中考英语复习-第三部分-重难题型-题型六-书面表达市赛课公开课一等奖省名师获奖课件

第三部分重难题型精讲题型六书面表示

第1页“审”即审题。详细包含以下四方面：1.审文体。审清题干要求用什么文体，是说明文、记叙文还是议论文。2.审要求。认真阅读题干所提供信息、词汇和要求。如：信息包含哪些内容关键点、文章词数、是否要隐瞒个人信息等。3.审人称。要搞清楚书面表示要求用何种人称，是第一人称、第二人称还是第三人称。解题方法与技巧一、审第2页4.定时态。普通来说，故事性文章用过去时，其中表示感受时可用现在时；说明性或议论性文章普通用现在时；谈论理想和未来打算文章用未来时。第3页“列”即列提要。依据题目所提供信息，用简单句子或短语列出文章关键点，来确定文章框架，但须确保关键点无遗漏。二、列第4页“扩”即扩写句子。它是在主干基础上添枝加叶，也就是说，依据表示需要添加上定语、状语、补语等修饰及说明成份；也可适当使用复合句，如：宾语从句、定语从句及状语从句等,使句子意思更详细形象、充实丰满。三、扩第5页

“连”即连句成文。为了使句子或段落语义连贯，表示合理准确，能够适当加入一些连接词。惯用连接词有:表示并列或递进：both…and…,what’smore,notonly…butalso…表示转折：but,however,otherwise,yet,while表示因果:because,asaresult,becauseof表示条件：if,unless四、连第6页表示对比：ononehand…ontheotherhand...表示解释：forinstance,suchas,inotherwords表示次序：tobeginwith,firstofall,finally,intheend表示强调:actually,afterall,infact表示结论:allinall,inaword,inmyopinion第7页“美”即美化文章。为了使文章优美，我们能够这么：1.正确使用修饰词、连接词、高级词汇或1~2个复合句，如：定语从句、宾语从句、状语从句等。对于连接词，相较于常见first,second,third等，使用tobeginwith,what’smore,atlast,finally等高级词汇和短语，往往会提升作文档次，赢得阅卷老师青睐。五、美第8页2.不一样程度考生应有不一样写作要求。基础较微弱考生，多用一些书本上基本句型；而对于基础比很好考生，则可使用比较复杂句型或常见谚语、俗语等，这么能够到达锦上添花效果。3.检验语法、单词拼写及大小写是否正确，表示是否地道，篇章是否连贯，标点符号是否使用正确。第9页

