2015年广东高考基础写作提出建议

提出建议,主题： 给交友有困难的同学提建议。 Im sorry you are having trouble in making friends. However, the situation is easy to change if you take my advice. 引出建议 Here are some tips to help you.,列举建议 First, why not go and talk to people standing on their own? I agree this is difficult but that person may be lonely too. If you do this, I am sure you will soon have a new friend. Second，you can begin the conversation by asking about their likes and dislikes, (理由) which will make you find people with the same interests. Finally， you should try to join in a discussion, (理由) letting people know how friendly you are. I hope you find these ideas useful.,灵活运用超级模仿,一、篇章结构 引出建议 列举建议与理由( 希望) 二、句式模板 1.引出建议可以用： Here are my suggestions on how to .,3.在列举的建议后常常会用起补充说明作用的分词短语、定语从句等说明提出此建议的理由或原因。,三、语篇模板 It is known to us all that nothing is more important than to keep healthy. 引出 The ways for us to keep fit can be suggested as follows. 列举 Firstly, we should have a healthy diet, which means a variety of food including meat, fresh fruits and vegetables.,Secondly, drink more water instead of a lot of drinks. Lastly, do some exercise every day, such as running, swimming, playing basketball and so on, for they help to relax ourselves as well as benefit our health a lot.,二、基础写作 假定你是李华。在一个英文网络论坛上, 你看到一个名叫Grown-up的中学生发帖(post)寻求帮助：,写作内容 请根据以上帖子内容, 给Grow-up回贴, 并包括以下要点： 1.你对这一问题的看法(已给出)； 2.告诉Grown-up要理解而不要伤害母亲； 3.给Grown-up提出解决问题的具体建议: 多与母亲交流; 行动上证明自己已成年。 Hi, Grown-up， .,Hi, Grown-up， As a student of your age, I understand your situation and the problem you are facing is common among us teenagers. However, you should understand your mother and it is wise not to do anything that may hurt your mothers feelings.引出建议 Suggestions on how to deal with the problem can be listed as follows.,列举建议 First， its advisable to talk more with your mom， (理由) which will help you understand each other better. Second， you should learn to do your own things well by yourself， (理由) proving to your mom that you are already a “grown-up”. Its even better if you could share more of the housework， (列举) such as cleaning， washing and cooking.,假设你是小明的好朋友李华，小明参加了一个英语演讲比赛，他对比赛非常担心，向你求助，请你根据以下内容给他写一封建议信。,写作内容 1. 说明回信的意图； 2. 向小明提出建议； 3. 预祝小明比赛成功。 Dear Xiaoming， . Yours， Li Hua,参考范文 Dear Xiaoming, You have told me that you are very nervous about the coming speech contest and I will try to make some suggestions which I hope can help you. In my opinion, you should get well prepared before the speech contest by practicing before a mirror.,Besides, you had better use a brief and concise（简明的） language in your speech so that you can leave a deep impression on the judges. When you are giving the speech, remember to keep smile and even if you forget your words, dont be panic（惊慌的） and just continue your speech, because no one will notice it. Wish you success in the speech! Yours， Li Hua,精华点评,建议信的写作关键在于作者给出建议的语气委婉而中肯, 使对方容易接受。很多考生习惯使用祈使句或者You should的句型表示建议, 这样比较生硬，因此考生转换不同的句型使语言丰富, 如范文中使用了you should., you had better., remember to do等句型。在最后祝愿对方成功的时候, 可以用简明扼要的句型, 如wish you good luck / wish you success / may you succeed, 使文章长短句结合得当。,1. cover topics like. 涵盖的主题有 2. arouse ones interest 激发某人的兴趣 3. get involved in 参与，涉及 4. be well-received 广受欢迎 5. make some suggestions 提一些建议,相关短语,6. protect our environment 保护我们的环境 7. the environmental pollution 环境污染 8. be of great benefit to. 对大有好处 9. get well-prepared (for) (为)做好充分的准备 10. take responsibility to do sth. 有责任做某事,11. the coming speech contest 即将到来的演讲比赛 12. leave a deep impression on 给留下深刻的印象 13. take my suggestion into consideration 考虑我的建议 14. have the chance to do sth. 有机会做某事 15. help students improve their English 帮助学生提高英语水平,1. The main reason is that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities.其主要原因是父母的压力使他们几乎没有时间参加其他活动。 2. The reason why Im late is that I missed the bus. 我迟到的原因是没赶上公共汽车。,相关句式,3. I like it very much mainly for two reasons. 我喜欢它, 主要有两个原因。 4. In my opinion, there are three reasons for this.在我看来, 有三个原因。 5. My views are based on the following reasons. 我的观点是基于以下理由。,6. The reasons for this are as follows. 其理由如下。 7. So I suggest that you take your friends advice.因此, 我建议你接受你朋友的建议。 8. Here I have some suggestions. 这里我有几条建议。,8. It would be better if you could share more of the housework, such as cleaning, washing and cooking.如果你能分担更多的家务, 如扫地、洗衣、做饭, 那就更好了。,1. 在建议倡议的写作中, 应开门见山指出写作目的, 陈述建议或倡议的内容。如：I am writing to give suggestions about. (建议信)或In order to., I am going to make the following suggestions (倡议书)。,2. 建议倡议类型的作文都有相关的一些固定句型, 考生需要熟练掌握使用这些句型和相关的语法。比如, 在句中使用到advise, suggest或advice, suggestion等表示建议的词时, 要考虑到虚拟语气的使用。,广州某电视台打算开办一个面向中学生观 众的英语节目, 新聘任了来自英国的John作为节目编辑助理。现在, John就节目内容向广大中学生征求意见。 写作内容 假如你是学生李华, 建议开办“广州全接触” (All-round Guangzhou)节目。请根据以下节目设想给John写信：,Dear John， I know youre going to set up an English program for middle school students. So Im writing to suggest a program “All-round