课件讨论严肃话题Talkingaboutsomethingseriou.ppt

,讨论严肃话题 Talking about something serious,Part six:,范例引路：,MODEL WRITING,某学校附近准备兴建一座化工厂，现征求师生的意见，师生赞成、反对比例如图。请你以该校学生名义，以“There are other things to consider besides money” 为题，写一篇100词左右的短文，陈述反对在此建厂的理由。 反对的理由： 1、严重污染饮用水，防范措施不充分。 2、造成严重的空气污染。 3、侵占学生游戏玩乐的场所。 同意的理由： 1、可以为本市赚钱 。 2、提供就业机会,It is reported that a new chemical works will be built here. Certainly, it is a good idea for developing economy. But on the other hand, it also causes a big problem. Firstly, many people dont agree to build this works. It will pollute the drinking water though they have promised to do something to prevent pollution. Secondly, the smoke and the soot will bring lots of illness, which is dangerous for every one. Thirdly, the chemical works will be built where we students play games and have sports after school. If built, we will have no place for fun. Because of the above reasons, we hope that the chemical works wont be built near our school.,It is reported that a new chemical works will be built here. Certainly, it is a good idea for developing economy. But on the other hand, it also causes a big problem. Firstly, many people dont agree to build this works. It will pollute the drinking water though they have promised to do something to prevent pollution. Secondly, the smoke and the soot will bring lots of illness, which is dangerous for every one. Thirdly, the chemical works will be built where we students play games and have sports after school. If built, we will have no place for fun. Because of the above reasons, we hope that the chemical works wont be built near our school.,五个基本环节 Five basic steps to discuss something serious 一、开头 Starting 二、提出观点 Giving ideas 三、强化论点 Developing 四、提出反驳 Arguing 五、得出结论 Coming to a conclusion,规律总结,一、开头（Starting） 1、陈述事实式 Once again university graduates start a new round of job hunting. Now in the country areas, there are many children out of school. 2、设问式 Right is right. Right? But is left wrong? (Is Left Wrong?),二、提出观点（Giving ideas） 1、借助常识： It is known to all that smoking is harmful to our health. 2、直抒己见： I think it is useful to build a new dam across the river. We believe that doing exercises every day will do us a lot of good. 3、巧用成语： “Where there is a will, there is a way.” It is the same in learning English.,三、强化论点（Developing） 1、First,Second,ThirdFinally 2、Firstly,Secondly,ThirdlyFinally 3、First of all,Then,Next,At last 4、Furthermore;Besides;Moreover 5、Whats more,;At the same time,; What is worse,四、提出反驳（Arguing） 1、but, yet, still; however; although 2、on the other hand; on the contrary; in spite of; even though; At the same time 3、60 percent of the students thinkand about 10 percent give no idea, while the rest of the students are strongly against the suggestion.,五、得出结论（Coming to a conclusion） 1. Finally;Therefore 2. In a word;In short;In the end; In other words;As a result;In all 3. Generally speaking 4. As I have shown; As has been stated; As we (you) all know,习作评析,某学校附近准备兴建一座化工厂，现征求师生的意见，师生赞成、反对比例如图。请你以该校学生名义，以“There are other things to consider besides money” 为题，写一篇100词左右的短文，陈述反对在此建厂的理由。 反对的理由： 1、严重污染饮用水，防范措施不充分。 2、造成严重的空气污染。 3、侵占学生游戏玩乐的场所。 同意的理由： 1、可以为本市赚钱 。 2、提供就业机会,The majority of the students and teachers in our school, including me, are against the construction of a chemical works near our school though the rest 10% do agree to the plan. They hold the view that the works will make lots of money for our city and provide new jobs for the local people, but we think it will do us more harm than good. First, the drinking water will be badly polluted even if some measures will be taken. On the other hand, the air over the city will be polluted too. Worse still, the site of the chemical works has been the only place where we students play games and have sports after school. Where would we go if it were occupied? In a word, we hope the factory wont be built here.,The majority of the students and teachers in our school, including me, are against the construction of a chemical works near our school though the rest 10% do agree to the plan. They hold the