《对立观点式写作》PPT课件.ppt

写作模板 1. Recently, our class has had a heated discussion about whether . 2. Some of our classmates are in favor of / that . They hold the opinion that . Moreover, . 3. However, other students hold the opposite opinion that . They think . Whats more, . 写作模板 1. Recently, our class has had a heated discussion about whether . 2. Some of our classmates are in favor of / that . They hold the opinion that . Moreover, . 3. However, other students hold the opposite opinion that . They think . Whats more, . 对立观点式 基础写作训练 -应用文 写作模板 1. 最近，我们班就应不应该进 行了热烈的讨论。 2. 我们一些同学赞同。他们抱 着的观点。而且，。 3. 然而，其他同学抱着相反的观点 。他们认为。此外， . 4.对立观点式的应用文一般用第几 人称？ 5.一般用什么时态？ 写作模板 1. Recently, our class has had a heated discussion about whether . 2. Some of our classmates are in favor of / that . They hold the opinion that . Moreover, . 3. However, other students hold the opposite opinion that . They think . What more, . 4.第三人称 5.现在时 Should an entrance fee be charged for parks? Why? Task 1 Guessing game Each of the following pictures gives us a reason of whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. Try to find it out. Task 1 The park needs money to The park is a public place to 基础写作 最近,你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场 讨论。讨论的主题是:公园要不要收门票？同学 们有不同的看法.请你根据下表所提供的信息,给 报社写一封信,客观地介绍讨论情况。 40%的同学认为 60%的同学认为 l应收门票,但票价不宜 太高 l为了盈利和支付各种 各样的费用,如园林工人 工资和购买新花木 l不应收门票 l公园给公众提供了休 闲的地方 l如要收费,需建大门、 围墙,会影响城市形象 Task 2 Dear Editor, Im writing to tell you about the discussion weve had about whether ._ _. Yours truly， Li hua 注意： 1. 信的开头已为你写好。 2. 只能用5个句子表达全部内容。 基础写作 最近,你班同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场 讨论。讨论的主题是:公园要不要收门票？同学 们有不同的看法.请你根据下表所提供的信息,给 报社写一封信,客观地介绍讨论情况。 40%的同学认为 60%的同学认为 l应收门票,但票价不宜 太高 l为了盈利和支付各种 各样的费用,如园林工人 工资和购买新花木 l不应收门票 l公园给公众提供了休 闲的地方 l如要收费,需建大门、 围墙,会影响城市形象 1 2 3 4 5 1.我们班就公园应不应收费进行了讨论。 2.40%的同学认为应收门票, 但票价不宜 太高。 3.为了盈利和支付各种各样的费用, 如园 林工人工资和购买新花木。 4.60%的同学认为不应收门票。公园给公 众提供了休闲的地方。 5.如要收费, 需建大门、围墙, 会影响城 市形象 Group discussion: Choose suitable words, phrases and sentence structures 15 minutes Step 1: 短文内容的完整性 l评分标准 mistaken parts : “_” beautiful parts : “ ” lUnderline Criteria(标标准)Marks Content (内容) 5 4 3 2 1 句子结构的复杂度和准确性 短文内容的完整性和连贯性 Evaluation Step 2.语言的应用 Criteria(标标准)Marks Language (语语言 ) 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 0 单词拼写，词形变化，冠词、介词等 的正确使用 短语的运用是否准确 句子结构：简单句、并列句、从句的 结构（参考5个基本句型） 高级结构的使用： 非谓语，从句 Evaluation Step 3: 短文内容的连贯性 Criteria(标标准)Marks Coherence (连贯连贯 ) 2 1 0 Evaluation Step 4: 扣分的情况： 人称错误 -2 时态错误 -2 字体不工整 -2 卷面不整洁 -2 Remember ! comment & signature Dear Editor, Im writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. 40 of my classmates are in favor that fees should be charged but it should not be too high. In that case, the park can make a profit and pay a variety of expenses, such as paying gardeners and other workers， and buying plants and young trees. However, 60 of the students hold the opinion that a public park should be free of charge because it provides people with a place where they can relax and enjoy themselves. Whats more, charging entrance fees means building gates and walls, which will have a bad effect on the appearance of a city Yours truly ， Li hua Opinions are divided of the class are in favor of/that the others oppose the opinion that. for one thing, for another, moreover / whats more /in addition / besides however whats worse, Useful structures and phrases Correct the compositions by yourself. Finish the exercises on the 44th Student Times. B1: reading comprehension 13 (卡：91-102) B3: 信息匹配专练（四）（103-110） For pay the gardeners do some repairs keep clean make a profit plant trees and flowers