2015届高三英语一轮写作技能培优：第1阶段第4讲第1课时如何写好并列句.ppt

第三部分 写作技能培优,第四讲 如何写出精彩高级句 第一课时 如何写好并列句,并列句就是由并列连词或分号连接两个分句而组成的句子。 一、并列句的分类 1联合关系 由并列连词and或not only.but also.连接的两个分句。 Work hard and you will succeed sooner or later. 努力工作，迟早你会成功的。,2转折关系 多用连词but，yet，while等连接两个分句。 Some people waste food while others dont have enough food to eat. 一些人浪费食物然而其他人没有足够食物吃。 (2012高考陕西卷书面表达)Ms. Li spent a wonderful time with us，but we know that we cannot thank her enough for all her hard work and guidance. 李老师和我们度过了一段快乐的时光，但我们知道对她所有的付出和指导再怎么感谢也不为过。,3选择关系 主要由连词or(或者；否则)，either.or.(要么要么),otherwise(要不然)等连词连接。 Either you didnt understand this problem，or you were not careful enough. 要么你不懂这个问题，要么你不够细心。 4因果关系 多用连词for和so连接。 He told me to do it，so I did it. 他让我这样做，于是我就这样做了。,5时间关系 由并列连词when连接两个分句,表示“就在这时突然”。 We were having a meeting when there was power failure. 我们正在开会，这时突然停电了。,二、并列句的高级表达形式 1并列句的省略 当并列句的结构前后相同时，可以根据句意省掉后面或前面相同的部分。 Reading makes a full man；conference(makes) a ready man；writing an exact man. 读书使人充实；讨论使人机智；写作使人准确。 2祈使句and/or(else)/otherwise Study hard or(she)/otherwise you will not pass the exam. 努力学习，否则你不会通过考试。,.基础巩固(在下面的句子中填入适当的连词) 1_ did he speak correctly，_ he _ spoke easily. 2He tried hard _ he didnt succeed. 3He must have been in a hurry，_ it was getting dark. 4He was walking on the street _ he found an old man fall over. 5Come early _ youll miss the first bus. 6Use your head _ youll find a way.,Not only,but,also,but,for,when,or(else)/otherwise,and,.能力提升 1用并列句翻译下面的句子 (1)前门大街是一条步行街，但是你可以乘当当车去看电影。 _ _ (2)这条著名大街的历史可以上溯到600年前，共约800米长。 _ _,Qianmen Street is a pedestrian street，but you can enjoy the trolley cars to go to see a movie in the theatres.,The famous street dates back to six hundred years ago and has a length of about 800 meters.,(3)另外，它也是一条商业街,街道两边分布着300多家商店。 _ _,It is also a commercial street，and lined with more than 300 shops.,2选用以上句子组建一篇介绍前门大街的小短文(适当加入连词、调整句式结构) _ _ _ _ _,One possible version： Qianmen Street is a pedestrian street，but you can enjoy the trolley cars to go to see a movie in the theatres.First of all，the famous street dates back to six hundred years ago and has a length of abo