英语：Unit1《Friendship》sectionⅳwriting课件(新人教版必修1).ppt

Section ,Writing,原句 1,I wonder if its because I havent been able to be outdoors for so long that Ive grown so crazy about everything to do with nature. 我不知道这是不是因为我长期无法出门的缘故，我变得对一切 与大自然有关的事物都无比狂热。,点评,这个长句是由三个简单句合并而成： I wonder.,I havent been able to be outdoors for so long.,Ive grown so crazy about everything to do with nature. 合并之第一步 ： 由于句和句之间有“因为 所 以”的逻辑因果关系，可以用 because 将它们合并：Ive,grown so crazy about everything to do with nature because I,havent been able to be outdoors for so long.为了强调原因状语从 句，可以采用强调句结构“It is.that.”。,合并之第二步：句和句合并后的复合句作句中谓语 动词 wonder 的宾语，故可以用宾语从句将它们合并，且 wonder 后接宾语从句时一般用 if 引导。,仿写,我想知道是不是因为明天要考试，你才变得如此紧张。 (提示：紧张的 nervous),_ _,我想知道是不是因为天气突变才导致大量的鱼死亡。,_ _,I wonder if it is because there will be a test tomorrow that you,feel so nervous.,I wonder if it is because the weather changed suddenly that many,fish died.,原句 2,She found it difficult to settle and calm down in the hiding place, because she was concerned about whether they would be,discovered.她发现很难在躲藏处安顿和平静下来，因为她担心他 们是否会被发现。 点评,这个长句是由三个简单句合并而成：,She found it difficult to settle and calm down in the hiding,place.,She was concerned about something. Whether they would be discovered.,合并之第一步：句是说明句中 something 的具体内容，,故可用宾语从句将句和句合并起来。,合并之第二步：句和句合并后与句构成“因为 所以”的逻辑因果关系，可用连词 because 引导原因状语 从句，将它们合并起来。,仿写,我发现在这么冷的天开车有点不安全，因为路上已经结,冰了。(提示：结冰 freeze),_ _ 她认为她的老板很难相处，因为他总是看起来很严肃。,_ _,I find it dangerous to drive on such a cold day, because it is frozen,on the road.,She thinks it hard to get along with her boss, because he always,looks serious.,如何交友,本单元出现的相关词汇：,friendship (n.友谊), friend (n.朋友), calm (.) down (使平静 下来；使镇定下来), be concerned about (关心；挂念), go through (经历；经受), on purpose (故意), face to face (面对面地), partner (n.伙伴；合作者；合伙人), get/be tired of (对厌烦), get along with (与相处；进展), disagree (vi.不同意), grateful (adj.感激 的；表示谢意的), dislike (n.& vt.不喜欢；厌恶), join in (参加；,加入), communicate with ( 与沟通), have trouble with sb.( 与 某人有矛盾), help each other (互相帮助), end the friendship (结束 友谊),本单元出现的相关句式：,1I wonder if it is because.that.我想知道是不是因为,所以,2.so she made.her best friend.所以她把当作她,最好的朋友。,3We have become really good friends.我们已经成为了真正,的好朋友。,4Although I try to talk to., I still find it hard to make good friends with.尽管我尽力去和交谈，我仍发现和成为好 朋友很难。,5Here are some tips to help you.这里有一些帮助你的小建,议。,在基础写作中，有关如何交友的写作常以建议信的形式出 现。这类建议信通常是写信人针对收信人在交友过程中遇到的 问题提出建议或忠告，是书信的一种，属于应用文体。,Dear Xiaodong，,Some people like talking with others, but some people are shy., If you fall into the second group, it can be hard to make,friends.But you can change the situation.,What are you interested in ？ If you like basketball, for,example, you could talk with some of your classmates who like,basketball.The easiest way to start talking is to find something,you have in common.,If you are standing beside a group of your classmates, join,in their discussion if you know something about the subject they,are discussing.But if you dont, you shouldnt feel afraid to say, for example, “That sounds interesting.What is it about ？ ” Once you start talking to one person, it will get easier to talk,to others.,Find one person you have something in common with, and,once you become friends with him, his friends will start talking,to you too. Good luck!,Editor,结构分析：,第一段用两句话引出话题，并陈述了自己的观点。 第二、三、四段从三个方面分别提出自己的交友建议。 第五段表达自己的希望。,亮点点评：,1使用了大量高级词汇，如：make friends, be interested in,join in, have something in common 等。,2使用了大量条件状语从句，如句。 3使用了不定式结构，如句。,4使用了句型“It getsadj.to do sth.”，如句。,在写有关如何交友的建议信时，应具体点明写信的目的、 建议的内容、提出建议的理由和根据，理由要合情合理，语气 一定要礼貌。,建议信的正文通常采取“三段式结构”：,首段(Topic sentenceyour point of view)：一般指明建议的,前提和事情的原委，对自己的立场作一些解释。,中段(Bodyyour advice)：围绕问题，结构清晰、科学委婉 地提出有针对性的建议。注意充分考虑对方的实际情况，选择 得体用语。切忌用语生硬强制，泛泛而谈。,尾段(Conclusionyour wishes)：提出对对方的美好希望。,必背词汇,friendly (adj.友好的), precious (adj.珍贵的), valuable (adj.有 价值的), get to know sb.(认识某人), know sb. really well (熟知某 人), make friends with sb. (和某人交朋友), a close friend (一个亲 密的朋友), trust each other (互相信任), share.with sb. (和某人分 享), keep in touch with sb. (和某人保持联系),常用结构词,常用句式,1Here are my suggestions on how to.这些是我关于的,建议。,2Suggestions on.can be listed as follows.关于的建议,列举如下。,3 The ways for you to.can be suggested as follows. 对 你,做的方法建议如下。,4In my opinion, you should.在我看来，你应该 5My advice is.我的建议是 6I think/believe.我认为/相信,7Im afraid that.恐怕,8I advise you to.我建议你 9I dont think.我不认为,10Dont worry that.不要担心,11I agree/I dont agree