高考英语书面表达六步法.ppt

Writing skills,How to improve your writing,刘瑞春 2009-12-23,主要特点,记叙为主 稍加议论 旁带说明,空间顺序,时间顺序,逻辑顺序,能力要求,书面表达,六 步 法,书面表达六步法,幻灯片 23,书面表达六步法,一、审题,认真读题然后找出基本要素:5W1H,何 时 何 地 何 人 为 何 如 何 做 了 何 事,书面表达六步法,二、抓要点,确定主要行为，配动词，注意时态、语态及搭配的副词、介词等,What happened?,书面表达六步法,三、扩展成句,形成基本语义单位，把要点变成完整的句子，注意连词,Who did what?,书面表达六步法,四、连句成文,时间 空间 细节 连贯 呼应,词与词搭配 句与句相连,书面表达六步法,五、查错改错,要尽量剔除错误,主谓一致吗？时态正确吗？时态正确吗？有“半截话”吗？,书面表达六步法,六、誊写,卷面整洁不一定加分， 卷面潦草一定要扣分！,如何使用恰当的连接词,May 25, Sunday Cloudy This morning I went to the shop to change the coat I bought yesterday. The salesgirl treated me coldly. She didnt admit the coat was sold in her shop. She said that I made it dirty. She gave various excuses to refuse my request. I quarreled with her. The manager turned up. He asked what was the matter. He knew all about this, he apologized to me and criticized (批评) the salesgirl. They changed another coat for me. I said goodbye to them and took it home happily.,May 25, Sunday Cloudy This morning I went to the shop to change the coat I bought yesterday. _The salesgirl treated me coldly. _She didnt admit the coat was sold in her shop. _She said that I made it dirty. _She gave various excuses to refuse my request. _I quarreled with her. _The manager turned up. He asked what was the matter. _He knew all about this, he apologized to me and criticized (批评) the salesgirl. They changed another coat for me. I said goodbye to them and took it home happily.,However,At the beginning,Later,In a word,I got so angry that,After that/ As soon as/ The moment,Just at that moment,Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to our school !, This village is a small one with/which has nearly 100 families and about 500 people.,It used to be very poor. However,it has changed a lot since 1978 ,and has been developing very fast.,People here live a much better life than before .,书面表达：例 1,Now it is taking on a new look.,In the past, the school here was very small and most children couldnt afford to go to school. ,But now it has been rebuilt and, which has 4 storeys is the most beautiful one in the village.,All the school-age children can study here., Whats more,they enjoy free education., May you enjoy your stay here,the newly built teaching building,/ May you have a pleasant time here!,Thank you.,返回,How to enrich your writing,1. To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things.（使用名词性从句） 2. Though Im weak, Ill make the effort. (使用倒装句) 3. He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.(使用强调句型) 4. I passed the physics exam because of your help.(用虚拟语气）,What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things.,Have a try,Weak as I am, Ill make the effort.,It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened.,I couldnt have passed the physics exam but for your help.,5. She walked out of the lab and many students followed her. (使用过去分词) 6. They sang and laughed as they went back to school.( 使用V-ing形式) 7.I wont believe what he says. （使用状语从句） 8.If you study hard, you will make rapid progress. （用并列句） 9He had no sooner come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad. (使用倒装句),No sooner had he come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad.,Followed by many students, she walked out of the lab.,Singing and laughing, they went back to school.,No matter what he says, I wont believe.,Study hard and youll make rapid progress.,看图作文举例,Picture 1,go over,go to bed,nine oclock,stay up,wake up,get up,Picture 2,get dressed,wash oneself,rush into,get my schoolbag,prepare,go to school,breakfast,brush teeth,wash face,Picture 3,ran out,get on my bike,ride to school,as fast as,Picture 4,get to,to my surprise,close,realize,Sunday,find,the school gate,Some effective sentences of the possible version as examples.,I often stay up late.,I often stay up late to go over my lessons for the college entrance examinations.,I go over my lessons for the college entrance examinations.,to,Some effective sentences of the possible version as examples.,Last night I went to bed at 12 oclock.,Last night I didnt go to bed until 12 oclock.,Some effective sentences of the possible version as examples.,I woke up at 9 oclock this morning.,When I woke up this morning, it was already 9 oclock.,When,already,it,When,it,already,Some effective sentences of the possible version as examples.,I rushed into the living room.,I rushed into the living room, where Mother was preparing breakfast.,where,Mother was preparing breakfast in the living room.,the living room,the living room,the living room,Some effective sentences of the possible version as examples.,Mother couldnt say anything.,Before she could say anything, I got my schoolbag, ran out and got on my bike.,I got my schoolbag.,I ran out.,I got on my bike.,1,4,2,3,Some effective sentences of the possible version as examples.,I realized it was Sunday today .,It was then that I realized it was Sunday today.,Possible version:,June 17, Sunday I often stay up late to go over my lessons for the college entrance examinations. Last night I didnt go to bed until 12 oclock. When I woke up this morning, it was already 9 oclock. I got dressed and washed myself quickly. Then I rushed into the living room, where Mother was preparing breakfast. Before she could say anything, I got my schoolbag, ran out and got on my bike. I rode as fast as I could. It seemed only a few minutes before I got to the school