开放式作文指导FreeWriting.ppt

Teaching aim: how to help the Ss write such composition Teaching difficulty: how to check over the requirement and give reasonable explanations to support the argument. Teaching methods: a step-by-step approach,Free Writing,Free Writing,Give your writing wings and let it fly away to your ideal destination.,How do we understand “free”?,The word “free” means you are free to express your own opinions. 思维没有定式，结论不唯一，但要自圆其说。,开放作文 （15分） 字数要求：词数不少于60 开放作文评分:以内容和语言定档定分 立意明确，逻辑清晰 (立意-细节描述） 语言达意,Suggested time: 10-12minutes,第四档（1215）很好地达到总体要求。 有效结合材料，观点明确； 内容连贯、条理清晰； 语法运用得体，词汇丰富，几乎没有语言错误。 第三档（ 811）基本达到总体要求。 有效结合材料，观点基本明确； 内容基本连贯，有一定的条理性； 语言运用基本得体，有少量错误，但能表达观点。,第二档（47）未达到总体要求。 未有效结合材料； 内容松散，条理性较差； 语言运用较差，错误较多，但基本能表达观点。 第一档（13）未达到总体要求。 未结合材料； 内容混乱，缺乏条理性； 语言运用差，错误很多，严重影响观点表达。,用自己的语言对材料进行简明、清楚叙述,紧承叙述，引出观点（话题） （力求自然、准确）,列论点，做联系实际阐释 （力求深度、力度）,总结，升华主旨（ 力求完整、有力）,起,承,议,合,导材料-解材料-议材料-圆材料,本次作文的主要问题,1、审题： 看不懂材料，造成立意错误。 游离于材料，造成主次混淆。 2、写作技巧： 大篇幅复制原材料，造成入题迟缓。 展开议论时，只见干条款，不见阐释，造成议论空洞 3、思维能力： 比较简单，不够活跃。 4、语言基本功： 单词，语法，语句错误多。 5 书写潦草,导文1: 评分，寻主要病根,通看两文，寻近日写作中的高频语法和语言错误,导文2: 评分，寻主要病根,a good news,and hope,share its beauty to,should gives,wish becomes,with,could become,There are so many people hope to perform ,who hope to,become more goodlook,appealing,hoping,give,导文3: 评分; 加过渡词，让全文锦上添花,表导入： according to， in my opinion， as far as I am concerned，as for me 表递进： besides， whats more， whats worse， furthermore， in addition to,参考过渡词,表因果: thanks to，as a result of，due to，owing to, therefore，thus 表强调: above all，indeed，surely，certainly，of course，at least，obviously,表转折或对比: however，on the other hand，on the contrary，in spite of, whereas 表列举: for one thing. and for another ; first(ly)，second(ly)，third(ly)， finally/ last but not least 表总结: in short，in a word，in conclusion, in brief，generally speaking， to sum up，all in all,表举例: for example/instance, take. for example, such as, as follows, and so on等,Have a try !,写作一 (满分l5分) 请结合材料，按要求用英文写作。 In the 2014 CCTV Spring Festival Gala，two foreign stars，French celebrity Sophie Marceau and Korean actor Lee Minho are invited to perform on the stageWhat is your opinion of this practice? 要求： 1应紧扣材料，有明确的观点； 2词数不少于60； 3在答题卡上作答。,赞成 be for ( the idea that.) be in favor of approve of cannot agree more with 反对 be against be opposed to (doing) sth oppose object to (doing) sth,实用模版 Para.1 简述该问题, 陈述自己的观点 As to the., I personally think Para.2 The reasons can be listed as follows : /There are several reasons accounting for_.First of all,. 理由一和阐释. Whats more, 理由二和阐释. Besides,理由三.和阐释 Para.3 To sum up, 总结与升华,佳作展示台,( for ) As far as Im concerned, Im OK with the practice of inviting foreign stars to the Gala. The reasons are as follows. With the globalization of most aspects, it is a natural tendency to see different cultural elements combined together for the sake of diversity and fun, particularly in a grand show like the Spring Festival Gala. Besides, the audience of the Gala are so varied in terms of their tastes and needs. There are even some foreign audience watching the show. Therefore, only by combining some,foreign elements can Gala satisfy the needs of minor audience, who , by no means can be ignored. In a word, it is fully acceptable and advisable to invite foreign celebrities to the Spring Festival Gala .,Homework : 请根据下面提示，写一篇短文。词数不少于60。 In an English speech competition, you are asked to describe the following picture and explain to the judges how you understand it.,Describe a picture（描图）,Interpret its implied meaning Point out its implications in our life （析图）,Give your own opinions / suggestions/solutions（议图）,Transition,From the picture I can see a pair of proud compasses and a hard-working pencil. The compasses are drawing a circle with ease, while the pencil is drawing a line with great effort. The picture is more than what it can show us. I think the compasses are reasonable to be proud because no one else can do the job better. At