2013年高考复习__英语写作实考题练习.doc

2013年高考复习 英语写作实考题练习 2012年高考英语（全国新课标卷） 写作部分 第四部分：写作(共两节，满分35分)第一节 短文改错(共10小题；每小题i分，满分10分)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。i learned early in life that i had to be more patient and little aggressive. from the time i was about four until i was about six, i destroyed each of my toy. i was happy when the toys worked, but when things did wrong, i got angry and broke it. for a while parents bought me new toys. but before long they began to see which was happening. when i tear apart my fifth birthday toy train, my father said, thats it. no more toys to you. my punishment lasted a year. meanwhile, i found out that with more patience i must make my toys to last my attitude changed from then on.第二节 书面表达(满分25分) 假定你是李华，从互联网上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡(singapore)举办夏令营，欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。 内容主要包括: 1. 自我介绍(包括英语能力)； 2. 参加意图(介绍中国、了解其他国家)； 3. 希望获准。 注意: 1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 邮件开头和结尾已为你写好。_参考答案： 第四部分: 写作第一节i learned early in life that i had to be more patient and little aggressive. from lessthe time i was about four until i was about six, i destroyed each of my toy. i toyswas happy when the toys worked, but when things did / wrong, t got angry and went/gobroke it. for a while parents bought me new toys. but before long they began them myto see which was happening. when i tear apart my fifth birthday toy train, my what torefather said, thats it. no more toys to you. my punishment lasted a year. formeanwhile，i found out that with more patience i must make my toys to last.my attitude changed from then on.第二节 书面表达内容要点1. 个人情况(包括英语能力)2. 参加意图(介绍中国、了解其他国家)3. 希望获准4. 合适的结尾one possible versiondear sir or madam,im li hua, a middle school student from china. i read the announcement of the summercamp that you have posted on the internet and i am interested in it. i know that you welcomestudents from different countries and id like to take part in it. ive been learning english for10 years, and i speak fluent english. what is more, iji be able to tell students from othercountries about china and learn about their countries as well. i hope i will be accepted as amember of your summer camp.looking forward to your reply!regards,li hua 2012年高考英语（浙江卷） 写作部分 第三部分:写作（共二节,满分40分）第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10 处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写上该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10 处，多者（从第11 处起）不计分。 two years before, i traveled to brazil and i rented for a car. unfortunate, i had an accident and hit another car, and i needed to stay in a hospital for at least two week. 1 called my parents, so i did not tell them what had happened. i knew that they will be worried about myself because iwas so farther away, and that my mother would not sleep if she knew. therefore, i told theminterested stories and how i was enjoying brazil as a result, nobody knew truth. i still think thatit was the right thing to do.第二节：书面表达（满分30分）你校正在进行”英语读书周”活动，该活动要求学生摘录名言佳句（quote）并相互交流。以下是某同学摘录的句子：”your future depends on many things but mostly on you”：请按下列要求用英语写一篇100-120个词的短文：1 针对摘录句中的观点谈谈你的看法；2 举例说明理由注意：短文的开头已给出（不计词数） in the english reading week, one of my classmates recommended a quote to us, which goes like this: “your future depends on many things, but mostly on you. ” _参考答案： 第一节 短文改错two years before, i traveled to brazil and i rented for a car. unfortunate, i had an accident and ago 去掉 unfortunately hit another car, and i needed to stay in a hospital for at least two week. 1 called my parents, so i did weeks but not tell them what had happened. i knew that they will be worried about myself because i would me was so farther away, and that my mother would not sleep if she knew. therefore, i told them far interested stories and how i was enjoying brazil. as a result, nobody knew truth. i still think that interesting the it was the right thing to do.第二节one possible student version in the english reading week, one of m classmates recommended a quote to us which goes like this : “your future depends on many things but mostly on you. “ i cant agree more with this view. its true that our future is determined by many things, such as opportunities and help from others, but our own attitude, determination, and hard work play a more important role. in other words, we are the master of our own future. take abraham lincoln, for example. he was born in a poor family, and only received a limited education in his childhood. yet through his painstaking efforts, he changed not only his own fate but also the history of america. even to this day, lincoln is regarded as one of the most inspiring figures in the world. therefore, i firmly believe that our future is in our own hands. 