英语写作常见表达错误纠正.ppt

英语写作常见表达错误纠正,1 Some people thing that failure is a bad thing . Firstly , failure has influence in confidence, so it can make people lost their direction. While if someone lost his direction , he wont make his dream come true forever . That is very serious . 修改版：Some people argue that failure is a bad thing, with the reason being that if people fail to do something, he will lose confidence in such a thing. Besides, constant failures will be bound to affect peoples confidence in doing everything. Without confidence, how can people do things successfully?,英语写作常见表达错误纠正,2 It is said that “failure is the mother of succeed “ . They are inclined to the idea that if people sum up from the failure , they will learn something and it is useful to get their goal . 修改版：As the saying goes, “Failure is the mother of success”, which means /meaning people can always learn something from failure and it is very useful to his future success in achieving goals.,英语写作常见表达错误纠正,3 It is important for everyone to stay healthy . To other words, everyone wants to stay healthy . How can we stay healthy ? Which is the best way to stay healthy ? It is said that “get ill by the mouth “ , so we must eat healthy first when we want to stay healthy . That means we eat meal on time and make sure the food is ok . 修改版: There is no doubt that everyone wants to stay healthy. Nowadays, it is commonly agreed that health is above wealth. But how can we maintain a healthy body? When asked this question, different people may come up with different ways of keeping fit. Some people say that we should eat healhty diet if we want to avoid getting ill. According to them, people get sick mainly because they eat unhealthy food.,英语写作常见表达错误纠正,4 We also should take some exercise . if you take some exercise every day , you will become strong and healthy , so that illness keep away from you . Every coin has two sides , different people have different ideas . In my opinion , the best way to stay healthy is that you must eat healthy 修改版: Other people, however, hold that doing exercises is the best way to enjoy a healthy body. In their opinions, people will keep away from illness as long as they do regular exercise, such as running and swimming. As far as I am concerned, the most effective way of keeping healthy is to ,英语写作常见表达错误纠正,5 When asked about failure,some people become frustrated and they will lose them confidence.It is a bad thing for them.And failure will take great bad effect on their lives. 修改版: When talking about failure, people often feel frustrated and some people are even fearful at the mention of failure. Admittedly, constant failure will result in peoples lack of courage and confidence and thus have negative effect on their daily life and work. But is failure a bad thing? Peoples ideas vary.,英语写作常见表达错误纠正,6 As far as I am concerned,I tend to the latter.That is,I dont think failure is a bad thing.Instead,I believe for a successful people, failure is a stopping stone. 修改版: As far as I am concerned, I prefer the latter. In other words, I believe that failure is not absolutely negtaive.As we know, failure is something that we can never avoid in the course of achieving success. For those who succeed eventually, failure is the source of experience; for those who always complain about failure, failure is the source of misfortune.,英语写作常见表达错误纠正,7. Cities should be kept clean in spite of the size of it. It is not such an easy thing to keep our city clean. The phenomenon in todays society is not optimistic. The unethical behavior of some people has affected the citys image. (缺少连贯性） 修改版: Cities should be kept clean regardless of the size. But it is by no means easy to ensure the cleanness of a city due to peoples unethical behaviors. Thus, some people hold that the prospect of a citys clean image is not optimistic.,英语写作常见表达错误纠正,8. As far as I am concerned, the governments relevant policies and the action of the volunteers are the part of the action. We should try our best to do something by our selves no matter you are a man or a woman, young or old. 修改版: As far as I am concerned, to keep a city clean, the governments policy and citizens awareness are of vital importance. With the governments strict law, people dare not do things that are harful to the environment. With peoples raised consciousness and voluntary actions, the citys tomorrow will be cleaner.,英语写作常见表达错误纠正,9. Some people hold the idea that do a pat-time job is good for college students. As far as they are concerned, college students have enough personal time to control. They take advantage of this period time to do a part-time job, which will enrich their social experience and broaden their eye shot. But I couldnt agree with them in several points. 修改版: Some people hold that doing a part-time job is of great benefits for college students. According to them, college students have plenty of time after academic study, so that working as a tutor or sales person are good way spending time meaningfully. Also in their eyes, doing a part-time job can enrich college studentss social experience and broaden their horizon. I, however, think the other way around.,英语写作常见表达错误纠正,10. In the first, in spite of heir enough time, if they make full use of it on study, they will learn better and get excellent achievements. If they do it like that, their parents will be very pleased. In the second place, they devote themselves to study and part-time job, they will not have a good rest. 