《Scott人物描写》PPT课件.ppt

Scott Basic Writing Series,基础写作之一,Character description,基础写作简释 学会信息整理：保证信息点的完整性; 每个信息块（句子）必须具有：准确性；合适性 /得体性；正确性基础上的复杂程度。 组词造句：注意句子的语法成分和句子结构的合理性 连句成篇：使用合适的方法（如过渡词等）使五个句子形成连贯的文段。学会分析句与句之间的关系。,审题的步骤是什么？Find out the topic,、 、 、 、 、 6、,文体 writing style,主体时态 main tense,人称 person,信息点整合 integration,不要打草稿，但应有提纲 outline,（有否）标题 topic or title,人物简介的一般步骤： Give the right order,( )教育：education ( )外貌性格 appearance , character ( )生平 big events in his or her life ( in order of time ) ( )评估 evaluation / assessment ( )概况 age, sex, birth-place, background,概,貌,育,平,估,A. 概况: 【译】钟南山1941年出生在广州，他是中国最伟大的医生之一 1) Born in Guangzhou in 1941, Zhong Nanshan is one of the greatest doctors in China. 2) Zhong Nanshan, one of the greatest doctors in China, was born in Guangzhou in 1941. B. 外貌, 性格: 【译】我的历史老师是个漂亮女人，她长着两只大眼睛，留着长发,* 语法，句法高分 tips:,尽量用分词短语、同位语结构，使文章简洁、通顺,My history teacher is a beautiful woman with two big eyes and long hair.,巧用with复合结构做定语,C. 教育经历： 1）Majoring in Science, he graduated from a famous University in the north and after 4 years, he went abroad for further studies. 2）Graduating from the Department of English of Zhongshan University, she went on further education and received a doctors degree. D生平： 1）Not only is he interested in science, but also he has a gift for music. 2）He set a new world record of swimming, which won a gold medal for China Team.,注意尽量用非谓语动词, 使文章精炼,尽量用复合句倒装、非限定定语从句等, 润色文章,E评估： 1）Lei Feng set us a good example ,so all the people spoke highly of him and all respected him . 2）He is one of the greatest novelists in China and will be always remembered as an outstanding man. 3）Li Shizhen made great contributions to medical literature.,注意运用一些动词、形容词等短语、词组,Just guess the man Described in the following sentences,Character introduction,Born on the 18th of January, 1979 in Taiwan, he was raised by his mother and was shy and quiet during his childhood. Showing interest in music, he began learning to play the piano at the age of 3. When his first album was released in 2000, he got the worlds attention. His popularity sky-rocketed (急速上升), and he has received many awards for his songs. His own unique Chinese R&B style is unparalleled by others and he continues to make breakthroughs as he takes risks in attempting new things.,Jay Chou(周杰伦), Born on the 18th of January, 1979 in Taiwan, Jay Chou, a famous singer, was raised by his mother and was shy and quiet during his childhood.,分词结构,同位语,身份与生平,尽量用分词短语、同位语结构，使文章简洁、通顺, Showing interest in music, he began learning to play the piano at the age of 3. When Jays first album was released in 2000, he got the worlds attention. His popularity sky-rocketed (急速上升), which allowed him to received many awards for his songs.,经历,省略句,状语从句,定语从句,注意尽量用非谓语动词, 使文章精炼,尽量用复合句, 倒装, 非限定定语从句等，润色文章, His own unique Chinese R&B style is unparalleled by others and he continues to make breakthroughs as he takes risks in attempting new things.,评价,注意运用一些动词、形容词等短语、词组,1. 他1910年11月2日生于一个富裕家庭, 2005年4月24日因病于北京逝世。(due to) He was born into a rich family on November 2, 1910 and died due to disease in Beijing on April 24,2005. Born into a rich family on November 2, 1910, he passed away due to disease in Beijing on April 24, 2005.,2. 他大学时先从事于医学学习，但后来却改变主意。 When he went to college, he first chose to work on medicine but then changed his mind.,3. 他 19301935年于清华大学学习，之后到英国继续深造. (further education) Between 1930 and 1935, he studied in Tsinghua University and then went to England for further education. 4. 他获得博士学位。 He received his doctors degree.,协士：副学位 associate 学士： bachelor 硕士： master 博士后：post doctor(ate); post doctoral fellow,5. 他一生致力于社会科学 (sociology) 研究，促使 (advance)中国农村经济发展。 