最新高考英语写作专题辅导课件-基础写作[地点介绍].ppt

1.neighbor与为邻 2.be made up of/consist of由组成 3.be located /situated in/near坐落在 4. serve as当用 5.with /has a history of有的历史 相关短语 6. with/has a population of有人口 7.cover an area of 面积有. 8. the third largest city第三大城市 9. be famous for以而著名 10. be well-known for/as因为/作为而出名 11. on its east lies 东边有 12. a fantastic place 一个极好的地方 13. be rich /abundant in盛产 14. a three-storeyed building一栋三层 楼的房子 1. I would like to introduce my hometown to you. 我向你介绍一下我的家乡。 2. My hometown, neighboring Hong Kong, is located in Guangdong Province. 我的家 乡, 毗邻香港, 位于广东省。 相关句式 3. Guangzhou, a city with a population of about thirteen million, has a history of more than 2,200 years.广州, 拥有一千三 百人口的一座城市, 有三百多年的历史了 。 4. Covering a total area of 7, 434 square kilometers this city has a population of about ten million.这座城市占地面积达7, 434平方公里, 人口大约是10, 000, 000。 5. It is rich in natural sources such as coal and gold, and has mild climate. 它 自然资源得天独厚, 有丰富的煤和金矿 , 而且气候温和。 6. Our school is no longer what it used to be.我们学校再也不是过去的样子了 。 1. 介绍或描述地点的基础写作, 通常以表格 形式来呈现写作点。该类表格通常有两列, 其中一列概括事物特征、属性, 另一列对此 特征、属性展开描述。学生必须重新组织 表格内容, 不能死板地依据表格从左到右翻 译, 如不能写成“The location of Guangzhou is in the south of China”这样不地道的句子, 相应的表达应该是: Guangzhou lies in the south of China. 2. 确定时态。介绍地点等描述基本特征的文章 通常使用一般现在时。 3. 避免开头指代不明。若文章没有给出写作对 象或设定情景，避免用it作主语引导第一句, 而 应该具体写出描述的对象，如the Great Wall, Hong Kong等。但如果整篇文章 多处用“it” 等 作主语,文章会稍显逊色, 所以在写作过程中, 可 根据文意适当变换主语, 如改写为the place, the city等。 你将带领一个外国旅游团参观长城，请根据以下的信息要点， 用5个规范的英语句子写一篇长城的简单介绍。你的介绍应包括 全部信息要点，介绍的开头已经给出，不计入5个句子中。 【信息要点】 历历史 有两千多年的历历史。 特点世界上最长长的城墙墙, 长长6000多千米; 建筑材料主要为为石头头, 砖头砖头 , 修建工作都是人工进进行; 主要用于防御外来入侵者, 沿墙墙每隔几百米就有烽火 台(watchtower)。 现现状 世界著名旅游景点之一，每年吸引许许多外国游客到长长 城观观光旅游。 写作要求只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。 评分标准 句子结构准确, 信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯。 例题导写 1. 按顺序写作。学生应该按照表格内容(即“ 历史、特点、现状”)的先后顺序进行写作， 这样既可避免重整顺序而浪费时间, 也避免 错改顺序而给老师带来阅卷困难。 2. 草拟提纲、简单翻译是写作重要步骤之一 。请翻译要点： (1) 有(多久)的历史 _It has a history of . (2) 世界最长的城墙 _ (3) 6000多千米长 _ (4) 由石头, 砖头做成 _ (5) 由人工修建 _be constructed by hand the longest wall in the world 6000 kilometers long be made of stones and bricks 6) 防御外来入侵者 _ _ (7) 每隔几百米 _ every few hundred meters prevent the country from being invaded; defend the country against foreign invaders (8) 著名旅游景点之一 _ _ (9) 吸引许多外国游客 _ one of the famous scenic spots; one of the famous places of interest; one of the famous tourist attractions attract many foreign visitors 3. 规范表达名词。如果名词修饰语 过长, 应转用 “a / an / the +名词+of” 的表达, 例如, “两千多年的历史”应 该写成“a history of two thousand years”, 而不能写成“two thousand years history”。 4. 变换表达, 丰富句式。 请按要求完成句子： (1) It is more than 6000 kilometers in length, _(“是 世界上最长的城墙”, 使用非限制性定语从句) (2) It was the Great Wall _ _in ancient times. (“ 帮助人们防御外来入侵者”, 使用强调句) that helped people fight against the foreign invaders which makes it the longest wall in the world (3)_ _, there were watchtowers every few hundred meters along the wall.(“长城 主要用于防御外来入侵者”, 使用原因状语从句) (4) The Great Wall is one of the well-known places of interest on earth, _ _.(“每年吸引许 多外国游客到长城观光旅游”, 使用非谓语结构) As the Great Wall was built to defend people against the invaders appealing to a large number of foreigners every year (5) The Great Wall is _ a famous historical attraction _ it attracts hundreds of thousands of foreign visitors each year.(使用“如此以致”的句型表达) (6) So _that it attracts hundreds of thousands of visitors home and abroad every year.