北京高中英语会考作文练习.ppt

会考模拟作文练习,Tips,表达方式 9：0011:30 We began our work at nine oclock and ended at half past eleven. We worked from nine to eleven thirty. 结尾的感受要联系文章内容。 描述活动的形容词 a meaningful experience an unforgettable experience a beneficial experience,Last Saturday, my class organized a volunteer activity. My classmates and I went to the city park near our school, where we did some volunteer work. We got there at nine oclock. As soon as we arrived there, we were divided into three groups, and then we began to work. Some helped water trees and flowers. Some cleaned the benches and picked up litter. Others cleaned the childrens playground.,Time passed quickly. Before we knew it, it had been 11:30 and we had to go back. We didnt finish the work until 11:30.It was time for us to leave.,All of us were happy because we did something good to others and to the environment. I believe this activity can increase peoples awareness of environmental protection. Protecting the earth is protecting ourselves.,上周六我们班组织了一个志愿者活动。我和我的同学们去了学校附近的城市公园。九点我们到达那个公园。一到那儿我们就被分成三组，然后开始工作。有的帮忙浇树和花，有的擦长凳，还有的捡垃圾。 时间过得很快，不知不觉，就到了11:30.我们该回去了。 我们所有人都很高兴，因为我们为他人和环境做了好事。我相信这个活动可以提高人们环保的意识。,节水周志愿者作文-tips,认真审题， “请参考以下信息，完成你的个人简介，并说明你申请成为志愿者的目的。” 确定以下内容 内容：个人简介+目的或原因 时态：一般现在时 结构：2段或3段,应当适当加入连接词以使内容连贯，条理清晰 For one thing, For another thing , whats more/ besides/ in addition/ furthermore in a word/ in short,节水周志愿者作文-tips,在所给的每一条要点后，可以有适当的展开或补充，以达到丰富内容的目的。,节水周志愿者作文-tips,对有兴趣 sb. be interested in sb. be keen on sb. be enthusiastic about sb. have/ show/ express an interest in,正确的语言表达,我想要成为一名志愿者。 Id like to become a volunteer of Id like to work as a volunteer for. Id like to take part in as a volunteer.,正确的语言表达,我擅长说英语 ，因此我能够和外国人流利地/ 自如地交谈。 I am good at speaking English so I can communicate / talk with foreigners fluently/ freely.,正确的语言表达,我有的习惯。 I am in the habit of doing sth. I have the habit of doing sth. I have a good habit of doing sth. 养成的习惯 form / get into the habit of doing sth. 摆脱的习惯 get rid of the habit of doing sth.,正确的语言表达,阐述做某事的原因 I want to do because +句子 The reason why I do is that +句子 I want to do . Thats why I want to do,正确的语言表达,阐述目的 I want to do so that I can do I want to do in order that I can do In order to do , I want to do,正确的语言表达,为做贡献 make contributions to sth./ doing sth. 将自己致力于 devote oneself to sth. / doing sth. 将自己的时间，精力，金钱贡献给 devote ones time/ energy/ money to ,正确的语言表达,正确的语言表达,介绍姓名，身份，来自何方 My name is . I am a Senior 2 student from . . I am Li Hua, a Senior 2 student studying at . I am a Senior 2 student called Li Hua studying at / who study at,TIPS,文体： 议论文 时态： 现在时 结构： 3段：一方的看法；另一方的看法； 我的看法,议论文常用句型,开头句：Different people have different opinions on the problem/ the matter. 陈述一方观点： Some people think / consider that Sb. are in favor of the idea that Sb. are in favor of doing sth. Sb. hold the idea that ,陈述另一方观点： The other people are against this idea/ opinion/ view. Sb. dont agree to the idea. Sb. dont think that sb. should do 陈述自己的观点： In my opinion, As far as I am concerned, ,议论文常用句型,连接词,首先，其次： on one hand, on the other hand for one thing, for another thing 递进关系：also, besides, whats more, in addition, furthermore, moreover 转折关系： but, however, on the contrary,Different students have different opinions on it. Some students think it is a good idea to keep pets, Pets can comfort old people who live alone. Besides, pets can make our life interesting.,Example writing,because,Pets can company people and bring happiness to them.,On the contrary, the other students are against the idea. If too many people keep pets at home, its bad for the environment. Also, pets may be noisy and even attack people. What more, they spread diseases.,Example writing,be noisy 吵闹；喧杂 make noise 制造噪音,In my opinion, we can keep pets at home. But meanwhile we should pay attention to the environment when walking pets. Only in this way, can we enjoy the pleasure with pets and protect our world.,Example writing,改错,They think keep pets is bad for the environment. They think keeping pets is bad for the environment.,the Winter Asian Games 志愿者,将写作要点合理组合： * 年龄，性别 * 学历及英语水平 * 爱好体育，熟悉本地 * 善于交往，乐于助人 * 承诺：提供最好服务 * 合适的结尾,the Winter Asian Games 志愿者,Dear Sir/ Madam, My name is Li Hua. I would like to work as a volunteer for the Winter Asian Games. （写信的目的） I am a boy/ girl of 17 and I am studying at high school now. I am good at English and I can talk with foreign tourists in English freely.,I believe I can do a good job for the Games. First, I like sports and I know the place very well (I am familiar with the host city because it is my hometown). Second, I get along with others easily. It is especially useful