修改版: In the first place, they can learn better and achieve greater success in study if they make the most use of their time on academic study, which will surely please their parents. But, if they take a part-time job, the time will be less. In this case, how can they ensure good rest? Without good rest, how can they have a healthy body to deal with study and part-time job?,英语写作常见表达错误纠正,11. With the rapid developmen of society , people pay more attention to staying healthy . Frankly speaking , almost nobody could have failed to notice the fact that healthy has penetrated into our lives and played an important role in the personal development and growth of people . therefore, we must be aware of healthy. 修改版: With the increase of peoples living standard, people are paying more and more attention to health. Frankly speaking, almost nobody could have failed to notice the importance of good health and having a strong and healthy body is playing an important role in our life and work. Therefore, we must be aware of our health. But,英语写作常见表达错误纠正,12. Here are many people think that failure is a dad thing because they think that with the failure people will lose confidence in the succeed. However, there also have other people consider that a failure is a good thing that failure is the mother of success. They says that the more they suffer ,the stronger they become. 修改版: Many people think that failure is a bad thing because people tend to lose confidence if they always meet with failure. Other people think the other way around. According to them, failure is not often negative. As an old saying goes, failure is the mother of success. They even argue that the more failure they encounter, the stronger they become.,英语写作常见表达错误纠正,13. As we all know ,success is followed by failure ,failure is followed by success. We can find our shortage with the failure and we also have enough time to prepare with the experience of the failure. Although failure to failure will make people loss their faith sometimes, overcome it is also the half of success. 修改版: As we have to admit, success is always followed by failure and some people become successful after numerous/countless failures. But, failure is not always negative. Only by failure can we know our shortcoming. Only by failure can we have useful experience. Only by failure can we realize the importance of good preparations.,英语写作常见表达错误纠正,14 Peoples life is become more and more happy. So more and more people think healthy is so important. 修改版:With the increase of peoples living standard, peoples life is becoming increasingly comfortable. So, people now paying special attention to their health. In their eyes, health is far more important than wealth.,英语写作常见表达错误纠正,15 For me, I am a fat girl. I think the best way to stay healthy is occasionally exercise and reasonable food. The exercise I can play basketball and badminton. Also I can jog in the playground after late self-study. For more people, usually exercise is very important ,also is a best way to stay healthy. 修改版:Being a fat girl, I think the best way to stay healthy is doing regular exercises and having reasonable diet. I can keep fit by playing basketball and badminton, or just jogging after self-study in the evening.,英语写作常见表达错误纠正,16 In contemporary society,a growing number of people focus their attention upon spiritual life.Then how to stay healthy is becoming a hot topic. 修改版: In the present-day society, with the increase of peoples living standard, a growing people start focusing their attention on health. Thus, the tips of how to keep fit are everywhere to be found. How to stay healthy is becoming a major concern for people.,英语写作常见表达错误纠正,17 Undoubtedly,the best wy to stay healthy is to hold a positive attitude towards life.Facing all kinds of difficulties ,try to figure out ways to solve,never giving up.when encounter failures,working hard to overcome them,learn practice from them and avoid making the same mistake in the future.Facing other peoples misunderstanding,we should spare no effort to narrowing the gap. 修改版: Besides, mental health is of equal important as physical health. Therefore, we should hold a positive attitude towards life. When in difficulty, we ought not to feel frustrated; instead, we need to figure out ways to solve it. When encountering failure, we should not lose heart; on the contrary, we should work harder until we succeed. When ,英语写作常见表达错误纠正,18 As for as I am concerned, as increasingly tough competition pose upon people,moder people need an outlet of pressure they burdened,keeping a positive attitude,working hard to do above aspects,it will contribute to stay healthy. 修改版:As far as I am concerned, keeping a positive attitude is key to staying healthy. When under pressure, we should not feel hopeless; inste