英语观点对比类作文写作技巧.ppt

观点对比类作文 写作技巧,高三英语写作,-How to write an argumentation（议论文）,书面表达(满分30分) 暑假即将来临，你班同学讨论了假期计划，提出了不同看法，请根据提示写一篇关于讨论的英语短文，并谈谈你的看法。(2006年陕西卷）,注意：1.词数100-120 2.短文必须包括表中所列要点。 3.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 The summer holiday is coming. Our class have had a discussion about what to do during the holiday.,the structure of the article,topic sentence,for the opinion,against the opinion,ending sentence,diamond,convenient and comfortable cost less / save money,lose the chance of getting to know the outside world,2. increase ones knowledge and widen ones horizons/views,spend more money and go through some trouble on the way,beginning,have different views on sth / react to sth in different ways. differ in their attitudes towards sth.,(待在家中),(外出旅游),The summer holiday is coming. Our class have had a discussion about what to do during the holiday.,some,others,The summer holiday is coming. Our class have had a discussion about what to do during the holiday. Students react to this problem in different ways. Some are in favor of staying at home. They say its both convenient and comfortable. Whats more,they can set aside money for other purposes. But They will lose the chance of getting to know the outside world. However, others prefer to go out traveling as it can enrich their knowledge and broaden their views. But they will spend more money and go through some trouble while traveling.,In my opinion, it would be much better to stay at home. Actually I have more reasons for it. When staying at home,I get to do what I like,such as reading books,watching TV,and helping my parents with the housework. In a word, to stay at home is better than to travel.,the structure of the article,topic sentence,for the opinion,against the opinion,ending sentence,diamond,介绍讨论的主题(开头句)：,我们举行了一场讨论，讨论内容是 We had a discussion about whether it is necessary to start learning English from childhood 我们已经作了一个调查，调查内容是学生如何选择高考志愿 Weve had a survey on how to choose their courses, majors and universities. 我写信是要告诉你我们的一场讨论，讨论内容是 We have held a discussion about whether it is good or not for a top student to share a desk with a slower student.,过渡句,Opinions are divided on this issue. Opinions are mainly divided into two groups. Different people, however, have different opinions on this matter. Different people, however, think quite differently on this matter.,在这个问题上大家意见有分歧。,主要有两种不同意见。,然而，在这件事上不同的人有不同的看法。,介绍正方观点：,Sixty percent of the students are for the idea. Sixty percent of the students think it necessary to Some people think that According to them, all of us should. Some believe that,进一步介绍正方观点,Whats more, we can as well as Besides, its , which ,介绍反方观点,However, of the students think On the other hand, of the students think However, others have different opinions. But of the students think Others argue that In their opinion,进一步介绍反方观点,Whats worse Whats more In addition, Besides, Plus, First, Second, Third, ,总结句(未达成一致),In short, no agreement has been reached yet. So far, no agreement has been reached. In short, the students have not arrived at any agreement yet.,本人观点：As far as I am concerned, . (In my opinion, .; Its my opinion that) For one reason,. For another reason In a word,.,对比类写作 实战模版,议论文的框架-对比观点题型 （1） 要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法。 1 有一些人认为 2 另一些人认为 3 我的看法 The topic of -（主题）is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions about it. Some people say A is their favorite. They hold their view for the reason of -（支持A的理由一）What is more, -(理由二). Moreover, -(理由三).,While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons. Firstly,-(支持B的理由一). Secondly (besides),-（理由二）. Thirdly (finally),-(理由三). From my point of view, I think -（我的观点）. The reason is that -(原因). As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, the former is surely a wise choice .,（2） 给出一个观点，要求考生反对这一观点 Some people believe that -（观点一）. For example, they think -（举例说明）And it will bring them -(为他们带来的好处). In my opinion, I never think this reason can be the point. For one thing,-(我不同意该看法的理由一). For another thing, -(反对的理由之二) Form all what I have said, I agree to the thought that -(我对文章所讨论主题的看法),(3) 不同观点列举型（ 选择型 ） There is a widespread concern over the issue that _作文题 目. But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person. A majority of people think that _ 观点一_. In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place, _原因一_.Furthermore, in the second place, _原因二_. So it goes without saying that _观点一_.,People, however, differ in their opinions on this matter. Some people hold the idea that_观二_. In their point of view, on the one hand， _原因一_. On the other hand, _原因二_. Therefore, there is no doubt that _观点二_. As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that _观点一或二_. It is not only because _, but also because _. The more _, the more _.,词汇,句型 , 语法多样化,1.覆盖了所有的要点 2. 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇 3. 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑,要点全,连接词,如何算是一篇好文章？,1.(因为)_ his help, I finished the work at last.,Thanks to,As a result of,Owing to,Due to,因为,Because of,/with,2.More roads will have to be built with more cars, _（所以）well have less field to grow rice.,therefore,So,as a result/consequence,thus,结果,3.The rent is reasonable, _, the location is perfect. 房租很合理，另外，位置也很好。,whats more,moreover/furthermore,in addition,besides,另外(递进）,4. The young man didnt enjoy his old job. _(相反 ) he finds the new job very interesting.,On the contrary,However,转折,But/yet/while,5. _(总之), we should make good use of computer.,In general,In a word/all in all,总结,In short/brief,Generally speaking,6._(我认为) , students had better not buy a cellphone.we should spend time and money on other more important things.,As far as Im concerned,In my opinion/its my opinion that,个人观点,I think/believe,作文模板1,_ had a discussion about whether_. Opinions are divided on this issue. _of the students think _ should _. _. Whats more, _. On the other hand, _ of the students think _ shouldnt _. Whats worse, _. In short, _ have not arrived at any agreement yet.,本人观点：As far as I am concerned . /(In my opinion, .; Its my opinion that), For one reason,. For another reason In a word,.,模板2 We had a heated discussion about/on . Students views/ideas/opinions on it vary/differ from person to person. Some students say / think / believe that However, others hold the view that As far as I am concerned, I am in favor of the first/second view./ I would like to .The reasons are as follows. First, Secondly, In conclusion / In a word ,模板3 There is a widespread concern over the issue that （作文题目）But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person. A majority of people think that _ 观点一_. In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place,原因一.Furthermore, in the second place, 原因二. So it goes without saying that观点一.,People, however, differ in their opinions on this matter. Some people hold the idea that观点二. In their point of view, for one thing，原因一. For another thing,原因二. Therefore, there is no doubt that观点二_. As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that观点一或二. It is not only because _, but also because _. ,最近，你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论。讨论的主题是：公园要不要收门票？请你根据下表提供的信息，给报社写一封信，客观地介绍讨论情况。 注意： 1、信的开头已为你写好。 2、词数：100左右。 3、参考词汇：门票：entrance fee Dear Editor, Im writing to tell you about the discussion weve had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks.,2002年高考题范文,Dear Editor, Im writing to tell you about the discussion weve had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks(提出问题