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大学英语四级考试大学英语四级考试 应试策略应试策略 CET-4CET-4 Brief Introduction 考试时间: 125 分数: 710 及格:NO 成绩报告单:220 口语报考资格:550 六级报考线: 425 样卷结构、各部分答题时间和所用答题卡 样卷结构试题内容答题时间答题卡 Part Writing 30 minutes Answer Sheet 1 Part Reading Comprehension (Skimming and Scanning) 15 minutes Part Listening Comprehension 35 minutes Answer Sheet 2 Part Reading Comprehension (Reading in Depth) 25 minutes Part Cloze 15 minutes Part Translation5 minutes 考试时间安排 v8:50-9:00 收音机调试，发答题卡 v9:00-9:30 作文 （30 min) v9:30 发试题册 v9:30-9:45 快速阅读 (15 min) v9:45-10:00 收答题卡一（作文、快速阅读） 最后调试试音，准备听力（预览选项） v10:00-10:35 听力 （35 min) 注题目前没有指令 v10:35-11:30 选词填空、仔细阅读、完形填空 v11:30 翻译 （5 min) v11:35 全体起立，收答题卡二和试题册 试试卷构成测试测试 内容测试题测试题 型分值值比例 听力理解听力对话短对话多项选择 35% 长对话多项选择 听力短文短文理解多项选择 短文听写复合式听写 阅读理解 仔细阅读 理 解 篇章阅读理解多项选择 35% 篇章词汇理解 或短句问答 选词填空 或短句问答 快速阅读理解是非判断+句子填空或 其他 完型填空 或改错 完型填空 或改错 多项选择 或错误辨认并改正 10% 写作和翻译译写作短文写作 20% 翻译中译英 写作和翻译 写作和翻译部分考核学生用英语进行书面 表达的能力。 写作部分要求考生用英语进行短文写作， 思想表达准确，意义连贯、无重大语法错 误。 翻译部分要求考生用正确的语法结构和符 合英语习惯的表达，将单句中的汉语译成 英语。 写作部分考核的技能 A 思想表达 1 表达中心思想 2 表达重要或特定信息 3 表达观点、态度等 B 篇章组织 4 围绕所给的题目叙述、议论或描述，突出重点 5 连贯地组句成段，组段成篇 C 语言运用 6 运用恰当的词汇 7 运用正确的语法 8 运用合适的句子结构 9 使用正确的标点符号 10 运用衔接手段表达句间关系（如对比、原因、结果、程度、目的 等） D 写作格式 11 运用正确的符合英语表达习惯的写作格式 四级作文题评分原则 1.CET作文题采用总体评分 (Global Scoring)方法。阅卷人就总的印象给出奖励 分(Reward Scores)，而不是按照语言点的 错误数目扣分。 2.从内容和语言两个方面对作文进行综合 判断。要考虑作文是否切题，是否充分表 达思想，也要考虑是否用英语清楚而合适 地表达思想，也就是考虑语言上的错误是 否造成理解上的障碍。 评分标准 1.作文满分为15分。 2. 阅卷标准分为五等：2分、5分、8分、11分、14分。 3.评分标准： 2分条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子 有错误，且多数为严重错误 5分基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差，有较多的 严重语言错误。 8分基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强 连贯，语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。 11分切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯、但有少量语言 错误 14分切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺、连贯，基本上 无语言错误，仅有个别小错。 （注：字数不足应酌情扣分。白卷，作文与题目毫不相关， 或只有几个鼓励的词而无表达思想，则给0分。） Part V Writing (30 minutes) Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a Campaign Speech. You should write at least 120 words and base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below: 1.你认为自己具备了什么条件(能力、性格、爱好等)可以胜任学 生会主席的工作 2.如果当选,你将为本校同学做些什么 A Campaign Speech Today I am very glad to run for the president of the Students Union. I am junior in Chemical Department. Since I came into the university, I have always been the monitor of my class. I have done a very good job for my classmates, and my classmates and my teacher all give me a good praise. I am good at communication and organizing. And I like to help others. Moreover, I have a variety of hobbies, for example, playing basketball, playing football, playing table tennis, etc. I am sure that I am qualified for this position. If I become the president, I will try my best to do well. I will organize some suitable activities for you. I will do many things for you to reach your demands as well. I sincerely hope you will give me a chance, and please believe me that I will be a good president. Thank you. 真题作文题目 Due Attention Should Be Given to Spelling (2010.6) Creating a Green Campus (2009.12) Free Admission to Museums (2009.6) Limiting the Use of Disposable Plastic Bags (2008.12) Recreational Activities (2008.6) What Electives to Choose (2007.12) Welcome to Join in Our Club (2007.6) On the Spring Festival Gala (2006.12) On Students Selecting Lectures (2006.6) Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourism? (2005.12) 1.说明利弊题型（2009年6月 ） Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Free Admission to Museums. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below. 1. 越来越多的博物馆免费开放，目的是 什么 2. 也会带来一些问题 3. 你的看法 2008年6月写作真题 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Recreational Activities. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below. 1. 娱乐活动多种多样 2. 娱乐活动可能使人们受益，也可能有危 害性 3. 作为大学生我的看法 说明利弊题型模板1 Nowadays many people prefer (_) because it plays a significant role in our daily life. Generally speaking, its advantages can be seen as follows. On one hand, (_).One the other hand,(_). But every sword has two blades. The negative aspects are also apparent. One of the prominent disadvantages is that (_).To make matters worse,(_). Through the above analysis, I believe that The positive aspects far outweighs its negative aspects. Whatever effects it has, one thing is certain,(_) itself is neither good nor bad. It is the uses which is put on it that determines its value to our society. 