高一英语基础写作（人物描写）

,good friends,How to describe a person 人物写作,钟南山年生于广州，是中国最伟大的医生之一。 Zhong Nanshan, born in Guangzhou in 1941, is one of the greatest doctors in China. Zhong Nanshan, one of the greatest doctors in China, was born in Guangzhou in 1941.,1. 概况：age, sex, birth, family background,was/ were born in/into (a poor family) on As a child of years old, he He spent his childhood in live a happy/hard life,我的历史老师是个漂亮女人，她长着两只大眼睛，留着长发.,My history teacher is a beautiful woman with two big eyes and long hair.,启示：巧用with做定语,2、外貌 / 性格/特长,3 爱好,like/ likes very much,be interested in,lose interest in,be crazy about,be tired of,hate,like/enjoy/be fond of,4、教育经历,常用表达式： From .to., I studied in.school. 从某年到某年，我就读 于某学校 He was admitted to New York university 考取大学 graduate from university从某大学毕业,1我1984年入学,12年后毕业. 21984年我进入北京大学, 4年后毕业. 3我们学很多课程,包括,I started school in 1984 and left school 12 years later.,I went to study in Beijing University in 1984 and 4 years later I graduated (from that university).,We learned many courses, including,启示：用复合句、倒装句等，润色文章,Not only is he interested in science, but also he has a gift for music.,他不仅对科学极有兴趣,也有音乐天赋。,5、理想与信念,常用表达式： dream of 梦想. devote oneself /ones effort to/ be devoted to 一生致力于 make up ones mind to do/be determined to do决心做 have a gift for / be gifted in 有的天赋,As a monitor, he is hard-working and helpful, who sets a good example to us.,作为一位班长，他学习认真，乐于助人，给我们树立了一个 良好的榜样。,6、评价,常用表达式： As a great/outstanding, she is highly thought of . Being the , she is regarded as . set a good example to,写作内容： 友谊是一个人最宝贵的财富之一。请根据下面要求写一篇英语作文。谈谈你最好的朋友。要点包括：,1.她叫王敏，今年16岁； 2.她很漂亮，有一头长头发和一双大而明亮的眼睛； 3.她喜欢户外活动，比如爬山、骑自行等； 4.她人很好，我们一直相处得很好； 5.她在学习上帮了我很多，我很感激她。,写作要求： 1.只能使用5个句子表达全部内容 2.开头和结尾已给出。,基础写作:写作步骤,）确定标题（如果题中要求写标题就确定标题，若题中没做要求则可以不写）,）写出要点（如：文中涉及到的重点词汇，短语及句型）,）审题：仔细审读写作要求和写作内容信息,）组合成句（组合成句的过程实际上是一个谋篇布局，把内容要点按恰当合理的顺序排列，使文章条理，通顺的过程.),）写草稿并对其修改润色,）誊写,）复查（复查的项目包括：格式是否正确，内容是否完整， 表达是否准确，行文是否连贯等）,Key words: 1.最好的朋友: best friend 2.漂亮: beautiful 明亮的眼睛: bright eyes 3.户外活动: outdoor activities 爬山: climbing 骑自行车:cycling 4.相处得很好: get along well with 5.感激: grateful,写作内容： 友谊是一个人最宝贵的财富之一。请根据下面要求写一篇英语作文。谈谈你最好的朋友。要点包括：,1.她叫王敏，今年16岁； 2.她很漂亮，有一头长头发和一双大而明亮的眼睛； 3.她喜欢户外活动，比如爬山、骑自行等； 4.她人很好，我们一直相处得很好； 5.她在学习上帮了我很多，我很感激她。,写作要求： 1.只能使用5个句子表达全部内容 2.开头和结尾已给出。,改一改,She name is Wang Min and she is 16 years old. He have long hair and a pair of big and bright eyes. She very beautiful. She like outdoor activities, for example, climbing and ride a bike.,改一改,She is very well and we get along well with. She is help me with my study, so I very grateful she.,改一改,My best friend is Wang Min and she is 16 years old. She is very beautiful, and she has a long hair and a big or bright eyes.,范文,I have many friends. But in my heart, I think Wang Min is my best friend. She is 16 years old and is a very beautiful girl with long hair and big, bright eyes. She likes outdoor activities very much, such as climbing and cycling. She is kind and we get along very well with each other.