高中英语基础写作课件.ppt

Basic Writing 时间分配 题题型题题量赋赋分时间时间 （分钟钟 ） 基础础写作11510 基础写作的命题特点： 考生按所给的内容及要求，用5个规范的英语句子描述所 给信息的全部内容，并组成连贯的短文。 简而言之，考查考生整理信息和组词造句成文的能力。 对于书面表达的要求： 1.Cover all the language points and given information. 覆盖所有的语言要点 2.Avoid grammar mistakes and wrong spelling 应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性 3. 3.coherent, tight 上下文的连贯性 即有效地使用语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。 4.use the words properly 语言的得体性 5. Write your article clearly. 6. Mind the number of your sentences. To make the article tight, graceful and clear. (1)To avoid using repetitive words or expressions. 表达时尽量用一些较高级的词汇，避免使用重复的词语，使语 言不至于单纯和幼稚。也可以给文章增添亮点。 (1) （2）To use some transitional words 恰当选用过渡词，使文章紧凑，流畅。 (3)To use more sentence patterns such as such as inverted order, emphasis, a compound inverted order, emphasis, a compound sentence or a participle adverbialsentence or a participle adverbial 适当使用多种句型，注意语言的丰富性，多样化，以 变化多端的形式来表现丰富多彩的内容。 Basic writing skills Ways of writing good sentences 方法一. 一句多译 As soon as we arrived at the village, we were warmly welcomed by the villagers. On arriving at the village，we were warmly. The moment we arrived at the village, we were We were warmly welcomed by the villagers immediately we arrived at the village. No sooner had we arrived at the village than we Hardly had we arrived at the village when we. Use different ways to describe the pictureUse different ways to describe the picture 方法一. 一句多译 一就受到欢迎 As soon as Lien Chan and his wife arrived at the airport, they were warmly welcomed . On arriving at the airport , Lien Chan and his wife Lien Chan and his wife were warmly welcomed the moment /immediately they arrived at the airport. No sooner had Lien Chan and his wife arrived at the airport than they were Hardly had Lien Chan and his wife arrived at the airport when they were 方法一. 一句多译 Practice 一句多译 这本书花了我300元。 I spent 300 yuan on the book. I paid 300 yuan for the book. The price of the book is 300 yuan. It cost me 300 yuan to buy the book. The book cost me 300 yuan. Practice 一句多译 昨天下午他才来。 He came here yesterday afternoon. He didnt come here until yesterday afternoon. It was yesterday afternoon that he arrived here. It was not until yesterday afternoon that he came here. Not until yesterday afternoon did he come here. Rewrite the sentences 方法二. 使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档 （1）Most of the artists who had been invited to the party were from South Africa. Most of the artists invited to the party were from South Africa. （2）Nowadays the old people often do morning exercises in the park in order that they could keep healthy. Nowadays the old people often do morning exercises in the park to keep healthy. 方法二. 使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档 Complete the sentences with non-predicate (非谓语动 词) 1. 听到这个消息,他们变的很激动. _the news, they got excited. 1. 2. 尽管被告知许多遍,他仍然重复这个错. 2. _many times, he still repeated the mistake. 3. 3.除非被邀请发言,你应该在会议上保持沉默. 4. Unless _to speak, you should keep silent at the meeting. Hearing Having been told invited Translate the following sentences by using non -predicate (非谓语动词) 1,面对困难时，他从不放弃。 2，引入市场后，该产品大获成功。 3，做完作业后，他回家了。 Faced with/Facing difficulties, he never gives up. Introduced to the market, the product made a great success. Having finished his homework, he returned home. 方法三.丰富的句式 Describe the character by using Inverted Sentence(倒装句) Poor as/though he was, he was happy. 方法三.丰富的句式 Sentence patterns Are Always Useful The dog jumped into the river and pulled the girl to the bank. It was the dog that jumped into the river and pulled the girl to safety. The square is near the Great Wall Hotel. Near the Great Wall Hotel is the square. You will have to work hard for years to speak good English. It will take years of hard work to speak good English. I failed in the exam again. What disappointed me most was that I failed in the exam again. Miss Li will give us a report soon. Miss Li, who has a wide knowledge of English, will give us a report soon. We all like Jim. We all like Jim, who is always ready to help others. We all like Jim because of his helpfulness and kindness. 1. To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things.（使用名词 性从句） 2. Though Im weak, Ill make the effort. (使用倒装句) 3. He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.(使用强调句型) 4. I passed the physics exam because of your help.(用虚拟语气） What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things. Practice 怎样使用较丰富的句式 Weak as I am, Ill make the effort. It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened. I couldnt have passed the physics exam but for your help. 5.I wont believe what he says. （使用状语从句） 6.If you study hard, you will make rapid progress. （用并列句） 7He had no sooner come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad. (使用倒装句) No sooner had he come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad. No matter what he says, I wont believe. Study hard and youll make rapid progress. 1. 1. Use different ways to describe one sentence.Use different ways to describe one sentence. 2. Make sentences by using non-predicate. 3.Sentence patterns are always useful 1. Summaries: Practice 此四幅画描述了 爱鸟周活动中李 明某一天所经历 的事，由此写一 篇文章。 要求： 1 必须使用5个句子 表达图画内容。 2 将5个句子组成 连贯的短文。 步骤一 审题 narration past tense the third person time order writing style: tense: person: order: caught a bird fixed a string to it a girl look for mother a police comfort her 步骤二 要点 send her home lost in thought set the bird free feel happy 步骤二 要点 步骤三. 扩展成句，连句成篇 1.One day,Li Ming caught a bird and fixed a string to it. 2. He saw a girl cry looking for her mum and a police- man comfort her. 3. The policeman sent the girl home and Li Ming was lost in thought. 4. Li Ming set the