英语四级-作文点评.ppt

Writing of CET 6,1. 评分标准 2. 高分作文的特点 3. 备考要点 a.分析真题，学习模块，准备句型和词汇 b.写作流程,评分标准,2条理不清,思路紊乱,语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误, 且多数为严重错误 5-基本切题.表达思想不清楚,连贯性差. 有较多的严重语言错误 8基本切题.有些地方表达思想不够清楚,文字勉强连贯,语言错误相当多,其中有一些是严重错误.,11切题.表达思想清楚,文字连贯,但有少量语言错误 14切题.表达思想清楚,文字通顺,连贯,基本上无语言错误,仅有个别小错. A.给出的主题句,起始句结束句不计入字数. B.字数不足应酌情扣分,十字一分. C.规定的内容未写完者,按比例扣分.,切题.表达思想清楚, 文字通顺, 连贯,基本上无语言错误,仅有个别小错. 1 没有严重的语法错误 2 使用插入语，有效地采用了多种衔接手法,文字连贯,层次清晰， 3 词汇准确，丰富，句型多变，（长短句交叉）,June 2008,Will E-books Replace Traditional Books? 1.随着信息技术的发展，电子图书越来越多 2.有人认为电子图书会取代传统图书，理由是 3.我的看法,Dec. 2007,The digital age 1.如今，数字化产品越来越多，如 2.使用数字化产品对于人们学习工作和生活的影响。,June 2007,Writing：Should one expect a reward when doing a good deed 1.有的人认为应该有回报 2.另外的人认为应该象雷锋一样不要回报 3.我的看法,Dec. 2006,The Importance of Reading Classics 阅读经典著作的重要性 outlines 1、阅读经典著作对人的成长至关重要 2、现在人们越来越少阅读经典著作，原因是 3、作为大学生，你应该怎么做,Similarities,1. Describe a phenomenon 2. Analyze the question being discussed 3. Your idea/ Using reasons or examples to support your idea,议论文的类型和写作模板,1.分析/ 解决问题型 要求考生针对给出的现象/问题进行论述. 题目所给的问题大多是当今社会的热门话题. 考生要分析问题的原因或危害,并提出解决问题的建议/或者表明自己的看法。 2008/06 2006/12,第一段应先提出问题. 第二段详细阐述造成该问题的原因，或它造成的危害. 第三段提出相应的解决问题的办法.,Today, _ has become a serious problem which can be seen everywhere, such as_. Some people think that_. They usually _. So they dont pay much attention to it. But the truth is that_. How can we get rid of this problem? I think there are some methods. Firstly, _. Secondly,_. Thirdly, _. In a word, if_, it will not be a problem in the future.,2. 评论型,评论型议论文要求考生对某一事物或社会现象进行客观地分析和评论. 评论型的作文主要用于不能简单以好或不好下定论的事物,如评论互联网,广告,私家车等. 2007/12,三段构成,在文章的开篇引出题目要求评论的事物或现象; 然后分几点详细阐述这一事物的正反两个方面; 最后对全文进行总结并给出自己的见解.,pattern,It is very common in our lives that _. The attitudes toward this issue vary from person to person. Some people argue that A is their favorite, but some other people do not agree with them. For it is obvious that _ has its advantages as well as disadvantages. To begin with, -. Furthermore,_ . Last but not least,_. In short/Since_, we should_.,3. 观点对立型 就某一事物或社会现象给出两个对立的观点,要求考生将两种观点进行对比,然后表明自己的看法和立场. 2007/06,通常分为三段: 第一段引出有争议的两个观点; 第二段分别进行详细论述(也可分段论述); 最后一段总结自己的观点.,patterns,When talking about-, peoples opinions differ. Some people think that _ is good / a good way. But others may not agree. They emphasize that _. Those who think that_ believe that _. And then_. What is more, _. Therefore, we must_. From my point of view/ As far as I am concerned, we should-.,There is no denying the fact that _ has been a hotly debated topic recent years in China. Peoples views differ sharply on this issue. Some people think_. But others hold that _. My own point of view is that both sides have something right. (分别论述). The best policy, as I see it, is to improve _,特殊功能段落或句型,1现象/现状说明段 In the era of information and technology, there are all kinds of recreational activities. Some people think those recreational activities are great and necessary, because they can help people relax from the hard work and study. Some of the activities, such as hiking, jogging, can help people relax physically; while some of them, such as surfing the Internet, can help people relax mentally.,A new era has come. With the mass production of electronic devices and application of new technologies, mankind has entered an “e” age. Nowadays, we have e-mails, e-tickets, e-tests, and e-books, and consequently, paper-based materials gradually vanish. Nowadays, e-books become extremely popular among youngsters, while traditional ones seem suffer a great loss of their readers.,The number of E-books is constantly on the rise as a result of rapid development of information and technology. It is thought by some people that E-books might replace the traditional books in some time because of various advantages of E-books over paper ones.,Recent decades have seen rapid development of information and technology, and thereby E-books have wounded their way into our daily life. Because of the wide and quick popularity of E-books, there has been an increasing controversy over the question whether E-books will replace traditional books or not.,With the advancement of science and technology, theres a steady increase in the number of E-books, or electronic books. Some experts have claimed that these books will be prevalent, thus rendering all traditional one in disuse, however, other authorities maintain that the traditional books are here to stay. From my perspective, Im firmly sided with the former.,句型,原因列举段,2.有人认为电子图书会取代传统图书，理由是 For some people, electronic and internet based books are convenient and accessible. Environmentalists even advocate the benefit of e-books on the ground of forest protection. E-books lovers even assert that traditional books will disappear in the near future.,A great variety of reasons are held by people with the above viewpoint in which economy is the key factor to make such prediction attainable. To start with, since all E-books would be downloaded from the Internet, most of which are free from charge, whereas papers books in bookstore are relatively expensive. Besides, the popularity of E-books will reduce or ever avoid the waste of paper. Finally, E-books can be easily stored in our computer or other portable disks while paper books usually occupy too much space on our shelves.,Many people hold the idea that it will not take long for E-books to replace traditional books because E-books have quite a few advantages over traditional ones. First, E-books are more accessible to readers because they just