view that the works will make lots of money for our city and provide new jobs for the local people, but we think it will do us more harm than good. First, the drinking water will be badly polluted even if some measures will be taken. On the other hand, the air over the city will be polluted too. Worse still, the site of the chemical works has been the only place where we students play games and have sports after school. Where would we go if it were occupied? In a word, we hope the factory wont be built here.,半开放与开放性作文,Part seven:,作业检查：目前，有不少中学生利用寒暑假期间打工赚钱去年暑假期间，你曾在一家饭店打工当服务员打工之余，你有如下感受： 过去常常向父母要钱，现在你用自己赚的钱，心里很激动 你明白了金钱的价值，也学会了一些与他人相处的方法 积累了一些工作经验和社会经验，为以后步入社会作了些准备 总之，你度过了一个愉快的假期 要求：不要逐字逐句翻译，词数左右,典型错误:1.词: the valuable of money ;many student ; a English corner ;the important of protecting;at March 12th 2.句子： （1) I fell/was exciting (2)The job was very tired (3) I getted many experiences (4) I was worked in a restaurant (5) I think it will good for my future (6) Its not easily for my parents to own money (7) I could buy something what I want with my own money (8) I hope use the experiences in our job when I leave school (9) I used to use money which from my parents,One possible version: Nowadays it is usual for us students to find part-time jobs in the holidays. Last summer, I worked as a waiter in a restaurant, and I learned a lot. Firstly, it was the first time for me to earn money on my own, so I felt extremely excited. Now I can buy what I want without asking my parents for money as before. Secondly, during the period I learned not only the value of money but also the way to get along with others. Thirdly, I gained some working experience as well as social experience, which I found a good preparation for the world outside school. It was good to my future work. In a word, I had a wonderful vacation.,作业检查：假设你是李华.今天(2004年9月20日,星期一),你代表你校学生就学生的课外活动向来访的美国学生进行了介绍,并且你们进行了交流.请根据下面图画内容提示,用英语写一篇日记. 主意:1.日记的格式和开头已给出; 2.词数:100左右; 3.参考词汇:代表on behalf of Monday Sept.20,2004 Sunday Today Im very pleased to have met the visiting American students. _.,典型病句： 1.Everyone have a good time that day 2.I was on behalf of school met them 3.I talked something about English corner 4. Many students active take part in English corner 5. There are a lot of students attend/take part in it 6.The American visitors was very pleased to see it. 7. The students life are very colorful 8. It teached us to learn lots of things.,One possible version:,Monday September 20,2004 Sunny Today Im very pleased to have met the visiting American students.,This morning we had a friendly talk with them. On behalf of all the students, I told them about our after-class activities: Our school holds the English Corner every week so that the students can practise their spoken English. In March, our school usually organizes a tree-planting activity in the countryside. On New Years Eve we have a New Year party. Recently many students have taken part in the English Speech Contest. All these activities are well received.,After that , I showed them around our school. Although I was tired, I was very happy.,书面表达中学生常见错误类型 一 散乱型不着边际胡乱写； 二 逻辑混乱型多出现在语句或情节描绘中； 三 语法不通型一般出现在语句中； 四 误用词语型语句中用词错误 五 粗心大意型不认真阅读提示，或错写内容或丢三落四 六 喧宾夺主型不分主次信马由缰丢掉主要内容而将非主要内容大写或特写,写作要领 1 细读提示明白写什么，日记、信函、报导或叙事描写 2 写全要点了解核心内容，非重要情节，图画作文应认真分析判断才能分清主次。表格类原则上一个不能少 3 卷面干净事先打草稿然后誊改是使文章通畅的关键,4 书写认真不求文字隽秀力保规范工整，这是留下好印象的起码条件 5 层次分明为使短文令人感到赏心悦目分成2甚至3段为好 6 承上启下简而言之是连接词、过渡句他们是组成文章粘和剂，上下沟通的纽带,7 繁简有度文章总有详写与略写，尤其是 图画类短文，学会筛选是非常必要的，如其不然，事无巨细全部点到，不仅使文章成了流水帐，而且空耗了时间还使文章显得冗赘若再因超长而被扣分岂不得不偿失？！ 8 亮点突出较高级词汇和较 复杂的语法结构的合理适时使用，这最能影响或打动改卷教师，是求得高档次及该档次高端分 值的保证,2004年全国高考英语书面表达分类 图画型京、渝、湘、粤、辽 京-图表两幅,描绘课余活动所占比例，另两幅画谈100圆和10圆的去向； 渝-图画四幅,妈妈提水洗衣我帮忙，同学来约,我不去妈妈夸奖,我深思； 湘-画两幅,城市与农村，城市生活的不足，去农村度假的原因； 粤-看电视与学习的两幅画，描绘交涉过程； 辽-4幅画,公园内一老者机智地用雨伞将一抢包犯绊倒从而将其抓获.,表格型津、苏、浙、闽、鄂 1).津-关于中学生应如何使用零花钱的主题班会； 2).苏-写信向加拿大笔友介绍家乡江城所取得的成就及存在的问题，并对发展谈看法； 3).浙-写信给加拿大朋友推介英汉词典与新华词典的特色价格与收词； 4).闽-写信向美国朋友介绍你校的规划目的及内容； 5).鄂-英语学习的讨论，题目为学习英语要不要从儿童时起，观点不同，未取得一致意见,文字型全国四份及上海 1.全1- 北京电视台举办外国人学中文唱中国歌，建议你的外国朋友参加并能提供帮助； 2. 全2- 外国朋友暑期来华，一人住你家，写信表示欢迎并介绍安排； 3. 全3- 美国教授的美国史讲座不能参加，请假并询问是否有录音； 4. 