2014届高考英语一轮复习第一部分分类写作第五讲议论文课件新人教版.ppt

1写作攻略 (1)把所提供的信息有机地串联起来，使之成为内容 连贯的句子。 (2)确定短文需用的时态和人称。 (3)根据描述内容发表议论。 2高分制造技巧 (1)恰当地使用连词及过渡词，使所给信息连接自然；,(2)该文体中常用一般现在时； (3)整篇文章一般分为三段：第一段提炼观点；第二段叙述或 描写所给信息；第三段发表自己的观点； (4)以日常阅读为基础，注意总结主题词汇，尤其是动词短语， 尽量符合语句表达的地道性要求； (5)注意借鉴佳作范文的成功之处，并且留心在日常写作练习 中反复尝试； (6)经常进行三言两语的话题练习，多给自己增加一些写作表 达的信心。,下图是某大学教授对其学生是否成功的判断标准以及人们对于这种观点的看法。请根据所给内容用英语写一篇短文。,Just as the pie chart above shows ./Just as is shown in the pie chart above .,一、“三准”确保作文上及格线,典例为图表式议论文。体现其特点的句型有：,Opinions are divided among the surveyed people./Different people hold different opinions.,In my opinion/As far as I am concerned .,要点一：最近进行了一项调查。 关键词： 时态： _ 要点二：老师用学生所挣的钱来判断他们的成功。 关键词： 时态：_ 要点三：从上面图画中可以看到，一个老师说一个学生到了四十岁如果没有四千万那就意味着耻辱和失败。 关键词： 时态： _,conduct/carry out,现在完成时,earn,现在完成时,mean,一般现在时,要点四：在接受调查的人群中，观点不同。 关键词： 时态： _ 要点五：正如上面饼状图所示，70%的人反对这位老师的观点。 关键词： 时态：_ 要点六：他们认为老师不应该用金钱来评判他们的学生。 关键词： 时态：_ 要点七：25%的人认为这是鼓励学生赚取更多金钱的一种好 方法。 关键词： 时态：_,be divided/be different/vary,一般现在时,show; oppose/be against,一般现在时,judge by,一般现在时,encourage,一般现在时,要点八：还有一些人没有发表他们的观点。 关键词： 时态： _ 要点九：就我看来，我们应该用一种理性的方法来理解成功。 关键词： 时态：_ 要点十：金钱肯定是衡量成功的一种方式。 关键词： 时态：_ 要点十一：金钱不是衡量成功的唯一方式。 关键词： 时态：_,voice/express ones opinions,一般现在时,in a reasonable way,一般现在时,certainly/surely,一般现在时,measure,一般现在时,要点一： _ 要点二：_ _ 要点三：_ _ _ 要点四：_ _,Recently, a survey has been conducted.,A teacher judges his students success by the money they have earned.,As can be seen from the picture, a teacher says that a student without 40 million yuan at the age of 40 means shame and failure.,Opinions are divided/different/vary among the surveyed people.,要点五： _ _ 要点六：_ _ 要点七：_ _,Just as the pie chart shows, 70% of them oppose the teachers view.,They think that teachers shouldnt judge their students success by money.,25% of them think this is a good way to encourage students to make more money.,要点八：_ _ (用who引导定语从句) 要点九： _ _ 要点十： _ 要点十一：_,There are also a few people who dont voice/express their opinions.,In my opinion/As far as I am concerned, we should understand success in a reasonable way.,Money is certainly one way to measure success.,Money is not the only way to measure success.,二、“四美”走出平庸创高分,升级句式一：用whether引导的同位语从句连接要点一和要点二 _ 升级句式二：用形式主语it改写要点三中的状语从句 _,Recently, a survey has been conducted about whether a teacher should judge his students success by the money they have earned.,It can be seen from the picture that a teacher says that a student without 40 million yuan at the age of 40 means shame and failure.,升级句式三：用what引导的主语从句改写要点五 _ _ 升级句式四：把要点八的定语从句改成非谓语结构 _ _ 升级句式五：把要点十中的certainly改成it is certain that . _,What the pie chart shows is that 70% of them oppose the teachers view.,There are also a few people not voicing/expressing their opinions.,It is certain that money is one way to measure success.,要点三与要点四之间可使用表示转折关系的连词 或副词 ；要点五、六表达的反方观点和要点七表达的正方观点可以使用并列连词 。,but,however,while,第一段：提出论点(要点一、二) 第二段：根据饼状图，介绍各种观点(要点三至八) 第三段：发表自己观点(要点九至十一),Recently, a survey has been conducted about whether a teacher should judge his students success by the money they have earned. It can be seen from the picture that a teacher says that a student without 40 million yuan at the age of 40 means shame and failure. But opinions are divided among the surveyed people. What the pie chart shows is that 70% of them oppose the teachers view. They think that teachers shouldnt judge their students success by money, while 25% of them think this is a good way to encourage students to make more money. There are also a few people not voicing their opinions. As far as I am concerned, we should understand success in a reasonable way.It is certain that money is one way to measure success, but it is not the only way.,_ _ _ _ _ _ _,目前，家长开车接送孩子上学已成为一种普遍现象，人们对此做法褒贬不一，请根据下面表格如实反映人们的不同看法，并发表自己的观点。,支持者的观点,反对者的观点,省时，安全，增加交流,增加家长负担(时间、精力、开支)，容易造成交通堵塞，使学生的依赖性增强,你的观点,参考范文： _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _,Nowadays its a common phenomenon that parents drive their children to school and back home, which causes a heated discussion. We can see the supporters believe that more valuable time can be saved for students to get enough sleep, and they consider it reasonable just for the sake of childrens safety. Meanwhile, it can offer more chances for parents to communicate with their children.,However, other people hold different opinions. They believe that it results in more traffic jams. Besides, driving kids to and from school will undoubtedly add to the parents burdens in aspects like time, energy and expenses. Still, in the long term children may