书写要工整、美观、规范，而且卷面须整齐，尽可能不做任何涂改。书写英文单词时，英文字母不要压到答题线。六、抄第10页类型一写人叙事类别剖析第11页话题剖析写人叙事是近5年云南中考书面表示高频命题点，共考查了9次，其中省卷考查了4次，昆明考查了4次，曲靖考查了1次。昆明设题形式为二选一，云南和曲靖每年各设题1道，考查角度包含叙述自己尤其一天、初中学习生活、与某人一起成长、自己谈话交流、高兴时光等等。文章大多以普通过去时和第一人称为主。普通会给出一段汉字背景提醒和2点写作要求。第12页【开头句】1.Attheageofsix,he/shebeganto...2.Iwillneverforget...3.Istillremembertheday...4.Themostinterestingthingisthat...5.WhatIadmiremostaboutheris...6.My/His/Hernameis...第13页【中间句】7.He/Sheis+基数词+yearsold.He/Shewasbornin/on+时间/地点.8.He/Shecomes/isfrom+地点名词.9.He/Sheis1.70meterstallandweighs52kilos.10.He/Shehaslong/black...(修饰词)+hair(外貌特征).11.He/Sheisoutgoing/friendly(性格特征).12.He/Shelikes/loves/prefers/isinterestedin/isgoodatplayingbasketball...(兴趣兴趣).第14页【结尾句】13.Youcan’timaginehowhappyIam!14.Ikeptpracticingandnevergaveup.15.Whatanunforgettablethingitisinmylife!16.Thankyouverymuchforeverythingyou’vedoneforme.17.Ihaveneverexpressedmythanksandrespecttoyou.18.Ithinkweshoulddoourbesttohelppeoplewhoneedhelp.第15页典例剖析ATrueSelf提醒：英语课上，同学们以“真实自我”为主题展开了激烈讨论。每个人都有两面性，能在不一样场所表现出不一样状态。请以“ATrueSelf”为题，用英语写一篇短文，介绍你自己。要求：1.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整齐，词数不少于60个；2.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，不然以零分计。（河北改编）第16页1.文体：本文要求介绍自己，文体为说明文；2.时态：文章要求介绍自己相关信息，主要用普通现在时，若包括未来相关信息，则应用普通未来时；若包括过去相关信息，应用普通过去时，注意时态交织转换；3.人称：本文要求写一篇自我介绍，应用第一人称；4.写作关键点：①开门见山介绍自己；②介绍怎样提升自己；③介绍自己优点；5.词数：不少于60词，不得出现真实姓名、校名。审题指导第17页ATrueSelfI'makindandhelpfulperson.WhenIthinkbackwhatI'vedonebefore,Ishouldhelpmyparentsdomorehousework.Itisgoodformyfuturelifebydoinghousework.WhenImeetsomethingdifficult,Iliketothinkaboutthewaystosolvethem.Ialwayshelpothers.IcansinganddancewellandIoftengiveperformancesatourschoolparty.Iliketomakefriendsandsharesomethinggoodwithothers.Readingandtakingexercisearemyfavorite.Doyouwanttomakefriendswithme?普通习作第18页1.Itisgoodformyfuturelifebydoinghousework.(用动名词短语作主语改写句子）__________________________________________________句子升格Doinghouseworkisgoodformyfuturelife.第19页2.WhenImeetsomethingdifficult,Iliketothinkaboutthewaystosolvethem.（用facewith改写句子）__________________________________________________________________________________3.IcansinganddancewellandIoftengiveperformancesatourschoolparty.(用so…that…改写句子）_______________________________________________________________________________WhenIfacewithsomethingdifficult,Iliketo

thinkaboutthewaystosolvethem.IcansinganddancesowellthatIoftengiveperformancesatourschoolparty.第20页范文升格ATrueSelfI’makindandhelpfulperson.WhenIthinkbackwhatI’vedonebefore,Ishouldhelpmyparentsdomorehousework.Doinghouseworkisgoodformyfuturelife.Facedwithsomethingdifficult,Iliketothinkaboutthewaystosolvethem.Ialwayshelpothers.IcansinganddancewellsothatIoftengiveperformancesatourschoolparty.Iliketomakefriendsandsharesomethinggoodwithothers.Readingandtakingexercisearemyfavorite.Doyouwanttomakefriendswithme?第21页_____________IsAlwayswithMe提醒：在我们日渐改变生活中，总有某个人或某个东西一直陪在我们身边，埋藏在我们心里，在我们需要时候及时出现，陪同着我们一起成长。请以“IsAlwayswithMe”为题，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈这个人或者东西陪同你经历，分享一下你想法和感受。要求：1.请把题目补充完整；2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整齐，词数不少于60个；3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，不然以零分计。写作练兵第22页MyMomIsAlwayswithMeMymomlovesmeverymuch.Sheisthebestmotherinmyheartbecauseshe'salwayswithmewheneverIneedhelp.IoncetookpartinanEnglishspeechcontestandpreparedalotforit.Unfortunately,whenIgavemyspeechonthestage,Iwastoonervoustospeakfluently.Ifeltreallyupsetafterthecontest.Mymomtoldmenottoloseheartandencouragedmetopracticeharder.NowmyEnglishhasimprovedalot.AndIcanspeakEnglishwithgreatconfidence.MymomalwayssupportsmeandI'llloveherforever.第23页类型二做法提议第24页话题剖析