说明利弊题型模板2 There is no consensus among people as to the view of (_). The opinions vary from person to person. Some people hold the idea that (_).A case in point is that (_). On the other hand, other may have a quite different view. According to them, (_).The most typical example is that (_). Weighing the pros and cons of these arguments, I am inclined to agree with the latter. Admittedly, the former point of view seems reasonable in saying to some extent, but (_) is more convincing. 相似预测 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Free Admission to Parks. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below. 1.越来越多的公园免费开放，目的是什 么 2.也会带来一些问题 3.你的看法 范文 Free Admission to Parks (1)To encourage people to go outside and relax, a mounting number of parks offer free admission now. People benefit from it especially during these tough economic times. (2)With free entry, more people will have opportunity for affordable vacations for families, taking pleasure in the natural landscape. Fresh air and landscape in the parks are good for people. (3)However, too many people flocking into the parks might not be so good for the parks. (4)For example, some visitors leave the garbage behind, which may cause environmental pollution. Peoples barbeques and stamping will also bring damage to the grassland and other greeneries in the parks. (5)As a university student, Im favor of free admission to the parks. Free entry to parks not only saves peoples culture expenditure, but also makes things fairer- people like the poor and students can go to the parks frequently as well. (6)On the other hand, visitors should be informed to preserve the environment while enjoying the beauty of the nature. 点评 （1）开门见山，指出现象及目 的 （2）进一步说明公园免费开放 的好处 （3）转折，说明公园免费可能 带来的问题 （4）举例说明 （5）表明自己的看法 （6）说明公园在免费开放时应 注意的事项 相似预测 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of The Internet. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below. 1. 有人认为网络可以让学习、工作更有 效率 2. 有人认为网络让青少年沉迷，影响学习 3. 我的看法 The Internet (1) In the era of information and technology, the Internet has played an important role in our society. (2) However, peoples opinions are still divided on this point. (3) Those who are in favor of the Internet claim that it has a lot of advantages.(4) Firstly, information searching is no longer a tough job with the help of all kinds of search engines. (4)Secondly, we can contact friends or business partners via e-mails or software such as Internet Meeting and Yahoo Messenger. (3)Those who are opposed to the Internet hold that its disadvantages are numerous. (5) In the first place, the Internet costs considerable time, money and energy, especially for those with less self-control.(5) In the second place, increasing young people are indulged in online games and unhealthy information, which are extremely harmful to their development. (6) In my opinion, its (7) pros outweigh the cons. The past twenty years witnessed the fast development of the Internet along with the national economy. A bright future is awaiting us if we make good use of the Internet. (1)开门见山，引出大背景 （2）以however转折说明人们的观点有分歧 （3）用定语从句表示正反方，两者遥相呼 应，对比鲜明 （4）分两点详述网络的优点。“搜索引擎”， “邮件或软件” （5）分两点详述网络的缺点：浪费时间、 金钱和精力；沉迷网络影响未来发展。 （6）提出自己的观点 （7）两点词语：利大于弊 2.“现象+原因+解决方法”题型 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Due Attention Should Be Given to Spelling. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below. 1.如今不少学生在英语学习中不重视拼写 2.出现这种现象的原因是 3.为了改变这种状况，我认为 “现象+原因+解决方法”题型模 板 With the development of the society, with the advent of (_),we have to face a problem that (_). What are the reasons for it? To start with,(_). Moreover, (_).Furthermore,(_). In view of the seriousness of the problem, effective measures should be taken. For one thing, it is high time that people all over China realized the importance of (_); for another, the government should issue laws and regulations to put the situation under control. 相似预测 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of College Students Job Hunting. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below. 1.近年来出现了大学生就业难的现象 2.产生这种现象的原因（如大学生追求的目标过 高，专业不对口等） 3.