《写作的注意事项》PPT课件.ppt

如何提高英语写作水平？,高分特点,1. 外在美,书写清楚，字母大小均匀，单词间距离适当，没有明显修改的痕迹。,2. 结构美,一篇好的书面表达不能一段到底，应有合理的段落层次，让人感觉条理清晰。 每一段要有一个主题句和支撑句。最好采用缩进式段落格式。,3. 词汇美,从书面表达的评分标准看，运用高级词汇对提高书面表达的档次和得分至关重要。 但并等于是用一些偏词、怪词，而是使用一些生动、具体、形象的词语。大家可 平时阅读时积累一些富有表现力的词汇。,例句： Our schools English club intends to hold a activity named “The Night of Drama” The topic should be connected with our school life. My classmates and I are in low spirits. Honestly speaking, it is pretty difficult for us to find a fit play which is not too long. The contents of the drama are supposed to have a close connection with our school life. As for this, we have difficulty in choosing the play. We must limit our performance time to 40 minutes. We have a chance of putting on a short English play. The drama should be as easy as possible. As for as we are concerned, its difficult to pick out a good play.,4. 句式美,句式单一、缺乏生气的文章，哪怕无任何错误都不可能的高分。精彩句式的合理 使用会使文章形象生动，为文章增色。 简单句虽然短小精悍，但是在语言表达上 不能单一地注重简单句的正确使用，还应多应用一些并列句或复合句，使句式灵 活多变。,优美句式： We are seeking for a short play which is not too difficult. I know you are an expert who is good at drama in England. We find it hard to choose a good play which is not too long. We dont know how to find a proper play which is not too long. If we have your help, we will have a great success. It is well-known that the dramas time is important. We gain it from our teacher that you are a professional playwright in England. Our schools English club intends to hold a activity named “The Night of Drama”,5.衔接美,“有效地使用语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑”是高考书面表达的重要评分依据。 为了使文章结构紧凑、自然流畅，段落之间要使用适当的过渡语；句子之间要使用 符合逻辑上合理的衔接词。,表示对等关系的连接性词语： eitheror, neithernor, or, as well as, and, both and 表示因果关系的连接性词语： therefore, so, as a result, as result of, because of, duo to, owing to , thanks to 表示时间顺序的连接性词语：at first, then, later, meanwhile, in the end, before long for the first time 表示转折关系的连接性词语： yet, but, while, on the contrary, however 表示解释说明的连接性词语： that is, that is to say, in other words, such as, for example 表示递进关系的连接性词语： whats more, whats worse, besides, in addition worse still, moreover(此外), above all 表示总结陈述的连接性词语： in a word, on the whole, in short, briefly, in briefly, to sum up, all in all,失分的原因,1.审题错误 （1）要点不全或者要点表述错误。 （2）时态和语态选用错误。,2. 词汇不过关,单词拼写错误百出、词不达意将大大文章的写作。表现：单词拼写错 误或词汇运用不恰当，尤其是动词的运用。甚至出现汉语拼音来滥竽 充数。,You are a professional dramaer. But its difficult to choice a play. We are seeking for a short play which is not too difficult and biref. We hope you to help us.,3. 中式英语,4. 语法错误,表现： 人称混乱、句子结构不完整、主谓一致、缺少谓语或谓语动词 使用不当、从句运用错误、词类误解。,Our school English club is going to hold a Drama Night. We want to show a not long time play.,We get into trouble when we choice the play. All class will join in the active. Would you be willing to it? So we want to that you can help us to put on a short English play. In order to it, we need to choose dramas. We need the drama is about school life. We hope that limit the time of drama to forty minutes. The biggest problem is that we dont know to hunt for a good play which not too long. The English club of our school will holding a Drama Night on October 20th. 10. The English club of our school will holding a Drama Night on October 20th. 11. It should close our school.,5.语篇结构不完整,表现：结构松散、句与句之间连贯性不强、缺乏体现句与句之间逻辑 关系的连接词或乱用连词。,6. 卷面问题太多,表现：字迹潦草、标点符号使用混乱、涂抹严重、词数偏少或偏多、 没有按要求的黑色笔或出现笔细、色淡、字小的现象。,1). The play also should not be too difficult. However, the contents should be interrelated with school life. 2).But its very difficult for us to hunt for a good play Whats worse, we must find something about school life. 3).The main idea should be connect with our life in school. Also, the time we act is about forty minutes. 4). We hear that you are a expert who is good at play. But it is very difficult to find a good play. 5). On the other hard, the contents are based on our school life and connected with something simple. Generally speaking, you are well-known as expert in drama.,5.语篇结构不完整,表现：结构松散、句与句之间连贯性不强、缺乏体现句与句之间逻辑 关系的连接词或乱用连词。,6. 卷面问题太多,表现：字迹潦草、标点符号使用混乱、涂抹严重、词数偏少或偏多、 没有按要求的黑色笔或出现笔细、色淡、字小的现象。,1). The play also should not be too difficult. However, the contents should be interrelated with school life. 2).But its very difficult for us to hunt for a good play Whats worse, we must find something about school life. 3). On the other hard, the contents are based on our school life and connected with something simple. Generally speaking, you are well-known as expert in drama. 4). We hear that you are a expert who is good at play. But it is very difficult to find a good play.,Dear Professor Taylor, Were students form No.2 Middle School. Our teacher, Mrs., told us that we may write to you for help. Heres the problem. The English Club of our school is going to hold Drama Night on October 20th. Our class would like to put on a short English Play. But it is very difficult to find a good play which is not too long about40 minutesand which is not too difficult. It is even more difficult to find something about school life