerevaluatedasasufficientqualificationtoensureadecent

job.Secondly,somepeople,thoughhavebeenemployedforseveralyears,

findtheirknowledgeinadequatetomeetthedemandofthisever-changing

world.Finally,manypeopleonlyfollowthesuitwithnospecificpurpose.In

myopinion,wehavetothinkcarefullybeforewedecidetoapplyforgraduate

school.CangraduateschooloffermewhatIwanttolearn?DoIneedpractical

workexperienceortheoreticalknowledge?Beforewemakethechoicethese

questionsneedtobeanswered.

4.TheImportanceofReadingClassicsNowsomepeopleespeciallythe

elderlyareoftheviewthatclassicsplayanimportantroleinthelife.English

learnersforexamplecanbenefitalotfromthefamousreadingsorclassical

books.Besidestheymaintainthattheirchildhoodisexposedtothesegreat

minds.Howeveryoungmeningrowingnumbersseldomenjoyreadingthese

articlesofbooks.Inotherwordstheyfindfewinterestsinreadingso-called

classics.Alotofreasonsareresponsibleforthis.Tobeginwiththeyareinthe

shadowofpracticalminds.Theseclassicsmaynotmeettheneeds.What's

moreonlinereadingisagoodwayforpeopletogetinformationeasilyand

efficiently.Moreovertheyoungpeoplearetoobusytoreadthem.Fromwhat

hasbeendiscussedabovewemaysafelydrawtheconclusionthateffective

actionsshouldbetakentopreventthesituation.Firstwecanenjoythese

mindsinourfreetime.Secondthesearticlesornovelswillbearrangedfor

furtherreadinginourretirement.Certainlyitishightimethatweplacedgreat

emphasisonthisissue.TheImportanceofReadingClassicsNowsomepeople,

especiallytheelderly,areoftheviewthatclassicsplayanimportantrolein

thelife.Englishlearners,forexample,canbenefitalotfromthefamous

readings,orclassicalbooks.Besides,theymaintainthattheirchildhoodis

exposedtothesegreatminds.However,youngmeningrowingnumbers

seldomenjoyreadingthesearticlesofbooks.Inotherwords,theyfindfew

interestsinreadingso-calledclassics.Alotofreasonsareresponsibleforthis.

Tobeginwith,theyareintheshadowofpracticalminds.Theseclassicsmay

notmeettheneeds.What'smoreonlinereadingisagoodwayforpeopleto

getinformationeasilyandefficiently.Moreover,theyoungpeoplearetoo

busytoreadthem.Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wemaysafelydraw

theconclusionthateffectiveactionsshouldbetakentopreventthesituation.

First,wecanenjoythesemindsinourfreetime.Second,thesearticlesor

novelswillbearrangedforfurtherreadinginourretirement.Certainly,itis

hightimethatweplacedgreatemphasisonthisissue.

5.WHATACOLLEGEEDUCATIONMEANSTOMEWhatdoesacollege

educationmeantome?ThisisagoodquestionbutIhavenevergivenmuch

thoughttoit.FinishingtheprimaryandsecondaryschoolasatopstudentI

justtookitforgrantedthatIshouldgoontocollegeforhighereducation.

