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专四写作辅导 Instructor: 崔罗强Week 1第一节 写作要求及评分标准（一）测试要求(a) 要求根据所出的题目和列出的写作提纲或图表、数字统计表等(也附有写作提纲)写一篇200词左右的短文。能做到内容切题、完整、条理清楚，文章结构严谨，语法正确，语言通顺恰当。考试时间35分钟。(b) 写便条：要求根据提示写大约50-60词的通知、便条、请贴等。要求格式正确，语言得体。考试时间10分钟。（二）题型：本部分为主观试题，分两节：SectionA和SectionB。Section A：作文(Composition)本节是作文，题目主要属于记叙文、说明文或议论文的范围。Section B：写便条(Note-writing)本节是写便条。 测试目的：按照教学大纲的要求测试学生在基础阶段末期用英语书面表达思想的能力。（三）评分标准(a) 作文评分标准1. 本题满分为15分。 2. 阅卷标准共分五等：15分、14-12分、11-9分、8-6分及5-3分。 15分文章内容切题，表达思想清楚，行文通顺流畅；论证严密，论据充分，基本上无语言错误。 14-12分文章内容切题，表达思想清楚，语言比较通顺连贯，只有极少量语法错误。 11-9分文章内容基本切题。尚能表达中心思想，但说理不够清楚，文字连贯不够好；有少量语言错误。 8-6分基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。语言错误多。 5-3分文章条理不清，语言缺乏连贯，句子错误很多，或语言虽通顺流畅但完全偏题。(b) 便条写作评分标准与样卷1 评分标准根据2004年新版考试大纲，便条满分为10分，从格式、内容、语言以及语言得体性四方面进行评分。2010年专业四级便条写作评分标准评分构成分值要求扣分标准 日期 2右上角，April 22nd, 2007/22 April, 2007/Apr. 22, 2007/22/4/2007/4/22/2007/April 22nd/Apr. 22/凡不符合上述正确格式要求均扣1分。结束语和谦称在同一行，人名没写或用xx 表示扣1分，最多扣2分 称呼在日期下一行左侧，Dear Jimmy,/Dear Jimmy:/Jimmy: 结尾右下方，Truly yours,/Yours truly,/Yours sincerely,/Sincerely yours,/Yours,内容 3涵盖invited + declining+ explaining 少1点扣1分，最多3项内容扣3分语言 4语法、词法正确严重语法、词法错误扣1分，一个句子或同类错误扣1分，拼写等小错误2个扣1分，最多扣4分语言得体性 1总分在8分以上考虑加此分总字数50-60字（包括三部分格式）少于40或多于80字扣1分日期、称呼、结尾全左对齐也可：如：April 22,2007Dear Jimmy,I haveSincerely yours,Sally（四） 样卷分析Section B Note-writingWrite on Answer Sheet Two a note of about 50-60 words based on the following situation:Your classmate, Jimmy, is head of the universitys swimming club. He has invited you to join the club, but you like some other sport. Write him a note, declining his invitation and explaining why.Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness.(9 pts)April 22nd, 2007Dear Jimmy,Its very kind of you to invite me to join the universitys swimming club. I am most grateful to be asked. However, Ive already joined a basketball club. You know I like playing basketball very much. I am afraid I do not have enough time to take part in two sports. I am very sorry for that and really regret that I would miss such an excellent chance of enjoying swimming with you. Good luck to your club. Yours, Mike (7 pts)22 April, 2007Dear Jimmy,Thank you for your inviting me to participating in the universitys swimming club. But I regret to tell you that Im not able to join you, since I found myself more interested in the basketball club. I hope you will not be angry to me. Yours, Mike (5 pts)Dear Jimmy,Sorry! I couldnt take part in your university swimming club, because I more like football. I have to decline your invitation. What a pity! I am sure you will not be angry at me, because you are always my best friend.Sorry again! Yours, TomApril 22, 2007(3pts)Hello, Jimmy:Im shy to tell you I like other sport. So I dont take part in you club. You may ask : why? Not because other reasons, I interested more in pingpong and it is more cheaper. I think, except me, more people will support you. Tony第二节 实用写作模板I.致歉历年考题：(2007)Your classmate, Jimmy, is head of the universitys swimming club. He has invited you to join the club, but you like some other sports. Write him a note, declining his invitation and explaining why.范文： April 22nd, 2007Dear Jimmy,Its very kind of you to invite me to join the universitys swimming club. I am most grateful to be asked. However, Ive already joined a basketball club. You know I like playing basketball very much. Im afraid I do not have enough time to take part in two sports. I am very sorry for that and really regret that I would miss such an excellent chance of enjoying swimming with you. Good luck to your club. Yours, Kevin(2001) Yesterday you failed to turn up for the appointment with your teacher, Professor Wang. Write him a note of apology and make a request for another meeting. You should also suggest the time for the requested meeting.范文： May 15, 2001Dear Professor Wang, I am terribly sorry that I missed the appointment with you. Yesterday, my grandma suddenly went ill, and my parents were not in, so I had to take her to hospital. When I got to your office, it was too late, and you had already left. Please forgive me.I know youre busy these days, but I wonder if you could agree to meet me at 2oclock on Friday afternoon. Im looking forward to your early reply. Yours truly, Kevin道歉模板 题目分析：1. 