四级写作备考之六步走.ppt

四级写作备考之“六步走”,备考之“六步”,1.背诵和默写 2. 改编仿写 3.文章框架 4.通用理由 5. 点词成金 6.句式变化,第一步：背诵和默写,作文如做人. 背诵就是吸取别人语言文字中的精华,如同人体摄入营养物质. 背什么? 针对四级，建议背诵历年高分范文 为什么要默写? 默写能够发现自己写的内容和原文的差异,才会发现自己哪些细节没有注意到.(拼写,标点等等),第二步：改编仿写,改编仿写是在背诵和默写之后独立创作的过程，好比人体进行的必要锻炼。 模仿什么? 1.模仿高分范文的写作结构 (“三段论”) 2.模仿高分范文的写作句型.(例如课本上的read and simulate部分练习) 3.模仿高分范文里的地道表达. 例如: The argument seemed to have considerable merits.(这个论点看起来相当有优势.),第三步：文章框架,文章框架决定了文章结构，就好比人身体的骨骼。人的骨架决定了人的形体。 四级写作的主要类型: 观点对立型,问题解决型,图表分析型,应用文 以观点对立型为例: 三段式,第一段: 陈述现状 （2 句话） 1。切入主题，将文章的话题转变为要谈论的“某种现象”:The term may by no means sound strange to most people at the present day. 2.运用一个疑问句，提出人们的不同观点。 Does anyone hold the same attitude toward? Definitely not. As to this issue, opinions vary from person to person.,第二段：阐明正反观点 1。有人认为。Those who hold the opinion that claim that Firstly,. Secondly. 2.也有人认为。However, others maintain that. Firstly, Moreover,第三段：阐明自己的观点 1。表明自己的立场，指出你支持的观点，并提出支持的理由：If I were forced to agree with one of the two opinions, I, without a doubt, stand by the idea that On one hand, On the other hand, 2. 再次表明你的看法，与该段的第一句首尾呼应：Given the factors I have just outlined, I strongly commit to the notion that,参考范文,第四步：通用理由,通用理由决定了文章内容和思想，就好比人的思想和灵魂。 从客观和主观两个角度总结了12个理由，以供参考。 客观角度：对社会的影响 1.带来便利（convenience): The development of the internet has made our lives more convenient.,2. 提高效率（efficiency): Electronic products have increased our work efficiency many times. 3. 节省或浪费（save/waste): It can help us save money. 4. 环境（environment) : Peoples living standard can be raised with the improvement of their environment.,5.经济发展 ( economic progress): Stable employment is conductive to the long-term development of economy and the progress of society. 6. 文化发展(cultural progress): Culture blending and intercultural communication play a vital role in international cultural progress.,主观角度：对个人的影响 独立性（independence): It will help cultivate ones independent consciousness. 合作精神（cooperation): A great and extensive cooperation can achieve a win-win situation. 自信( confidence): Self-confidence plays a crucial role in the pursuit of success.,社交能力(social skills): play an (important/active/great) role/part in enhancing social(communication) skills. 个人健康（health): Taking a walk contributes to your health. 个人发展（individual development): Reading will exert a profound influence on life/personality.,第五步：点词成金,点“词”成金，词汇使文章内容丰富，好比人的肉体。 四六级写作明确将“语言表达”作为考查重点。因此，简单词汇替换为更具亮点的“给力”词汇。 例如： good beneficial/profitable: Exercise is profitable in all ages.,better superior: Long-term stock market investments have produced superior returns compared with cash deposits. Important vital/crucial/critical/ decisive Happy joyful/be in good mood/cheerful/pleased/delighted Tired worn out/ fatigued/exhausted 更多高分词汇，请看。,第六步 句式变化,多变的句式就好比人身上华丽的衣饰。 尽量少用短句，适当运用一些语法点。 语法点一：虚拟语气 例：But for mobile phones, our communication would not have been so rapid and convenient.(要是没有手机，我们的沟通就不会这么快捷和方便。）,语法点二：倒装结构 例：Only when I reached my thirties did I realize that reading cannot be neglected. 语法点三：从句 例：This novel is very touching. I have read it three times. This novel, which I have read three times, is very touching.,语法点四：被动语态 例：These children are deprived of the right to receive an education.(这些孩子被剥夺了接受教育的权利。） 语法点五：强调