2012年高考英语（四川卷） 写作部分第三部分 写作（共两节，满分50分）第一节 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个沟（）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正；此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词。并也用斜线划掉。此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意：原行没有错的不要改dear mom, mothers day is coming. im sorry that i am abroad 66._and cant send your flowers, so im writing to you. 67._ mom, i know i have never expressed my thank to you 68._before. but on today, at this special time, i just want to tell 69._you loudly: i love you, mom! thank you so much by not 70._only giving me life, but also teach me how to be a good 71._person. thank you for all you had done for me. mom, though 72._i may often say it, i do love you. nobody can take your 73,_part in my heart. whenever i am, i will always love you. 74._ hope you good health and much happiness every day! 75._ your little girl, jennifer第二节 书面表达（满分35分） 假如你是大学一年级新生李华。开学之初，你的英语老师ms li希望了解每位同学的英语学习情况，并征求教学建议。请按以下要点用英语给她写一封信。1. 对英语学习的认识；2. 自己目前的英语水平；3. 自己英语学习存在的主要问题；4. 对英语教学的两点建议。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 信的开头和结尾已给出。dear ms li,im very happy to have you as our english teacher. _ thank you! li hua参考答案： 第三部分 写作（共两节，满分50分）第一节 短文改错 66. 正确 67. your改为you 68. thank改为thanks 69. 去掉on 70. by改为for71. teach改为teaching 72. had改为have 73. may后加not 74. whenever改为 wherever 75. hope改为wish第二节 书面表达one possible version:dear ms li, i am very happy to have you as our english teacher. as the world is becoming a global village, english is getting more and more important, so mastering english means we can see the world through a new window. my english is just ok and the two main problems in my study are that i feel it difficult to learn words by heart, and that i often feel nervous when speaking english. i really hope that you can give me good advice on how to memorize new words. another suggestion is to give us more chances to practice speaking. i believe we can make much progress in english with your help. thank you! li hua 2012年高考英语（山东卷） 书面表达部分 第四部分 书面表达（共两节，满分45分）第一节 阅读表达（共5小题；每小题3分，满分15分）阅读下面短文并回答问题，然后将答案写在答题卡相应的位置上（请注意76至79四个小题后面的词数要求）。1 ashley powers mother bought a computer for her when she was eight. when she was thirteen, she was surfing the internet regularly, but she couldnt find anywhere for teenagers to meet and talk. and one day she thought, “if i had my own website, id make it a really interesting site for teenagers.”2 so, when ashley was sixteen, she launched her own website, called goosehead. she had no idea how big a success it would be, but three years later, the site was the most successful teen site in the usa! it was getting 100,000 hits every day, and ashley had about 30 employees.3 after a few years, the website closed down. then ashley, who lives in los angeles, was asked to write a book called the goosehead guide to life. the book is about how to design a website and start a business. it begins with a section called “all about ashley”, where ashley tells readers what it is like to be the boss of a company then you are only sixteen. “i was so happy. but it was crazy in a lot of ways. i got very stressed. i mean, i was only sixteeni didnt even have a car! if you were sixteen and you had your own company, youd be stressed, too!”4 in an interview ashley gave advice to teenagers who wanted to stare their own business, “just be strong and have your dreams and work hard at them. and dont listen when_, because i heard no a lot. just keep going until you hear yes!”76. for what purpose did ashley create goosehead? (no more than 10 words)_77. what is the main idea of paragraph 2? (no more than 6 words)_78. according to paragraph 3, what did ashley do after goosehead closed down? (no more than 10 words)_79. how did ashley feel as a young boss of a company? (no more than 5 words)_80. fill in the blank in paragraph 4 with proper words._第二节 写作（满分30分）假设你是新华中学的学生李华，不久前在学校举办的英语竞赛中获得一等奖。校报请你写一篇稿件刊登在英文版面上，介绍你课外学习英语的经验。请根据以下提示用英语写一篇短文：1. 参加英语角的益处；2. 坚持写英语日记的作用；3. 英文阅读网站(enjoyreading)对你的帮助。注意：1.词数：120150； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考答案： 第四部分 书面表达（共两节，满分45分）第一节 阅读表达76. she wanted to create an interesting website for teenagers.77. ashleys goosehead was a big success.78. she wrote a book called the goosehead guide to life.79. she felt happy but stressed.80. people tell you that you cant do it. 