近5年云南中考考查了4次做法提议。如：年昆明“DoSmallThingsWell”，年昆明“LetMeTellYou…”年曲靖“Let’s”，年曲靖“HowIRelaxMyself”。第25页【开头句】1.Therearesomesuggestionsthat...2.Ifyoufollowtheseways,Ibelieveyoucan...3.Thereissomeusefuladviceabout...第26页【中间句】4.Inmyopinion,weshould...5.You'dbetter...6.Youaren'tsupposedto...7.Let'sdo...8.Isuggestthatyouhavearest.9.Itotallyagreewithyou.10.I'mafraidyoucan'tgiveitup.第27页【结尾句】11.Ibelievewecan...12.Iwishyoucanobeythetrafficrules.13.Pleasetakeaction!第28页典例剖析HowtoEncourageStudentstoReadMore提醒：现在很多中学生只重视文化课学习，而忽略经过课外阅读去提升自己文学素养。请以“HowtoEncourageStudentstoReadMore”为题写一篇短文，谈谈应该怎样勉励中学生多读书。要求：1.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整齐，词数不少于60个；2.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，不然以零分计。第29页1.文体：本文是要求介绍怎样勉励中学生多读书，文体属于说明文；2.时态：写作时主要使用普通现在时；3.人称：介绍学生们读书现实状况用第三人称，介绍提议时用第一人称；4.写作关键点：①介绍学生们读书现实状况；②给出读书提议；③总结作者观点。5.词数：不少于60词，不得出现真实人名、校名。审题指导第30页HowtoEncourageStudentstoReadMoreToday,manystudentsonlyfocusontheirgrades.Theyusuallyspendlittletimeonout-of-classreading.

Inmyopinion,it'snecessaryforstudentstoreadbooksafterclass.Andinordertoencouragestudentstodomorereading,hereissomeadvice.First,Ithinkstudentsshouldmakegooduseoftheirtimeatschoolsothattheycanhavetimeforreading.Second,readinge-booksorsecond-handbookscansavetheircosts.Lastbutnotleast,getintoahabitofdoingone-hourreadingeveryday.

Allinall,Ibelievethesetipswillhelpalotifstudentsfollowthem.普通习作第31页1.Theyusuallyspendlittletimeonout-of-classreading.（用spare…for改写句子）_______________________________________________________句子升格Theyusuallysparelittletimeforout-of-classreading.第32页2.It'snecessaryforstudentstoreadbooksafterclass.（用不定式做主语改写句子）_____________________________________________________3.Ibelievethesetipswillhelpalotifstudentsfollowthem.（用makeadifference改写句子）________________________________________________________________________________Toreadbooksafterclassisnecessaryforstudents.Ibelievethesetripwillmakeadifferencealotifthestudentsfollowthem.第33页HowtoEncourageStudentstoReadMoreToday,manystudentsonlyfocusontheirgrades.Theyusuallyspendlittletimeonout-of-classreading.Inmyopinion,readingbooksafterclassisnecessaryforstudents.Andinordertoencouragestudentstodomorereading,hereissomeadvice.First,Ithinkstudentsshouldmakegooduseoftheirtimeatschoolsothattheycanhavetimeforreading.Second,readinge-booksorsecond-handbookscansavetheircosts.Lastbutnotleast,getintoahabitofdoingone-hourreadingeveryday.Ibelievethesetipswillmakeadifferenceifstudentsfollowthem.范文升格第34页SaveWater提醒：水对人类至关主要，但现在水污染变得越来越严重，工厂随意把污水排入河流、湖泊中，滥砍滥伐造成森林面积降低，水土流失严重，深入加重了水资源短缺，作为中学生我们，应该怎么办？请以“SaveWater”为题写一篇短文，谈谈你看法。要求：1.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整齐，词数不少于60个；2.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，不然以零分计。写作练兵第35页SaveWater

Waterisveryimportanttous.Butmanyfactoriespourpollutedwaterintoriversandlakes.It'sbadfortheenvironment.Peoplecutdownsomanytreesthatsoilandwaterbecomelessandless.Whatshouldwedo?Firstly,weshouldtakeashowerquicklyandturnoffthetapintimesothatwecansavemuchwater.Secondly,weshouldlearntorecyclewaterasmuchaspossible,forexample,afterwashingourfaces,wecanusethewatertosweepthefloor.Finally,wecanholdsomeeventsorgivespeechestoletpeopleknowtheimportanceofsavingwater.It'severyone'sdutytosavewater.第36页类型三梦想计划第37页