He devoted himself to the research on sociology and advanced the development of Chinas rural economy.,致力于: be dedicated to; apply oneself to; commit oneself to; bend oneself to; dedicate ones life to; hammer at; take up with; put ones heart into,费孝通是我国著名的社会学家和社会活动家。请根据下文提示，用英文写一篇短文介绍一下费孝通先生。,参考词汇：社会学家 sociologist; 社会活动家 social activist 【写作要求】使用5个句子表达全部所给的内容，并组织成连贯的短文。,How do you do the Basic Writing ?,The suggested steps:,1. 审题: 确定文体、人称和时态,2. 整合信息: 把所有内容整合成5句,3. 翻译句子：考虑语法结构,4. 连句成篇,5. 检查,费孝通是我国著名的社会学家和社会活动家。请根据下文提示，用英文写一篇短文介绍一下费孝通先生。,参考词汇：社会学家 sociologist; 社会活动家 social activist 【写作要求】使用5个句子表达全部所给的内容，并组织成连贯的短文。,检查 (How to correct?),1、是否恰好五句话？ 、是否每句都含必要信息？ 、可否自由发挥？ 、pants纠错原则： 1) pattern 2) agreement 3) number 4) tense 5) spelling .,Born into a rich family on November 2, 1910, Fei Xiaotong, a famous Chinese sociologist and social activist, passed away due to disease in Beijing on April 24, 2005. When going to college, he first chose to study medicine but then changed his mind. Between 1930 and 1935, he studied in Tsinghua University and then went to England for further education ，where he received his doctors degree. After 1938, he once taught in Tsinghua University and Peking University. Fei, who studied hard all his whole life, devoted himself to the research on sociology and advanced the development of Chinas rural economy.,1. 仿写：假如你叫白云，从广告上得知深圳某公司需要工程师。写信应聘。要求内容包含如下要点。 (1) 姓名：白云，出生于深圳市福田区，年龄27岁。 (2) 2004年毕业于SZSY, 上中山大学, 后留学英国伦敦大学。 (3) 2011年数学方面成果显著，获博士学位。 (4) 英国一家公司想用高薪聘用他，但拒绝了。 (5) 为了报效祖国，于2013年毅然回国。（6）有数学天赋。 注意： 1）介绍必须包括所有内容要点，但不要逐条译成英语。文章首位已经给出，不算字数。 写作要求 只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。 评分标准 句子结构的准确性、连贯性与复杂性，信息内容的完整性。,牛刀小试；Now comes your tern!,Dear Sir, How do you do? Through the ad .I know your company needs an engineer. I would like to have this job. Now let me introduce myself to you. . I will appreciate it very much if you would give me the opportunity. Thank you for your consideration. I am looking forward to your early reply. Sincerely yours, Bai Yun,Born in Futian District, Shenzhen (City), Im Bai Yun, aged 27. I was admitted to Zhongshan University after I graduated from SZSY in 2004 and then was sent to London University in the UK.Through hard work for 4 years, I achieved extraordinary achievement on maths because of my gift for maths and received a doctors degree. A British company tried hard to invite me with a good offer of salary, but I refused it. With the purpose of devoting myself to our China, I came back this year without any hesitation/delay in 2013.,2. 请根据以下信息写一篇介绍霍英东的文章.,牛刀小试: Now comes your turn!, In May 1923, Dr Huo Yingdong was born from a poor family in Hong Kong. It was at the age of ten that his father died. After 1955, he was engaged in architecture, shipping, petroleum and soon became a famous person at home and abroad. Ever since the beginning of the reform and open policy, he has totally donated over 10 billion dollars to sponsor education, culture, sports, and public welfare in Mainland. He has made great contributions to constructing and benefiting our country, which makes him a Moving China Hero.,3. 例文：假如你叫李明，你的美国朋友布鲁斯开始学习中国文学，来信询问鲁迅其人及作品。你回信介绍鲁迅，内容如下 （1）鲁迅，原名周树人，浙江绍兴人 （2）为了国家，弃医从文。 （3）著名的作家，思想家，而且还是中国现代文学的开创者。 （4）小说被译成多种文字，并被制成电影，如阿Q正传、祝福这两部影片。 （5）一些作品还被选入了中学和大学课本。 参考词汇：阿Q正传：The True Story of AH Q 祝福：The New Years Sacrifice 注意： 1）介绍必须包括所有内容要点，但不要逐条译成英语。 写作要求 只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。文章首尾已给出，不算字数。 评分标准 句子结构的准确性，信息内容的完整性。,牛刀小试: Now comes your turn!,Dear Bruce, I was glad to know you began to study Chinese literature. Now let me tell you something about Lu Xun . _. Since you are learning Chinese literatures, I think reading Lu Xuns novels will help you to know more about it. Yours, Li Ming,Find out the good sentences in the possible version and remember them w