第二节 写作one possible version:as a high school student, i consider english a very important subject. in order to learn it well, apart from english class, i took an active part in english corner and other after-class english activities, which benefit me a lot.in the english corner, i meet many friends, who share the same interest with me. besides, sometimes, some foreigners are glad to join us. by talking with them, my oral english improved a lot. i also find it useful to keep english diaries. i keep on doing it these years and it is helpful to my english. as a saying goes, practice makes perfect. only by practice will we make more progress.finally, some good english study websites contribute a lot to my improvement. through these websites, i can read some classic english passages, poems and stories. whats more, i can learn some learning skills and methodologies, which play an important part in my study process.all in all, every road leads to roma, but i believe hard work pays off. 2012年高考英语（天津卷） 写作部分第三部分： 写作第一节：阅读表达（共5小题；每小题2分，满分10分）阅读短文，并按照题目要求用英语回答问题。born in 1949, diana nyad took an early interest in swimming as a sport and was a florida state high school swimming champion. like many young athletes, she had olympic dreams, but a serious illness kept her from competing in the games. the disappointment didnt stop her from going forward. instead, she became interested in marathon swimming. a brilliant athlete, she was well-conditioned for spending long periods of time in the water. as a long-distance swimmer, she would compete against herself and the obstacles presented by distance, danger, cold, and exhaustion.for ten years nyad devoted herself to becoming one of the worlds best long-distance swimmers. in 1970, she swam a ten-mile marathon in lake ontario, setting the womens record for the course. in 1972 she set another record by swimming 102.5 miles from an island in the bahamas to the coast of florida. then she broke a third record when swimming around manhattan island in 1975.nyad attempted to swim the distance between florida and cuba in 1978. though the span of water is less than 100 miles wide, it is rough and dangerous. after battling the water for two days, she had to give for the sake of her own health and safety. even so, she impressed the world with her courage and strong desire to succeed. for nyad her strength of purpose was just as important as reading cuba. that is how she defined success. it did not matter that her swim came up short; she believed she had touched the other shore.when nyad ended her career as a swimmer, she continued to try new things-travelling the world as a reporter, writing books and giving public speeches about her life. diana nyad works to inspire others, just as she did when she swam the waters of the world.56. what prevented nyad from taking part in the olympic games? (no more than 5 words)_57. what does the underlined word “obstacles” mean? (1 word)_58. what achievement did nyad make in 1970? (no more than 10 words.)_59. why did nyad believe that she had touched the other shore? (no more than 10 words)_60. please explain how you are inspired by nyad. (no more than 20 words)_第二节：书面表达（满分25分）61. 假设你是李津，你的美国朋友chris就读于天津某国际学校。他熟悉中国文化，特别是戏曲文化。8月5日下午2：00在新落成的天津大剧院将上演越剧梁山伯与祝英台。请你根据以下提示，用英语给chris写一封电子邮件，邀请他一起观看演出。 *提出邀请并简述原因； *提出观剧后活动建议（如参观附近的博物馆或美术馆等） *请求对方回复注意： 1.请使用规范英语，词数不少于100； 2.可适当加入细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯； 3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：越剧：shaoxing opera 梁山伯与祝英台 butterfly lovers天津大剧院tianjin grand theaterdear chris, i have good news to tell you. _ yours, li jin 参考答案： 第三部分：写作第一节：阅读表达56. a serious illness (did).57. difficulties/problems/troubles/challenges.58. she swam a ten-mile marathon and set womens record. or: she swam a ten-mile marathon, setting the womens record. or: she set the womens record for a ten-mile marathon swimming.59. because she had tried her best (to fulfill the task). or: her strength of purpose was as important as reaching cuba.60. i am encouraged by her determination and strong will. or: i am inspired by her courage and strong desire to succeed. or: from her i learned that once we set a goal, we should try hard to achieve it. or: we should never give up in the face of difficulty/failure. or: we should never stop trying new things and we may achieve success in different fields.第二节：书面表达one possible version:dear chris, i have good news to tell you. ihavegoodnewstotellyou.aworldfamousshaoxingoperaplay,butterflylovers,willbeputoninthenewlybuilttianjingrandtheaterat2:00p.m.on5th,august.asfarasiknow,youareveryfamiliarwithchineseculture,especiallychineseopera.soyouaresuretoknowwe