近5年云南中考针对梦想计划类作文共考查2次，考查角度包含：省卷“MyPlanfortheComingSchoolYear”，曲靖“IfIAma(an)________”。都是对未来畅想，要求学生依据自己想法写一篇计划类作文。话题剖析第38页【开头句】1.Ibelievemylifeinfuturewillbe...2.He/Shewantstobe...whenhe/shegrowsup.3.Ifyouwanttomakeyourdreamcometrue,youshould...第39页【中间句】4.First,...second,...finally,... 5.Weshould/aresupposedto...6.Everyonecan... 7.intend/plantodo8.begoingtodo 9.decidetodo10.determinetodo 11.determinetodo12.makeupone’smindtodo 13.Howtimeflies!14.Ifwecandoitastherules,ourdreamwillcometruesoonerorlater.第40页【结尾句】15.WhenIgrowup,Iwantto...16.I’mlookingforwardto...17.Ihopewecan...18.Wherethere‘sawill,there’saway.第41页典例剖析APlanforHowtoAchieveMyDream提醒：难忘初中三年生活即将结束，开学后同学们将进入人生另一个阶段,踏入梦想开始地方——高中，相信大家都已经提前制订好了学习计划，为实现目标和理想而奋斗，请以“APlanforHowtoAchieveMyDream”为题，写一篇英文短文。要求：1.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整齐，词数不少于60个；2.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，不然以零分计。第42页1.文体：依据提醒内容可知本文要求介绍实现梦想计划，所以文章为说明文；2.时态：以普通未来时态为主；3.人称：全文都会写我梦想相关内容，人称应该为第一人称；4.写作关键点：本文适合三段式写法，①介绍自己目标和理想是什么；②介绍怎样实现这个目标或者理想；③总结；5.词数：不少于60词，不得出现真实姓名、校名。审题指导第43页APlanforHowtoAchieveMyDreamSoonIwillsaygoodbyetomymiddleschoollifeandbecomeahighschoolstudent.Mydreamistoenterafamousuniversity.SoIhavemadeaplanformyfuture.First,Iwillworkhardatallmysubjects.Second,Iwilltrymybesttohelpmyclassmates.IthinkIcangetonwellwithallofthem.Third,Iwilltakepartindifferentkindsofactivitiesandtakemoreexercisetokeephealthy.IamsureIwillmakegreaterprogressinhighschool.Wherethere‘sawill,there’saway.AslongasIsticktomydream,Iwillachieveitoneday.普通习作第44页1.Second,Iwilltrymybesttohelpmyclassmates.（用asmuchaspossible改写句子）_______________________________________________________句子升格Second,Iwillhelpmyclassmatesasmuchaspossible.第45页2.AslongasIsticktomydream,Iwillachieveitoneday.（用besure和cometrue改写句子）_____________________________________________AslongasIsticktomydream,itissuretocometrueoneday.______________第46页