need to log onto the Internet and read online. Second, thanks to the advanced technology, the cost of E-books are much lower, so it takes readers far less money to buy E-books. Last but not least, reading E-books has developed into part of our daily life, which is particularly appealing to young users, who are the body part of the users of electronic products.,There are several reasons responsible for my point. For one thing, it is convenient for people to carry E-books around. Therefore, readers will be no longer concerned about the heavy burden in their bags. Whats more, a considerable number of E-books can be stored away altogether in the reading gadget thanks to their digital pattern, which is a huge leap from conventional books given its cost-reducing and space-saving nature. Above all, people will find a workable solution to deforestation, a result brought about by paper use.,现在人们越来越少阅读经典著作，原因是 However, the modern society is full of temptations. Compared with TV soap operas, sport events, and video games, classical literary works are old fashioned and time consuming. In bookstores, “Fast-food” reading materials are replacing classics, and young writers with sensational and “cool” remarks win the support of a large number of fans.,句型,表达个人观点 I have been a book worm for a long time. For me, reading experience is unique and rewarding. Nothing can be more thought-provoking than thumbing through a book bought years ago under a table lamp in a dark night. As to note-taking, scanning and skimming, and portability, traditional books have advantages. Just as the invention of camera didnt put an end to the history of painting, traditional books are, and will still be, an intimate friend of readers.,As for me, its neither good nor bad to expect a reward when doing a good deed. What really matters is that we should, first of all, take the initiative to help, instead of clinging to the worldly principle that “no reward, no offer”.,So the point is not about “should” or “shouldnt”, its just about what you think is “should”; if you do expect a reward, I dont think you would do the good deed at the very beginning. Doing good deeds is something that makes you feel happy and rewarding, no matter whether you receive any reward or not.,we college students should be fully aware of the important role the classics play in broadening ones vision. Therefore, we should start reading and studying the treasuries our ancestors left and absorbing the essence of those classical works. We should also advocate to the public the importance of classics so that an increasing number of general people can enjoy the pleasure of reading.,Words and expressions,1.Correct word choice 语言正确/准确,a big rain a heavy rain I will be able to learn something from my own failure and gain final success. ultimate success. I feel that I not only gain a good life through going in for sports, but also get more chances to move closer to nature. A healthy and happy,Your hearing will be seriously hurt if you listen to a tape recorder with a too high volume. Your hearing will be seriously damaged/harmed if you listen to a tape-recorder with the volume too high. The reason for the decrease of car accidents in the city is that the traffic conditions have been developed. The reason for the decrease of car accidents in the city is that the traffic conditions have been improved.,Chinglish The chielf reason for the change have five points. There are five reasons for-. We should put our hearts into the study. We should pay wholehearted attention to our study. There is no doubt that proper physical activities keep our bodies fit. There is no doubt that proper physical activities keep us fit.,2. A variety of words and sentence patterns 词句多样,show reveals, indicates, illustrates, depict Think hold, maintain, insist that more and more in growing numbers，on the rise,make,1. This society still makes women unable to enjoy equal rights. 2. Jacks shyness made him unable to respond properly before Mary. 3. The incident made me recall one of my past experience. 4. The progress I have made makes me surprised. 5. This makes me conclude that money doesnt mean everything. Women are still denied equal rights. Jacks shyness paralyzed him before Mary. The incident reminded me of one of my past experience. The progress I have made surprises me. This leads me to the conclusion that money isnt everything,替换词-形容词,Not enough -inadequate Easy -handy Be better -excel Best -optimal Both good and bad -double-edged,First -primary Proper -Acceptable/ desirable Unforgettable -memorable Be more than -outweigh Angry -annoyed,Quiet -tranquil Different -diverse Main -primary/chief Big -enormous/huge/ significant,Glad -delighted/merry/joyful/ great -outstanding/ Good -solid/ profitable Very good -excellent,Bad -negative Important -vital/paramount/ Sure -convinced/,Wrong -improperly Capable -competent Expensive -costly,Verbs.,Say -assert, claim Meet -encounter Wish -long for Like -Prefer Know -be informed,Attract -appeal to Deal -tackle Consider -take into consideration Hide -overshadow Live -make a living,Touch -contact Experience -undergo Get -obtain/pursue Do -conduct,Get -provide/devote/offer/ deserve Meet -come across Save -spare Put -impose,Start -initiate Have to -have on choice but to,See -catch sight of distinguish,Nouns.,Choice Alternative Trouble -disturb Money -investment Result -consequence,Thought -perspective People -resident Danger -urgency Things one likes -favorite Other -additional Hard-working -di