(“长城如此吸 引”, 使用倒装句) attractive is the Great Wall such that 参考范文 Ladies and Gentlemen， Welcome to the Great Wall. The Great Wall, which is more than 6, 000 kilometers long, is the longest wall in the world. It has a history of more than 2, 000 years. It is made of stones and bricks and almost all the construction was done by hand without any machine. As the wall was built to defend the country against foreign invaders, there were watchtowers every few hundred meters along the wall. Now, the Great wall is one of the most famous places of interest in China and it attracts many foreign visitors every year. 能力提高 1. 请根据中文提示, 完成有关地点介绍的 语汇积累。 (1) 位于 _ (2) 靠近 _ _ next to / close to, in the neighborhood of, neighboring. be located /situated in；lie(s)in (3)有(多少)人口 _ _ (4)有(多久)历史 _ It has a population of . ; With a population of ., sth. .; The population has reached. It has a history of .; With a history of .， sth. (5) 占(多大)面积 _ _ (6) 表达“容量” The hotel _(拥有)120 rooms; The building can _(容纳)5000 people. cover an area of .(square kilometers / square meters) possesses hold (7) 是(多少)长/宽/深 It is. _/ _ / _. =It is. in _/ _/ _ . (8) 著名景点 a place of _, a historical _, a scenic spot (9) 表达“吸引、著名” sth. _sb.; sth. be_ (形容词 ); be famous _(因而著名); be famous _(作为而著名) as long wide deep lengthwidth depth interest attraction attract / appeal to attractive / appealing / wonderful for 2. 请根据中文, 完成短文。 Guangzhou, the third largest city in China, also known as City of Flowers, serves as the capital city of Guangdong and (1) _ _ _(政治，经济，科学，教育，文 化中心).(2) _ _ (全市面积7434.4平方公里), it is home to more than 11 million people. Covering / With an area of 7434.4 square kilometers the centre of its political，economic，scientific，educational， and cultural life Located in the middle of Guangdong, north of the Pearl River Delta with the Pearl River winding its way through the city, Guangzhou (3)_ (气候温暖湿 润). Besides, it is a famous city with (4)_ _(有着2, 200多年历史 )and a starting port of the Maritime Silk Road. With its beautiful scenery, Guangzhou (5) _ _ (旅游资源丰 富). enjoys a warm and wet climate a history of more than 2, 200 years abundant in traveling resources is also 你参加了学校的旅游兴趣小组，在汇报课上，各小组 成员要介绍一个独具魅力的城市，以下是你搜集到的 关于香港的信息。 基本 信息 靠近广东东省南端, 西邻邻澳门门, 以旅游、美食、购购 物、影视视等闻闻名 地方 特色 1.汇汇聚来自世界各地的名牌, 是购购物的理想胜胜地; 2.在众多著名旅游景点, 如迪士尼乐乐园, 海洋公园, 南丫岛岛等, 是人们们休闲闲度假的好去处处; 3.在香港人开设设的餐厅厅, 游客可以以实实惠的价格 品尝尝地方美食； 4.香港人富有创创造力和热热情, 他们们用智慧和勤劳劳 的双手创创造美好的将来。 参考词汇：澳门 Macao南丫岛 Lemma Island 写作内容 请根据以上表格内容, 介绍香港的有关情况 。 写作要求 只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。 评分标准 句子结构准确, 信息内容完整,篇章结构连 贯。 参考范文 Hong Kong, a city situated close to the south of Guangdong and to the east of Macao, is famous for traveling, food, shopping and film industry as well. In this modern city, there are various kinds of brands from all over the world for people to choose from, which makes Hong Kong an ideal place for shopping. Hong Kong is also an exciting place where people can enjoy their leisure time and holiday by visiting the famous scenic spots, such as the Disneyland, the Ocean Park, the Lemma Island and so on. In the restaurants run by the local people, visitors can enjoy the delicious food at a reasonable price. Whats more, Hong Kong people are creative and passionate, creating their promising future with wisdom and diligence. 精华点评 介绍地点的文章, 往往涉及一些地方著名景 点的介绍。在日常阅读积累中, 学生必须记住一 些著名的、常用的景点, 如本文出现的“迪士尼乐 园” (Disneyland), “海洋公园”(the Ocean Park), 这些香港著名景点也曾经出现在学生课本, 需引 起重视。此外, 对于语言表达的难点, 要学会转换 思维方式,了解中英文表达的差异, 这样才可以在 写作时准确、地道地翻译要点, 如题目中出现的“ 勤劳的双手”, 英语表达时不能直接翻译, 而用 diligence或hard work便可表达中心要点。 2012年体育盛事奥运会将在伦敦举行。你校一年一 度的英语体育节将至，请你根据以下表格内容, 用英 语写一篇介绍伦敦的文章，张贴在体育节的宣传栏上 。 写作内容 概况伦伦敦是英国政治、经济经济 、文化中心和首要工 业业城市。位于英国东东南部, 面积积1580平方公 里 天气天气多变变，时时常下雨 交通交通方便、