话题10如何用英语描写节假日活动.doc

话题 10 如何用英语描写节假日活动Festivals，holidays and celebrations 必走三步 假设你是李华，对本班同学过生日的方式进行了全面调查，其结果如下表所示。请根据表格中提示的内容，写一篇 100 词左右的短文，说明同学们过生日的方式及想法。开头已给出，但不计入总词数。比例方式想法40%开一个生日派对同学、朋友聚会、聊天，增进感情20%近郊旅游放松心情，感受大自然30%获得特别的礼物父母等送给自己特别想要的礼物，如手机等10%种生日树美化环境，有纪念意义 Everyone likes to spend their birthday，but they have different ways to spend it_ _ 第一步：认真审题，提炼要点 一审格式：本文是一篇介绍性说明文，题材是同学们感兴趣的话题，即：生日的过法。这种话题也是高考的一种命题角度，即中学生不仅要关注社会热点、校园趣事、学业任务，同时也要对自己身边经历过的生活小事有自己的评价。此类话题适合中学生的思维和心理特点，易于培养学生的表达能力。 二审结构：由于本文要求根据表格内容写作文，所以，最好的表述语句要用并列句和复合句，以此把数据与内容连贯地表达出来。具体步骤是： (1) 提出调查的主题，以起到引入的效果。 (2) 对表格中的数据进行梳理，通顺地写出来。 (3) 自己对表格数据的感受以及对生日礼物的评价。 三审要点：用英语思维，理出写作要点。 have a birthday party have a wonderful time travel on their birthday get close to the nature receive the special presents a mobile phone or a computer plant a tree to celebrate their birthday make the hometown more beautiful 第二步：紧扣主题，扩点成句 Everyone has different ways to spend their holidays We have four ways to spend our birthday About half of us would like to have a birthday party with their friends and classmates They can talk，sing and do anything at the party and often have a wonderful time Some classmates like to travel on their birthday They want to get close to nature and relax themselves One third of my classmates hope to receive the special presents from their parents One classmate in ten wishes to plant a tree to celebrate their birthday 第三步：补充修改，连句成篇 Everyone likes to spend their birthday，but they have different ways to spend itIn our class，we have four ways to spend their birthday About half of us would like to have a birthday party on their birthday with their friends and classmatesThey can talk，sing and do anything at the party and often have a wonderful timeSome classmates like to travel on their birthdayThey want to get close to nature and relax themselvesHowever，about one third of my classmates hope to receive the special presents on their birthday from their parents，such as a mobile phone or a computerAt last，one classmate in ten wishes to plant a tree to celebrate their birthday which makes our home more beautiful I think the last way to celebrate the birthday is very interestingNext year I will grow a tree on my birthday 满分作文满分书信三 假设你是某中学学生会主席李华，你校与本地一所国际学校经常举办联谊活动。你计划在重阳节组织学生到养老院去慰问老人，拟邀请国际学校的学生参加。请你根据以下内容要点给国际学校的学生会主席 Tony 写一封信。 要点：1向老人赠送礼物(鲜花、自制贺卡)； 2为老人提供服务(做清洁、陪老人聊天)； 3为老人表演节目(唱歌、跳舞)。 注意：1词数为 100 左右； 2信的开头和结尾已为你写好(不计入你所写词数)。 Dear Tony， Chongyang，the traditional Chinese festival for the elderly，is coming aroundWe are planning to visit the Nursing Home to celebrate the special day，and we would like to invite students from your school to join us. Looking forward to your early reply Yours， Li Hua (2007 年湖北卷) 范文： Dear Tony， Chongyang，the traditional Chinese festival for the elderly，is coming aroundWe are planning to visit the Nursing Home to celebrate the special day，and we would like to invite students from your school to join usWe have planned several activitiesWhen we get there，we will visit the elderly in their rooms in groups，presenting them with beautiful flowersThen we will do some cleaning and washing for them with the help of the nurses As some old people feel lonely，we may chat with them about their old days，changes of our city，or anything they are interested inWe may also give them some performances：singing，dancing and so on I am sure we will both gain a better understanding of the elderly in ChinaIf you have any suggestions，please let us know Looking forward to your early reply Yours， Li Hua 点评： 本文层次清楚、要点全面、衔接得当、行文过渡自然，整篇文章结构紧凑，表意准确、连贯，恰到好处地使用了复杂短语和语法，如：现存分词作状语(presenting them with.)、with 复合结构(with the help of the nurse)本文作者运用语言的能力很强，达到了写作目的。 必做练习： 假定有一批外宾要在中国过春节，他们很想了解关于我国春节的一些情况，请你根据下列要点写一篇短文，词数大约 100 字左右。 1春节就是中国的新年，一般在一月下旬或二月份。 2春节前人们要大扫除，给孩子们买新衣。大年夜家人在一起吃年夜饭。 3年初一人们梳妆打扮，看望父母，走访亲友。 4人们在春节过得很愉快。 答案： The Spring Festival Before the Spring Festival，the Chinese people usually give their houses a general cleaning and buy new clothes for childrenOn the last day of the old year，there is a big family din