2011年硕士研究生入学考试英语写作辅导.doc

2011年硕士研究生入学考试英语辅导写作Part I 以史为鉴20102009A 通知: 给国际会议招收志愿者B 文化火锅A建议信:白色污染B 互联网对人际关系的影响文化人际关系2008A 道歉信:误拿CDB 互助合作 面对挑战人际关系2007A 建议信:图书馆服务B 自信对人的影响心理范畴2006A 请求信:希望工程B 对偶像的盲目崇拜社会热点2005A 辞职信B 养老”踢皮球”社会道德2004终点又是起点哲理2003Youth Development教育2002An American girl in traditional Chinese costume 文化2001Love is a lamplight in darkness人际关系对比:92 人际关系(父母与子女) 94 on making friends95 希望工程 98 business promise and guarantee六级近年文章08/12 How to improve students mental health08/6 Will E-books replace traditional reading?07/12 Digital Age07/6 Should one expect a reward when doing a good deed?06/12 the celebration of western festival 偏怪难跟风历年题目关联 、主流话题漫画？ 标题文化火锅 既鲜又美对一个正面观点加以证明不良的社会现象加以抨击 P3重述观点 个人例证提出解决 展望未来万能理由与事物有关:方便(convenience, service, benefits, advantages)安全(security, safety, protection, shelter) Precaution system safeguard vt.经济(economy, material rewards, money)Sustainable growth of economyEconomic recession 效率(efficiency, speed)环保(environmentally sound)耐久(endurance)Eg.1 09小作文: Plastic shopping bags are absolutely not environmentally friendly though they bring consumers lots of convenience. 05小作文: Although the position as an editor can bring me huge material benefits, it doesnt help to fulfill my dream as a freelance writer.01/06小作文: The more love and care we can dedicate to people around us, the more hope and security we will witness and enjoy.07小作文: I advice that computer services be upgraded to streamline cataloguing and other administrative tasks.Cooperation1. Efficient /increase Reinforce Only by global cooperation could we reinforce efficiency in doing business and coordinating other critical tasks on a worldwide basis. -Have no access toHave easy access to.By a simple click of the mouse, readers can have instant access to online data bank, thus helping to save the papers when we are using the conventional books. -Paralysis by analysis 与人相关交流(communication)利他(altruistic, be considerate of others)情感(emotion)性格(characters)经验(experience)乐趣(delight)健康(physical health, mental health)成就(achievement)以09年为例,可列出理由:In my perspective, Internet communication is to some extent harmful to teenagers.1. Positive characters, such as sincerity, cooperativeness and considerateness of others, are never easily built up by cyber communication, where lots of netizens even use fake identity and anonymous verbal attack is never a rare case nowadays.2. Excessive reliance on cyber communication will deny teenagers face-to-face communication. The more they indulged themselves in the unreal world, the more likely they will become indifferent and irresponsive to people around them, which apparently is not good for their mental health. As is known to all, social interactions is where we can take great delight in.以养老“踢皮球”为例It is shocking that in modern society people tend to be more self-centered rather than altruistic! And the mistreatment of senior citizens is undoubtedly triggered by this self-centeredness!以终点又是起点”可列出以下提纲1. People who never stop moving on will be more likely to be accomplished.2. People who attach more importance to the process than to the destination will derive genuine pleasure form life.3. Every challenge is a growing experience, so for people with ambition and fortitude, there is always a new starting point around the corner.适当使用以下格言让文章出彩!Fortune favors the brave.Live and learn.Time alone will reveal.Not to advance is to recede.In prosperity think of adversity.Time and tide wait for no one.Practice what you preach.Life less, fault less.Things go contrary to our wishes.Look before you leap.More haste, less speed.Habit is second nature.Action speaks louder than words.A fall into the pit, a gain in your wit.Look on both sides of the shield.United as we stand, divided as we fall.When all else is lost the future still remains.An optimist sees the rose; a pessimist the thorn.Part II 如何遣词造句考研作文评分标准We look forward to the future. Were it not for confidence, we wouldnt have a promising prospect.第五档A节(9-10)B节(17-20)包含所有内容要点使用丰富的语法结构和词汇语言自然流畅，语法错误极少有效地采用了多种衔接手法，文字连贯，层次分明；格式与语域恰当第三档A节(5-6)B节(9-12)虽漏掉一些内容，但包含多数要点应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的需求有一些语法和词汇的错误，但不影响理解采取了简单的衔接手法，内容较连贯，层次较清晰格式与语域基本恰当范文示例07真题Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should1) describe the drawing briefly,2) explain its intended meaning, and then3) support your view with an example/examples.-P1/p2 Intended meaning 有个别的图有文字信息（中文）Support view Give comment .You should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points)As is depicted in the drawing, the forward Goal keeper Mental image -What an amazing picture it is!Vivid thought-provoking Stunning Exaggerated Overdrawn-The cartoonist presents us with a stunning scene when _?问题相关更大的问题？