NowthatIamaskedtowriteonthistopicIhavetocudgelmybrainstrying

toprovideapresentableanswertoit.TobeginwithIbelieveacollegeor

universityisthebestplacewhereIcansatisfymydesireforlearning.I

rememberasIproceededthroughhighschoolintojuniorandsenioryearsI

becamegenuinelyinterestedinchemistryandphysics.IfeltthatIwantedto

furthermystudiesinthesesubjectsandthatIwouldneverbecontenttoend

upasahighschoolgraduate.ItwasthenthatIbegantofeeladeepyearning

forknowledge.Andasmyhighschoolyearsdrewtoaclosethedecisionto

attendcollegeseemedonlytoonatural.UptonowIhavebeenatcollegefor

morethantwoyears.Ihavelearnedfrommyownexperiencethatthecollege

isnotmerelyagoodplacetoseekscientifictruthbutalsoanidealplaceto

broadenone'shorizon.Withcoursesandlecturesavailableindifferentfields

collegelifekeepsmeinclosecontactwithavarietyofnewsocialandpolitical

ideas.Andlivingoncampusalsogivesmetheopportunitytomeetdifferent

peopleaccumulatenewexperiencesandknowwellabouttheworldwelive

in.HereIdon'twanttoconcealmymotivationonthepracticalside.Intoday's

societycollegeeducationhasbecomeanessentialpartofcareerpreparation

forstudents.Thejobmarketissocompetitiveandthistrendwillsurely

continueinthecomingyears.Abachelor'sdegreeoramaster'sdegreeisall

butindispensableifonewishestofindasatisfyingprofessionaljob.Andin

thissenseIdohopeourcurrenteducationalsystemcanteachusyoungpeople

theskillsbothscholasticandfinancialthatwewillneednotonlytosurvive

buttoflourishintoday'sworldaswell.WHATACOLLEGEEDUCATION

MEANSTOMEWhatdoesacollegeeducationmeantome?Thisisagood

questionbutIhavenevergivenmuchthoughttoit.Finishingtheprimaryand

secondaryschoolasatopstudent,IjusttookitforgrantedthatIshouldgoon

tocollegeforhighereducation.NowthatIamaskedtowriteonthistopic,I

havetocudgelmybrains,tryingtoprovideapresentableanswertoit.To

beginwith,IbelieveacollegeoruniversityisthebestplacewhereIcan

satisfymydesireforlearning.IrememberasIproceededthroughhighschool

intojuniorandsenioryears,Ibecamegenuinelyinterestedinchemistryand

physics.IfeltthatIwantedtofurthermystudiesinthesesubjects,andthatI

wouldneverbecontenttoendupasahighschoolgraduate.ItwasthenthatI

begantofeeladeepyearningforknowledge.Andasmyhighschoolyears

drewtoaclose,thedecisiontoattendcollegeseemedonlytoonatural.Upto

now,Ihavebeenatcollegeformorethantwoyears.Ihavelearnedfrommy

ownexperiencethatthecollegeisnotmerelyagoodplacetoseekscientific

truthbutalsoanidealplacetobroadenone'shorizon.Withcoursesand

lecturesavailableindifferentfields,collegelifekeepsmeinclosecontact

withavarietyofnewsocialandpoliticalideas.Andlivingoncampusalso

givesmetheopportunitytomeetdifferentpeople,accumulatenew

experiencesandknowwellabouttheworldwelivein.Here,Idon'twantto

concealmymotivationonthepracticalside.Intoday'ssociety,college

educationhasbecomeanessentialpartofcareerpreparationforstudents.The

jobmarketissocompetitiveandthistrendwillsurelycontinueinthecoming

years.Abachelor'sdegreeoramaster'sdegreeisallbutindispensableifone

wishestofindasatisfyingprofessionaljob.Andinthissense,Idohopeour

currenteducationalsystemcanteachusyoungpeopletheskills,both

scholasticandfinancial,thatwewillneednotonlytosurvivebuttoflourish

intoday'sworldaswell.