全4- 外国朋友来华学汉语，介绍汉语班的开办日期程度教师资质等； 5. 沪- 一篇日记，内容为老师要求你负责班级墙报工作并征求你的意见，写出你的决定并谈谈想法，文长120至150词,练习一:下面几幅图反映的是我们日常生活中常见的浪费现象请写一篇英语短文，描述这些现象，并就此谈谈你的看法 词数：个左右,One possible version: A lot of things are wasted in our daily life. Some people buy more than they can eat and throw away the leftovers, which can be kept for another meal. Some dont bother to turn taps off after using running water. Lights are sometimes left on even in the daytime and people ignore this as if they didnt see it at all. I hope everyone realize that its no easy job for parents to earn enough money to support us and that our country is not a very rich one and many people are still suffering poverty (or:are still very poor) .We should not waste! Save on things we use for the sake of our parents and our country.,练习二：假如你正在参加一场英语辩论赛，你是正方辩论者，请你写一篇词数为本左右的文章主题为”Shall a senior school student take a part-time job in holidays ?” 注意：开头已为你写好 Dear friends, Here are my points. _ _ _,Dear friends, Here are my points. We students of today have to fix our attention on our lessons, and as a result, we know little of society. A holiday is the best time and the best chance to make up for that. Taking a part-time job is a good form of social practice. What we learnt in books and in class cant have the same important effort on us as what we learned through personal experience. In social practice, we can surely make progress in both knowledge and practical ability. Besides, taking a part-time job, we may get paid more or less to help our family. Thus, I will say a senior school student should take a part-time job in holidays, if possible, of course.,One possible version:,高三英语写作专题 (三),English writing, Senior Three,写作综合练习,Part eight:,假设你是某中学生英文报的小记者，对中学生课外上网的利弊进行调查采访。以下是学生们对上网的看法。请根据他们的观点写一篇简要的调查，并呼吁正确使用互联网。 一、注意：使用互联网的益处 1、资源丰富 2、节省时间 3、方便交流和沟通 二、使用互联网的弊端 1、内容良莠兼有 2、沉迷网络游戏影响学业 3、过多使用影响健康 1、参考词汇：上网浏览surf the Internet 2、词数：100左右。 3、文章开头如下： With the development of computer technology, the Internet has become more and more popular.,最近你校同学参加了某英文报组织的讨论，其中一个话题是：高考前有些家长在考场附近租住宾馆，陪孩子复习，这样做有无必要。假设你叫李华，请根据下表提供的信息给报社写一封信，客观地介绍讨论情况。,注意：1信的开头已为你写好。 2词数：100左右。 When we discuss about whether it is good to book a room for kids at a hotel near the school where the entrance exam will be taken, we have different opinions.,With the development of computer technology, the Internet has become more and more popular. Some students regard it as a great helper. Since there is a lot of information on line, you can surf the Internet for any information you need in a short time without working hard in the library. It is also very convenient to communicate with others by using the Internet. However, other students think that there is some information on line that is not good for the students. In addition, spending too much time playing games on line will not only have a bad effect on study but also do harm to our health. Therefore, we should make proper use of the Internet.,When we discuss about whether it is good to book a room for kids at a hotel near the school where the entrance exam will be taken, we have different opinions. About 75 % of my schoolmates think it unnecessary to do so as it really costs a lot, and actually it doesnt matter much where to stay when we take an exam. At the same time, we would feel even more pressed rather than relaxed with parents at our side. Meanwhile, the remaining quarter of the students prefer to stay in a hotel close to the school where we will take the exam if it is possible. We can get ourselves to suit the environment and save the time we would otherwise spend on the way. Besides, with the presence of our parents, we will study more efficiently. Yours truly, Li Hua,What to Write in This Period?,Task 1: A guided Story of 100 words,Task 2: An Extended Passage of 30-50 words,Questions:,1.What a score did you get in the recent English test ? Did it reach the goal you set?,2. How many more points could you have got for your physics in the test?,Task 1.Write a Story about Daming Notes: Daming (大明）is a third grader in some middle school. Study th