What to some extent contributes to our failures? That is the exactly what the cartoonist wants to share us in this thought-provoking picture.a spot kick. Ready as he is to shoot the ball, he is sort of scared by the goal-keeper, for in his mental image, the goal keeper is an unbeatable giant. Its no coincidence that the goal-keeper is also diffident since he feels himself diminutive and inadequate in face of the huge forward.The symbolic meaning the drawing aims to convey is evident: confidence in yourself is the first step on the road to success. Isnt true that we often unconscious downplay our own strength yet overestimate the capability of our rivals? This mental complex brings us nothing but tension and dread and leads us nowhere. The less confident we are, the more likely we will get trapped in self-denial and then failure. A case in point is the worldly renowned F1 driver, Michael Schumacher. It is said that he invariably imagines positively that he can win in every race, and never shrink in front of other rivals. It is his never-dying confidence that works wonder! As the saying goes, “ Fortune favors the brace”. Keep this in mind and then your painstaking efforts will pay off. Only by courage, persistence and confidence could we come on top of the world. (199 words)对比：下面这篇文章对比范文的不足在哪里From the cartoon we can clearly see: in a football game, when facing the player who is about to kick the ball into net, the goalkeeper thinks to himself that the goal is too huge for him to keep, yet the kicker thinks the keeper as a giant that he is impossible to kick the ball into the net.The picture shows us the answer: no confidence is the biggest enemy on the way to success. Yes, living in such a fast changing society, there are more and more challenges and more and more opponents to fight! We need confidence to be successful. We should be more optimistic. Lets talk about Deng Yaping. Her firm look and her confidence make her win and get many gold medals. Yes, with self-confidence, we can face and fight against difficulties we meet. We have to face challenge directly and succeed if we have confidence. 要有意识的替换俗词!1、 good positive，sound, decent, desirable, favorable，promising，significant, indispensable文章最后一句，展望未来Ahead of us lies _ prospect.There exists_ prospect is awaiting us. Spectator Proceed future Promising Bleak Dubious -Though people have disputes over the necessity of cultural assimilation, personally, ahead of us lies a promising prospect. -ImportantCritical essential -Important is that.Equally important is that.-For one thing, For another, In one analysis,In another, -Sth is indispensable to.A plays an indispensable role in sth.Trials and errors play an indispensable role in the growth of children.-P2s1/指出重要性N. What./Adj. To do ing prep.-What really counts is .The rule of thumb is At the heart of the debate is.First of allOf no less importance is that.年轻人崇拜偶像的非比一般的成就，因此，偶像的生活方式在他们的生活当中起到了不可或缺的作用。 Young people worship the extraordinary achievements of icons so much so that indispensable to them is the life style of those icons.-Desirable . Is desirable.Anyone with relevant experiences are highly desirable.It is (un)desirable that. Should doDispose of disposal It is undesirable that plastic bags be disposed of carelessly.-Ahead of us lies promising prospect. Indispensable to us is.提出建议It is desirable that .should do-Favorable /adverse Have favorable/adverse effect on -在我们这样尊敬传统文化的国家，对老人虐待这绝不符合我们心愿。It is highly desirable that older generations be abused in such a country as ours where traditional cultures are valued.-Sth has positives and negatives. Though their view seems convincing, id like to stress the negatives. Promising bleakIt is (un)desirable that.Favorable adverseLive in distress and adversity Verse 面Conversely = on the contrary Reverse an irreversible trend 2、3、 Computerizing the catalogue is indispensable to a modern library.4、 bad dreadful，unfavorable, adverse, undesirable, negative It is undesirable that young people should mistreat senior citizens.More and more the majority of us, it is acknowledge/established/widely accepted that, on the steady rise, . is ever increasing/ pose a growing threat to =More and more + 人The overwhelming majority of us + v.The bulk of us + v. 主体-P2s1It:It is acknowledged that.It is unanimously agreed that.It is widely accepted/established that.There is no denying the fact that.Consensus is that. -It goes without saying that.It goes beyond dispute that.-社会现象The number of. Is on the increaseModerate drastic Considerable Substantial Dramatic 过去十年见证了使用网络进行交流的人的数量的剧增。The past decade witnessed the drastic increase in the number of people who got involved in cyber communications. 