因未能赴约而道歉Dear Miss Nancy, Much to my regret I was unable to keep my promise to attend your birthday party last Saturday, owing to the fact that my little son was suddenly taken ill early that day. Hoping to see you soon. Truly yours, Kevin2、因未能及时还书致歉Unable to return borrowed book on time Dear Kate， Excuse me for my long delaying in returning to you your “Robinson Crusoe” which I read through with great interest. I had finished reading the book and was about to return it when my cousin came to see me. Never having seen the book, She was so interested in it that I had to retain it longer. However, I hope that in view of the additional delight thus afforded by your book, you will overlook my negligence in not returning it sooner. Thanking you again for the loan. Sincerely yours, KevinUseful expressions:1). I must apologize for.2). I am very /really/extremely/awfully/terribly sorry about3). I hope you know how sorry I am not to be with you4). Much to my regret that I may not be able to keep my promise because5). I really regret that I cannot.II.邀请信历年考题：(2005)You have got 2 tickets to a concert given by a famous pop band /orchestra. Write a note to your friend, Hilda/Mike, describing briefly what it is and inviting her/him to come with you.范文：May 15, 2005Dear Mike,Ive got 2 tickets for a concert given by a famous pop band at our University Hall at 7 oclock this Saturday evening. I know pop music is your favorite, so Id like to invite you to take the convert with me. I believe youll enjoy it. Please call me as soon as possible.Yours sincerely, Kevin邀请模板 题目分析：Dear Jane, We have four tickets for a famous film shown at Guangming Cinema, The Longest Day, Friday, the ninth. Willyou join us? Well be looking for you at eight sharp Friday night in front of the cinema, so dont disappoint us! Warmest regards. Useful expressions:1). I am pleased to invite you to2). Is there any chance of your coming?3). I was wondering if you could come4). We sincerely/faithfully hope you can attend5). I would be very happy if you could comeIII. 咨询历年考题：(2006) You have got to know that your classmate, Michael, is organizing a week-end excursion for the class. And you are thinking of joining the trip. Write him a note expressing your interest in the excursion and asking for information on two details to the excursion.范文： April 23rd, 2006Dear Michael, Im glad to learn that youre organizing a weekend excursion for the class. I definitely want to go. Have you come up with where we go and how? Please let me know more details about it as soon as possible. What if we get together some time this evening to talk about it? I am looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Kevin（2002）You have heard that your friend , Jack , wishes to sell his walkman. Write him a note expressing your interest in it, asking him about its condition and offering a price for it.范文： May 15, 2002Dear Jack,Glad to learn that you wish to sell your walkman. As luck would have it. I want to buy a walkman to study English.I wonder if you could give me a description of the condition of your walkman. Id like to spend no more than 150 Yuan on it. What do you think of it?咨询模板 Useful expressions:1). I would appreciate very much if you can provide me with some suggestions on2). I would be grateful if you would be so kind as to provide me with certain details about3). I have read on the notice board that4). I just want to know specifically about5). I am eager to knowIV. 建议历年考题：（2009）Lily, your roommate, is looking for a part-time job in the coming summer vacation. You saw an ad for a private English tutor for a schoolboy. Write her a note , telling her what the job is and strongly recommending it to her.范文： April 18th, 2009Dear Lily,I happened to see an ad for a private English tutor for a schoolboy, and I think this information is useful for you. For you told me that you wanted to take a part-time job in the coming summer vacation. Tutoring a schoolboy is interesting, and of course you will be paid. Anyway, you will become a competent tutor, for you are excellent. I think you should accept it immediately.Yours sincerely, Kevin(2008) Jane, your classmate, is thinking of subscribing to an English-language newspaper. And you would like to recommend one to her. Write a note, telling her which newspaper it is and describing two features of the paper.范文： April 20th, 2008Dear Jane, I heard by chance that you are going to subscribe an English-language newspaper. Therefore, I would like to strongly recommend Sparks Weekly to you. Firstly, its contents renew every week with various aspects of latest information and knowledge. Secondly, it is learning-oriented and can do a lot of help for your study with a lot of exercises. I really think it is very suitable for you.Yours, Kevin(2000) Youve read on the notice board that the university library is looking for a part-time library assistant who can work at weekends. You think that your classmate, George, is a suitable person for this vacancy. Write him a note, telling him what you know about the vacancy and trying to persuade him to go for an interview.