书面表达作文复习指导.ppt

书面表达,How to write a good composition?,据悉，北京至广州高速铁路2011年全线贯通，全程仅需要7小时。假如你是大明，请给美国朋友Jim写一封80词左右的书信，向他推荐乘坐京广高速列车在中国残光旅游，信得开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。,Dear Jim, Im glad to hear youll come to China. Now let me give you some advice on your trip. The Beijing-Guangzhou high-speed railway will only take you seven hours to travel from Beijing to Guangzhou. So, its convenient for you to enjoy different places of interest along the way. As you know, Beijing is an old city with a long history. In Beijing, you can visit the Forbidden City, the Great Wall and so on. Guangzhou is a beautiful city which lies in the south of China. You can have a good time at Chime Long Water Park there. Enjoy yourself. Yours, Daming,下星期三是你们学校的“读书日”，请你根据下面的要求提示，写一篇倡议书，倡议同学们多读书。 要点提示： 1.看电视、上网、购物、闲逛等占用了许多学生大部分课余时间。 2.读书可以让我们获取知识，让我们快乐充实，有助于我们学习和成长。 3.倡议同学们尽可能多去图书馆读书、读好书。 要求： 1.句子要通顺，语义连贯，符合逻辑； 2.不要逐句翻译要点，可以适当发挥； 3. 80词左右。,Hello, boys and girls. Next Wednesday is Reading Day of our school. Have you been reading these days? Many students spend most of their spare time watching TV, surfing the Internet, shopping or hanging out. Why not spend more time reading? Reading can not only help us gain more knowledge but also make us happy. Its helpful for our studies and lives. So, I call on us students to go to the library as often as possible. Read more books. The more, the better.,To write a good composition is just like building a good house!,First, we need a good blueprint and the materials, or we can also call it design.,Design,1. 确定文体 书信、日记、便条、通知 2. 确定时态基调 一般现在时、一般过去时 3. 分析“破”题 理解提示语、提炼内容要点、明确要点之间的关系、切忌遗漏要点 4. 罗列词组，避重就轻 条条大道通罗马，遇到阻力请绕行,Design,1. 确定文体 便条 2. 确定时态基调 一般现在时 3. 分析“破”题 内容要点 服用说明全部内容、预防感冒小贴士 要点之间的关系 偶有瞌睡感应属药后正常反应，意为提醒Mike不必担心；预防感冒小贴士应属作者对Mike的关心体贴 切忌遗漏要点 告诉Mike如何预防感冒,罗列词组，避重就轻 one or two pills each time; one or two pieces of them each time three times a day; sometimes feel like sleeping; sometimes feel sleepy have fish, wine or hot food; have fish, wine or sth. hot / sth. like Sichuan / Hunan food tips on preventing yourself from getting cold; ways to take good care of yourself and keep healthy / how to keep healthy, for example,Next, we need to start to build it . We can also call it management,Management,1. 连词成句、覆盖要点 用自己最有把握的表达方式把确定的要点写成句子，不打无把握之战 2. 巧妙组合、顺畅过度、上下连贯、语意畅达 注意搭配、运用恰当的关联词,Then, we should know how to make our compositions better. We can also call it Decorating,Decorating,1. 推敲检查、查漏补缺 是否有错别字、是否要点不全、是否主谓一致、是否表达得体、是否句型正确、是否有中文式英语表达 2. 运用高级表达、提升文章档次 高级表达法、西方惯用表达、习语谚语等方法修改润色 To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things. What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things.,Finally, we can move into the house now! we can also call it Residing-in,Residing-in,1. 注意书写美观、重视细节标点 书写是否美观、标点是否正确、全篇是否对齐 a-u c-e-l f-t h-k-n i-z m-vn o-U r-v t-e u-w rr-w 2. 边誊写边检查，注意是否词数合格 留心拼写、注意词性是否正确；是否词数不够,(One Possible Vision) This medicine is used for curing cough, headache and something like that caused by cold. Take one or two pills each time, and three times a day before meals. Sometimes you might feel like sleeping after you take it. But it doesnt matter. Dont have fish, wine or hot food these days while youre taking this medicine. And youll be fine in three or five days. By the way, I think youd better take good care of yourself and keep healthy. For example, put on more clothes when you go outside on a cold day; keep the air in your room clean; have more water, fruit and vegetables. And the most important of all, do more sports every day to be stronger. I wish youll be all right soon.,中学生学习时间长、压力大，专家建议学生每天课后应采取适当的方式放松自己。你代表班级在一次 “The Ways for Students to Relax”的学校座谈中与二(1)班的Terry讨论了这一话题，请根据他的观点和你自己的观点，用英语给你的外籍教师Mr. Griffin写一篇有关这次讨论的汇报材料。