如何解决这一问题（改变就业观念，大学生再 培训等） College Students Job Hunting In recent years, college students find it increasingly difficult to get a job. It sounds strange since young college students are usually intelligent, well-educated and eager to bring their talent into full play. Then what underlies the strange phenomenon? There are several reasons for this. To begin with, nowadays college students aim too high. All they want are “good” jobs which could offer good salary, comfortable working conditions, high social status among others. Consequently, most college students are unwilling to accept vacant jobs they consider not “good” enough. Another reason is that there is a big gap between the majors some students study in school and the demands of vacant jobs. So companies think some students are not fit for the jobs. Solution to the problem requires efforts on both the society and the students. The companies should value the students talent and knowledge while the latter should not merely aim at material gains. They should be down-toearth in building up their career. Furthermore, they should face their weak points so as to improve themselves and be more competent. An announcement to welcome students to join to a club Welcome to our club 本社团的主要活动 参加本社团的好处 如何加入本社团 Welcome to Our Club 第一段表明写作目的: Welcome to join our English-learning club. A wide range of activities and countless surprises are waiting for you to explore. 第二段：介绍主要活动和好处: We not only provide students with opportunities to appreciate English movies, such as The Lord of Ring, My Best Friends Wedding, but also hold English speech contests and English corners in order to encourage our students to spare no effort to learn English well, and therefore, make our students capable to find decent jobs after graduation, confronting unprecedented fierce job competition. After joining our club, you can also have accesses to some oral English courses, which are mainly taught by English native speakers, for free. 具体化在名词复数后加such as 本段成功地运用了扩句的方法 +目的状语in order to_, and therefore,_ +伴随状语 Confronting unprecedented fierce job competition, 第三段表示感谢和期待: Words fail me when I want to express my gratitude to you for reading through this announcement. I am looking forward to your decision to join us. If you would like to join our club, please contact us by dialing 2293878856. 3.对比选择型 模版例文： 名校校园正成为旅游新热点 校园是否应对游客开放，人们看法不同 我认为 Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourists? 对比选择型模板 When it comes to （谈论主题）, there is no complete agreement among people. Some people take for granted that, however, others maintain that. Those people who hold the first opinion believe that +观点1. In addition, they insist that +观点1理由。 However, still others think differently. In their opinion+观点2. Besides, they argue that +观点2理由 。 Weighing up these two arguments, I prefer the former/ latter one. For one thing+理由1. For another+ 理由2. Considering these, I may conclude 范文 When it comes to whether the university campus should be open to tourists, there is no complete agreement among people. Some people take it for granted that university campus should embrace tourists across the country. However, others maintain that the university campus should be closed to tourists. Those people who hold the first opinion believe that refusing tourists is contradicting universities openness of spirit. In addition, they insist that no university has the right to reject tourists to enter its grounds because it is public land. However, still others think differently. In their opinion, too many tourists will add a burden to the security of the university. Besides, they argue that these tourists will destroy the quiet environment and influence students normal study. Weighing up these two arguments, I prefer the former opinion. For one thing, by visiting the university, high school students can experience the campus atmosphere and be stimulated to make a better preparation for the college entrance exam. For another, a university is a public place and should impart the spirit of openness. Considering these, I may reasonably conclude that the university campus should welcome all tourists. 4.观点论证型 模版例文： 社会上存在许多不诚实现象 诚实利人利己，做人应该诚实 It Pays to Be Honest 观点论证型模板 Nowadays, there still exists +与论点相冲突想 象. However+文章论点. The following reasons can support the argument. Undoubtedly, 论据1,进一步说明论据1. Furthermore, 论据2. For example, 支持论据2 的事例. In addition, 论据3. All mentioned above tell us that 重申观点. Therefore, we should 正确态度或做法. 