范文： May 15, 2000Dear George, Ive learned from the notice board that the university is looking for a part-time library assistant. Its a weekend job. I think its suitable for you since you are free at weekends. It will be a good experience for your future job application and it pays well. I hope you will take the interview and may you succeed. Yours sincerely, Kevin建议模板 V.留言历年考题：(2010) Your good friend, John, is thinking of organizing an end-of the-term party. Write him a note telling him that you like his idea and offer to help him. You have to be specific about how you can help him.范文： April 17th, 2010Dear John,I happen to learn that you were throwing an end-of the-term party next week. Thats really a fascinating idea and Ive been expecting that for months. I have some balloons and ribbons at hand and I can help you decorate the room. As for the music for the party, I have almost a hundred CDs, so you can drop by when you have time and get those you like. Yours sincerely, Kevin留言模板 题目分析：Lynn, Professor Wang wishes to see you this afternoon to talk about your thesis. You are requested to see him in his office at 4:00 p.m. Your mother called at 9:00 a.m. and said that she will not be able to come to see you tomorrow because she has to attend a meeting. Yours faithfully, LauraUseful expressions:1). Im happy to inform you that2). Would you do me a favor by3). A wishes to see you.4). Come to me whenever you have difficulties with5). If you would like to , pleaseVI.慰问历年考题：（2004）Your friend , Jane , has failed in the final exam, and is feeling very unhappy about it. Write a note to comfort her and give her some encouragement.范文： May 15, 2004Dear Jane, Im very sorry to hear that youve failed in the final exam and you are falling into a deep depression. I wish you could step out of it soon. Lets look forward, and the important thing now is to make good preparation for the next exam. I believe you will succeed. Yours faithfully, Kevin慰问模板 题目分析Dear Lily，I was sorry to learn that you were not successful in the examination. I feel you ought not to be unduly distressed at the result. You are still eligible to sit again for the exam and I am confident that this time next year, I shall be sending a letter, not of sympathy, but of congratulation. My kindest regards and best wishes.Sincerely Yours,LindaUseful expressions:1). Our deepest sympathy is with you.2). Our hearts are saddened by your loss.3). We wish to express our sympathy in your loss and to let you know that our thoughts are with you.4). I would like to express my sorrow atVII.祝贺历年考题：（2003）Your friend Clare has invited you to her house warming party this weekend. However, you will be away then. Write her a note politely declining her invitation and expressing your best wishes to her.范文： May 15, 2003Dear Clare, Congratulation on your moving into a new house and thanks a lot for your invitation to your house warming party this weekend. But I am so sorry to tell you that Ive to go to Beijing for business from this Wednesday to next Tuesday. What a pity for missing this party! But I sincerely hope you will enjoy the party.Sincerely Yours,Kevin祝贺模板 题目分析：Larry, Hearty congratulations on your marriage. Best wishes for a long and happy married life to you both. Would you like to come to dinner at my apartment on Sunday? My husband and I have prepared a special gift for you. Do come to find out the big surprise. LauraUseful expressions:1). Congratulations on your success/achievements!2). Heartiest congratulations upon your 3). Please allow me to congratulate you on.4). Please allow me to extend my hearty congratulations to you.5). I want to congratulate you with all my heart.VIII.致谢致谢模板 题目分析Shanshan,It was very kind of you to take so mush trouble to find me the book written by Lu Xun. Please accept my warmest thanks. I should be very happy to return your help and invite you to dinner at my apartment on Sunday. Please call me if you come. LindaUseful expressions:1).Many thanks for your2). Please accept my sincere appreciation for3). I am truly grateful to you for4). It was very nice/good/thoughtful5). I am most/extremely grateful toyou for your help.IX.请求请求模板 题目分析Dear Lynn,We are thinking to hold a meeting to discuss the problem of electricity shortage of our factory on 15 September. Would you please prepare a presentation on the possible solutions of the problem? Please call me if you are ready to make the presentation. Many thanks! Song YunUseful expressions:1).Im sorry to trouble, but nobody would come into my mind to help me except you.2). I would greatly appreciate it if you could help me.3). I would be very grateful if you could send me .4). We wonder if you could let us have .?5). Could you let me know something about it?X. 约会约会模板 题目分析 June 11, 2007You, as head of the company, are planning to hold a general meeting of the whole staff. You want