AplanforHowtoAchieveMyDreamSoonIwillsaygoodbyetomymiddleschoollifeandbecomeahighschoolstudent.Mydreamistoenterafamousuniversity.SoIhavemadeaplanformyfuture.First,Iwillworkhardatallmysubjects.Second,Iwillhelpmyclassmatesasmuchaspossible.IthinkIcangetonwellwithallofthem.Third,Iwilltakepartindifferentkindsofactivitiesandtakemoreexercisetokeephealthy.IamsureIwillmakegreaterprogressinhighschool.Wherethere'sawill,there'saway.AslongasIsticktomydream,itissuretocometrueoneday.范文升格第47页MyWeekendPlan周末是我们在繁忙学习后放松时间，一次野营，或是一次聚会……这些都会让我们感到惬意，忘记周内疲惫。请你以“MyWeekendPlan”为题写一篇英语短文，与同学们分享自己周末计划。要求：1.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整齐，词数不少于60个；2.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，不然以零分计。写作练兵第48页MyWeekendPlanTheweekendiscoming.Here'smyplanfortheweekend.OnSaturdaymorning,I'mgoingtowatchTVtorelaxmyselfafteralongweek'sstudy.Ilikewatchingcomediesandcartoons.OnSaturdayafternoon,I'mgoingtoabookstoretobuysomebooks.Readingisoneofmyhobbies.OnSunday,I'mgoingtovisitmygrandparentsbecauseImissthemverymuch.I'llhelpthemdosomehousework.AfterIcomeback,I'lldomyhomeworktogetreadyforthenextweek.IamsurethatIwillhaveawonderfulweekendwiththisplan.第49页类型四说明介绍第50页近5年云南中考针对说明介绍类作文考查了2次，考查角度包含：昆明“ILove”和昆明“AWonderful”,昆明都是以半命题形式来考查，学生可选择自己擅长题材来写。话题剖析第51页【开头句】1.AsfarasIknow,it...2.Studiesshowthat...3.Iusedto...4.Nowadays,moreandmorepeoplepaymoreattentionto...5.I'dliketotellyousomethingabout...6.Everythinghastwosides.Ithasbothadvantagesanddisadvantages.第52页【中间句】7.Nowadays,itisgenerally/commonlybelievedthat...,butIwonderthat...8.Myfavoriteseasonis...9.Letmeintroduce...10.Oneofthemostimportantthingsis...11.Manisnowfacingabigproblem...whichisbecomingmoreandmoreserious.第53页【结尾句】12.Peopleusedto...however,thingsarequitedifferenttoday.13.Inshort,wemustworkhardtomaketheworldabetterplace.第54页典例剖析MyFriendsLiketheDifferentMusic提醒：音乐是沟通桥梁，是心灵纽带和梦想承载，所以很多人都喜欢听音乐，不过不一样人喜爱音乐格调和种类也不尽相同。介绍你几个朋友喜欢音乐种类及理由。请以“MyFriendsLiketheDifferentMusic”为题写一篇文章。要求：1.语言流畅，书写规范，卷面整齐，词数不少于60个；2.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，不然以零分计。第55页1.文体：本文要求介绍朋友喜欢音乐，故文体为说明文；2.时态：介绍朋友喜欢音乐时，叙述现在事情时用普通现在时，叙述过去事情时用普通过去时；3.人称：文中介绍几位朋友喜欢音乐，以第三人称为主；4.写作要求：①点明主题不一样人喜欢不一样音乐；②介绍几位朋友喜欢不一样音乐；③总结。5.词数：不少于60词，不得出现真实姓名、校名。审题指导第56页MyFriendsLikeDifferentMusicMusicisimportantinourlife.Anddifferentpeopleenjoydifferentmusic.NowIwillintroducesomeofmyfriendsandtheirfavoritemusic.LiHualikesmusicthatshecandanceto,soshelikespopmusicverymuch.AndWangLihongisherfavoritesinger.ZhangMinglikesjazzmusic,becausehethinksitisakindof

musicthatisverycool.TangShanisanoutgoinggirl.Shelikesrockmusicbecauseitisveryexciting.普通习作第57页HerfavoritesingerisWangFeng,becauseshelikessingerswhowritetheirownsongs.Hiswonderfullyricsoftenmakeherthinkalot.ZhaoTianisaquietgirl.Shelikeslisteningtosoftmusicthatcanmakeherrelaxed.

Inaword,musicreallymakesourlifebeautiful.第58页1.Musicisimportantinourlife.（用play...part改写句子）_______________________________________________________句子升格Musicplaysanimportantpartinourlife.第59页2.Hiswonderfullyricsoftenmakesherthinkalot.（用定语从句改写句子）_______________________________________________________3.Inaword,musicreallymakesourlifebeautiful.（用enrich改写句子）_______________________________________________________Thewonderfullyricsthathewroteoftenmakeherthinkalot.Ina