6.ChangesinPeople'sWaysofCommunicationAsthetwopiechartsillustrate

therewereconsiderablechangesinpeople'swaysofcommunicationinthe20

yearsfrom1975to1995.Letterswhichdominatedhalfofthe

communicationsmarketin1975tookuponlyfourpercentofthepeople's

choiceswhilethepercentageofcomputersdoubledandthatofphonesalmost

doubledinthosetwodecades.Suchdramaticchangesreflectedthe

conveniencethemodernwaysofcommunicationbroughttopeople.Withthe

quickeningpaceoflifemostpeopledidnotwanttotakethetroubleofwriting

andpostingaletterandthenwaitingendlesslyfortheanswerwhichcouldbe

finishedinseveralminutes.Overthetelephonepeoplecouldtalkpleasantly

nomatterhowfarawaytheywerefromeachother.Withaclickofthemouse

themailwouldreachthereceiver'smailboxinasecond.Sincethetelephone

andthecomputercouldsavepeoplesomuchtimemoneyandenergypeople

werelikelytodependmoreonthemtocommunicatewithothersthanonthe

traditionalletters.ChangesinPeople'sWaysofCommunicationAsthetwo

piechartsillustrate,therewereconsiderablechangesinpeople'swaysof

communicationinthe20yearsfrom1975to1995.Letterswhichdominated

halfofthecommunicationsmarketin1975tookuponlyfourpercentofthe

people'schoiceswhilethepercentageofcomputersdoubledandthatof

phonesalmostdoubledinthosetwodecades.Suchdramaticchangesreflected

theconveniencethemodernwaysofcommunicationbroughttopeople.With

thequickeningpaceoflife,mostpeopledidnotwanttotakethetroubleof

writingandpostingaletterandthenwaitingendlesslyfortheanswer,which

couldbefinishedinseveralminutes.Overthetelephone,peoplecouldtalk

pleasantlynomatterhowfarawaytheywerefromeachother.Withaclickof

themouse,themailwouldreachthereceiver'smailboxinasecond.Sincethe

telephoneandthecomputercouldsavepeoplesomuchtime,moneyand

energy,peoplewerelikelytodependmoreonthemtocommunicatewith

othersthanonthetraditionalletters.解析:本文为图表类作文，思路清晰、

语言流畅、规范、逻辑性强。第一段以Asthetwopiechartsillustrate,there

wereconsiderablechangesin...dominatedhalfof...while...doubled等开头

点题，引出图表中的具体数据,为下文的全面论述做好铺垫。然后用Such

dramaticchangesreflected...弓［出第二段，对原因进行详细分析。结尾段

Since...引出了预测及其根据。

7.OverseasStudyatanEarlyAgeNowadaysmoreandmoreparentsareeager

tosendtheirchildrentostudyabroadbeforetheyfinishhighschoolby

whatevermeansandatwhatevercost.Itisquiteunderstandableforparentsto

sendtheirchildrentostudyoverseasbecausetheyplacehighexpectationson

theirchildren.Theyareencouragedbythesuccessstoriesofthosewhohave

completedtheiroverseasstudy.Withthedevelopmentofeconomycompanies

andinstitutionsathomearegivingmoreandmoreemphasisonoverseas

experiencestoo.Consequentlypursuingoverseasstudyhasbecomeakindof

shortcutingainingabetterfuture.Moreoverthereisstilloneunderlying

reasonforthisrush-economicreason.Therapideconomicprogressinthepast

fewyearsinChinahasenabledmoreandmoreparentstoaffordthehugecost

fortheirchildren'soverseasstudy.Asformeoverseasstudyissurelyahelpful

waytogetbothadvancedknowledgeandnecessaryexperiencesbutoverseas

studyatanearlyageisneithernecessarynorbeneficial.Thestudentsmaybe

tooyoungtoeithertendforthemselvesorthinkforthemselves.Idothinkthat

overseasstudycancontributetoone'sself-improvementbutit'sbettertobe

pursuedafteronehasfinishedhiscollegestudyathomewhenheismore

capableoflearningandlivingonhisown.OverseasStudyatanEarlyAge

Nowadays,moreandmoreparentsareeagertosendtheirchildrentostudy

abroadbeforetheyfinishhighschoolbywhatevermeansandatwhatevercost.

Itisquiteunderstandableforparentstosendtheirchildrentostudyoverseas

becausetheyplacehighexpectationsontheirchildren.Theyareencouraged

bythesuccessstoriesofthosewhohavecompletedtheiroverseasstudy.With

thedevelopmentofeconomy,companiesandinstitutionsathomearegiving

moreandmoreemphasisonoverseasexperiences,too.Consequently,

pursuingoverseasstudyhasbecomeakindofshortcutingainingabetter

future.Moreover,thereisstilloneunderlyingreasonforthisrush-economic

reason.TherapideconomicprogressinthepastfewyearsinChinahas

enabledmoreandmoreparentstoaffordthehugecostfortheirchildren's

overseasstudy.Asforme,overseasstudyissurelyahelpfulwaytogetboth

advancedknowledgeandnecessaryexperiences,butoverseasstudyatan

earlyageisneithernecessarynorbeneficial.Thestudentsmaybetooyoung

toeithertendforthemselvesorthinkforthemselves.Idothinkthatoverseas

studycancontributetoone'sself-improvement,butit'sbettertobepursued

afteronehasfinishedhiscollegestudyathome,whenheismorecapableof

learningandlivingonhisown.

8.Post-graduateCrazeCoolsOffThepost-graduatecrazehaslongsincebeen

ahotissueonmostcampusesaroundthecountry.Accordingtothestatistics

releasedbyShanghaiEducationalTestInstitute79299studentsinShanghai

satinforthepost-graduateentranceexamsin2003adramaticriseof32.6%

overthepreviousyear.Theyearof2003isthetenthyearsincethenumberof

postgraduatetesttakersbegantogrowrapidlyandsteadily.Howeversince

thentherisinglinehasgraduallyplateauedyearbyyearwithamodestriseof

6.7%1.8%2.1%respectivelyin200420052006.In2007thenumberoftest

takersevendroppedby6.5%incomparisonwith2006.Allthesestatistics

pointtoaninterestingphenomenonthepost-graduatetestafteraten-year

crazeisstartingtocooloff.Threemajorfactorsaccountforthecoolingoffof

thepost-graduatecraze.Oneisthepost-graduateeducationreform.Post­

graduatestudentsusedtoenjoyamodestgovernmentsubsidyfortheirthree

yearstudies.Butaccordingtothenewgraduateprogramtheyhavetopayfor

alltheirl