1800 600300 5003000-产生与日俱增的影响越来越大的威胁Ever increasing Growing Cumulative （褒义）Accumulate -Pose a growing threat/danger to.Impose an ever increasing influence on Have a cumulative effect on -大家一致认为家庭教育对孩子成长产生的持续影响是不容忽略的。Consensus is that the growing effect of family education on the growth of children is undeniable.A has effect on bEffect of A on B is.Impact of a on b is.Role of a in b is.We deem it (to be) critical that.拆分 组合英语 母语I could only achieve success by hard work. -He didnt accept the charge as well founded /made by his critics /that though he was a good observer, he was not good at deducing. -The bulk of us maintain that.Impose an ever increasing influence on.It goes without saying that.-不容否认的是自信会对一个人的成长起到持续的影响。It is undeniable that ever increasing is the effect on confidence on the growth of us. It is adj for sb to do sth.Adj. Is for sb to do sth. Though the abuse of old men to some extent exists, personally, ahead of us lies a promising prospect as long as we cultivate an atmosphere of preserving the values of our country. Consider More and more people are using more and more plastic bags. Its more and more dangerous. 改成: The majority of us get used to using plastic bags. The use of plastic bags is on the steady rise. The use of plastic bags pose a growing threat to environment. It is widely accepted that plastic bags should be banned.4. Make enable. to do (褒义) deny sb sth/ deprive sb of sth. (贬义)Enable sb to do Deprive sb of sth(强）Deny sb sth. -I have.Sth enable me to have.-I lose.I am deprived of sth. Enable sb to doSb is deprived of 正反因果论证Confidence enables us to expand our horizon; without confidence, we are deprived of chances to fulfil our potentials. -Be deprived of sthDeny sb sth.Sb is denied sth. Cultural exchange enables us to be known to the world. Without cultural assimilation, we are denied chance to know the world. -Enable sb to do.We are deprived of sth.We are denied chance to do .We are denied access to sth.Without confidence, we are denied short access to success.-A reasonable decision Justified Derive Make sb do Make sb not do Dissuade sb from doing sth. Stop sb from doing obstructCyberspace enables us to reach out to people half a globe awayThe excessive dependence on cyber chat deprives us of meaningful face to face communication 5、 Think argue, hold, support, claim, contend, advocate, uphold With many people claiming that fervent worship of fashion icons is nothing big deal, I have to contend that it carries negative influence. I think.I argue that.Claim/assert/affirmContend-Given what is stated above, i argue that.-Sb has a bias for.I side with the view.I second vt. the view that.-Keep to/ hold to.I adhere to the view that.I cling to the view that.-Embrace /Applaud-We acknowledge/advocate/uphold -I admit that.I admit that worshipping icons will occupy lot of precious free time of teenagers. But i would argue that it is a matter of personal choice to worship icons when fashion culture is pervasive. -Frankly, personallyAdmittedly, -I object that.I am opposed to the fact that.Id like to voice my opposition.I am not in support of In approval of In favor 100801 6、 Influence affect have influence on, have impact on, impose influence on, exert impact onChinese culture is so fascinating that it impacts on every foreign visitor.-Have _ effect /influence on Apparent insidious Chronic short-term Indispensable negligible -Impose.on.Impose ban/penalty/influence on Exert steady pressure on -应当施加严厉惩罚的是。Severe penalty should be imposed on -The effect /impact of A on B is.-挫折可以对我们产生正面的影响，而对没有自信的人却让他们丧失了前行的勇气。The effect of frustration on us could be positive, but for those without confidence, it might deprives them of the courage to move on. Impose.on.Exert steady on .持续增加的大学生精神疾患的概率在部分程度上可以归于学校对其施加的持续压力。Be attributed to.The rising incidence of mental disorders among college students are to some extent attributed to the steady pressure of universities on their students. -People have mixed reaction to.-Frankly, pros outweigh cons.优点胜过缺点。Though the views of both sides make sense, i have a bias for its merits. -Im表示使动Impart knowledge to students 7、 Advantage and disadvantage pros and cons, positives and negatives, merits and limitations, strength and weakness, blessing and curseOnline shopping, is it a blessing or a curse?8、 Increase/decrease enhance, strengthen, reinforce, fortify, boost / decline, on the decline, diminish+, worsen, deteriorate, aggravate +Pose dispose proposeImposeAggravate Grave adj. AssimilateDeteriorate Interior - 加强 reinforce 完善 enhance the reputation/cooperation 深化/加剧 intense intensify Intense enthusiasmIntense hatred/competition/debate促进+ 社会进程Boost social /economy growth-Boost reinforce( enhance)Intensify aggravate (deteriorate) vt. -Diminish (reduce)使。减少（程度）Failure diminished his confidence. Self-conceit diminishes our ambition.-文化吸收是巩固环球化的