范文 Nowadays, there still exist many dishonest phenomena, such as cheating, overcharging, producing or selling fake commodities. However, in the long run, dishonesty can bring many disadvantages while it pays to be honest. The following reasons can support the argument. Undoubtedly, being honest is not only beneficial to others but also to ourselves. If you are honest, those who associate with you will certainly profit from you and in turn you will win trust and respect from them. Furthermore, honesty can help build up a more stable and harmonious society. For example, Singapore, which is a society of trust whothiness, has a comparatively low criminal rate. In addition, being honest is essential for a countrys survival in the modern world, since only an honest country would have won support from other countries if it were in trouble. All mentioned above tell us that it pays to be honest. Only in an honest society can people fully enjoy their life. Therefore, we should foster the spirit of honesty and let dishonesty have no place to stay in our society. 应用文类型 四级考试中的应用文一般会给出一个特定的情景，要求考生根据该情景 写一封短信、倡议书或演说词等。 应用文涉及的内容多种多样，但大部分都与日常生活比较贴近, 主要包 括：投诉信、求职信、求学信、拒绝信、道歉信、感谢信、祝贺信、邀 请信、求职信、演说辞、倡议书、海报、景点介绍和日程安排等。 从历年真题来看，应用文的考查以信函为主，但近几年也常涉及其他类 型，如倡议书、景点介绍等。 应用文类型 【常用句式】 （1） I would like to suggest that/ I am writing with my suggestion/ proposal about/ I am writing to express my views concerning 我想建议。/ 我写信来想就一事提出我的建议。/ 我写信来表达我关 于的看法。 (2) You have asked me for my advice with regard to and I will try to make some conducive suggestions. 关于你让我提一些建议，我尽量提一些有益的建议。 (3) I feel that it would be beneficial if 我觉得如果将会很有好处。 (4) If I were you, I would 如果我是你，我将 (5) It would seem to me that you could . 在我看来，你可以 应用文类型 (6) As you may agree that 或许你会同意。 (7) I hope you will find these suggestions/ proposals/ recommendations helpful/ practical/ useful. 我希望你会觉得这些意见/提议/建议是有帮助的/实际的/有用的。 (8) I trust you will take my suggestion into account. 我相信你会考虑我的建议的。 (9) I would be more than happy to see improvements in this regard. 我会很高兴看到这方面的改善。 (10) I would be ready to discuss this matter to further details. 我会准备好与你进一步详谈此事。 应用文类型 范文欣 赏 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter in reply to a friends inquiry about applying for admission to your college or university. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese: 1.建议报考的专业级理由 2.报考该专业的基本条件 3.应当如何报考 应用文类型 A Letter in Reply to a FriendA Letter in Reply to a Friend December 27, 2008 DearDear Tom, I am very pleased toI am very pleased to know that you are going to apply for admission to one university. It has been several years since we parted last time, and soon we will probably meet again. In my opinionIn my opinion, you should major in English. On On one handone hand, English is a very popular major at our university and we have modern teaching methods and prestigious professors. On the other handOn the other hand, you seem to have a gift for language learning and you are really good at English. As toAs to the preparation for applying for the English major of our university, I I suggestsuggest you pay more attention to spoken English. If you make a good performance in oral test, you will have the priority. It is unnecessary for you to be nervous. In additionIn addition, when making preparation you should do more model tests. I am sureI am sure you will succeed in the exam. Please inform mePlease inform me if there is something I can do for you. I am looking I am looking forward toforward to meeting you on our campus. Sincerely yours, Li Ming 开头常用句型 Its well known to us that Recently, has been brought to popular attention/has become the focus of public concern. One of the universal issues we are faced with/that cause increasing concern is that 中间段常用句型 On the contrary, there are some people in favor ofAt the same time, they say But I dont think it is a very good way to solve For example, Worst of all, Confronted with,we should take a series of effective measures to For one thing, For another, It is high time that something was done about it. For example, In addition,All these measures will certainly Why? The first reason is that The second reason isThe third isFor all this, the main cause ofdue to 英文句子的上下连贯，段落的过 渡衔接，主要靠“结构词“来表示 如分段叙述某一个问题时，可用First Second Third. 来表示衔接 。 举例说明时可用for example for instance来表示。 进一步阐述时可用furthermore in addition similarly mo