,注意：1. 开头和结尾已经写好 2. 可以适当增加谈论话题时经常用到的话语,使内容连贯 3. 所写内容必须包括上面表格中他的观点和你自己至少三个观点 4. 词数：70字左右。,Show Time!,Mr. Griffin Recently I have had a discussion about The Ways for Students to Relax with Terry, a student from Class One Grade Two . (As we study too long every day, every student should choose ways to relax.) In his opinion, the best ways are watching TV and playing computer games. He also believes that sometimes hanging out with friends isnt a bad way. However, Im not quite agree with him. In my opinion, watching TV or playing computer games is not a good way to help us relax. I think listening to music and playing sports are good ways because they can help us keep healthy. I often play Pingpong after class and I find it really helpful to both my health and my study. Besides, I think chatting with our friends isnt a bad way. I think it can help me get on better with my friends. Terry,B)假如你是李雷，你收到英国朋友Jack的一封信，他希望交一些中国笔友。你给他写一封回信，将你的朋友魏华介绍给他。内容应包括“出生年月、生活地方、父母情况、他的兴趣爱好、最擅长的科目、你们在一起常做些什么和他长大后准备干什么”。 根据以上要求，请你用6070个单词来完成这封短信。要求意思连贯、符合逻辑。信的开头和结尾已写在试卷上。(本题共10分，广东02年中考),No. 9 Minzu Road, Zhongshan City, Guangdong, China 528400 June 22nd,2002 Dear Jack, I am glad to receive your letter and know you want to have some pen friends in China. Now let me tell you something about my friend, Wei Hua, a student of Class 3, Grade 2 in Yucai Middle School. He would like to know something about your school life and your country. I m sure you will be good friends soon. Yours, Li Lei,C)书面表达(共10分，02年湖南益阳）) 请代为韩梅给英语老师Mr Smith出写一张病假条，可选用下列单词或短语(有的要作必要的变动)。请假条的开头部分已给出。(字数5070),June 20,2002 Dear Mr Smith, Im sorry to tell you that,June,20,2002 Dear Mr Smith, Im sorry to tell you that Im not feeling well today. I have caught a bad cold because I went swimming in the river yesterday afternoon. The doctor told me to stay in bed for two days. So I cant go to school today and tomorrow. I hope I 11 get well very soon. Thank you. Your student Han Mei,书面表达(共计15分，02年河北，感谢信) 根据提示和要求完成下面短文。 假如你(Li Lei)在去年夏令营认识的一个朋友Jim从英国给你寄来一件礼物一件红色的衬衫，并附有一封信。在信中他向你问好，他想知道你近来在忙些什么。请你给他写一封回信(100个词左右)表示感谢。回信要包括以下内容： 1向Jim问好并对他表示感谢。 2礼物是你最喜欢的颜色，疋寸很合适，你非常喜欢。 3告诉Jim你近来很好，上周刚过完生日，生日聚会很热闹。询问Jim的近况，并表示希望他能来中国。,How are you? Many thanks for the shirt! Im very happy to hear from you again. I love the shirt very much, Jim. And red is my favourite colour! You remembered! It7 s just my size. Every time I wear it, I will think of you. Im fine here in China Last week I had a birthday party. Many of my classmates came and my mother made us a lot of good food. We really had a wonderful time together. How, are you doing in England, Jim? I miss you very much. I always miss the days we were together last summer. I hope you can come to China some day. Please write back soon. Your friend, Li Lei,Dear Jim,June 21st, 2002 65 Zhonghua street Shijiazhuang 050000 Hebei China,【实例】（1997年江西中考题） 请你以校长室的名义拟写一个书面通知，告诉同学们明天去参加植树活动。 提示：明天是植树节，天气暖和。你们不上课，去公园植树。早晨八点在学校门口集合，骑自行车去。中午在那里吃饭，请带好水和食物。（词数：5070words）,【分析】 书写通知要注意格式。此题要先定好正文部分的工作或活动是 Tree Planting Day，plant the trees；参加的方式和要求是meet at the school gate，go there by bike，bring some food and water；参加对象是the students（we）；该活动集合的时间是at 8：00am ，发通知的单位是Headmaster Office。,【参考范文】 NOTICE To morrow is Tree Planting DayIt is warm You will have no classesWe shall plant trees in the park We will meet at the school gate at 8：00in the morning and go there by bikeWe will（shall）have lunch therePlease bring some water and food with youDont be late Headmaster Office Mar11，1997,英语写作常用的几种时态,一般现在时：常用于一般性的介绍、描写中， 常见错误是主语为第三人称单数时漏加S 被动式：is/ are + done,用于过去时间里发生的事情（日记文体中）， 常见的错误是，写错动词的过去式； 被动式：was / were + done,用于将要发生的事件中：will + do 或 be going to do ,常见错误是，will 或 to 之后不使用动词原形； 被动式：will be + done ;