教你如何扩展句子.ppt

写作进阶提升之三 怎样扩展句子,5 主语+系动词+表语 S+Link.V+P,1. 主语+谓语 S +V.,2. 主语+谓语+宾语 S+Vt+O,3.主语+谓语+间宾+直宾 (S+Vt+Oi+Od),4.主语+谓语+宾语+宾补 (S+Vt+O+O.C),Mary was a girl.,She smiled.,Tom liked her.,He gave her a picture.,She put the picture on the wall.,1. Mary was a (n) _ girl.（形容词） 2. She smiled _ . (副词） 3. Tom liked her _ . （ 副词） 4. He gave her a picture _ _ （定语从句） 5. She put the picture on the wall _ _ （状语从句）,beautiful,happily,secretly,that he had drawn for her .,so that she could see it conveniently .,方法一 添加修饰成分：形容词、副词、不定式 短语、分词短语、介词短语、定语从句、状语从 句等。,Mary was a beautiful and girl . Tom and liked her very much. They soon became good friends. On Marys birthday, Tom gave her a picture and She smiled happily , them and put the picture on the wall.,clever,Jack,a bunch of roses.,accepted,方法二 添加并列成分：,Jack was rich. He had his own company. He made a fortune. He bought Mary a diamond ring. Neither Jack nor Tom knew what Mary thought. During that night before Marys birthday, Jack had a dream in which he asked Mary to marry him . During the same night ,Tom couldnt get to sleep until he finished drawing the picture of Mary from his memory.,What present would Jack give Mary?,方法三 构成并列句：用并列连词 and, so, but, while, for（因为）等。,Jack was rich, he had his own company made a fortune, he bought Mary a diamond ring, neither Jack nor Tom knew what Mary thought. During that night before Marys birthday, Jack had a dream in which he asked Mary to marry him Tom couldnt get to sleep until he finished drawing the picture of Mary from his memory.,for,and,so,but,while,Who Would Mary Choose ?,After her birthday party, Mary couldnt help,looking at the picture now and then,because in her eyes,looking at herself in the picture,was like,looking at a superstar on the screen.,To see,is,to believe.,The picture proved,that Tom had a talent for painting,and,her choosing him as her boy friend,was a wise decision.,方法四 使用V-ing短语、不定式短语或名词性从句等做主语、宾语或表语等。,that,_ _,_ _,Summary,扩展句子的方法,方法一：添加修饰成分,方法二：添加并列成分,方法三：构成并列句,方法四：使用V-ing短语、不定 式短语或名词性从句 作主语、宾语或表语等,Lets Play a Game.,See Who Is Faster?,It was obvious that Jack was unhappy. What made him angry was that the diamond ring he had bought for Marys birthday was refused by her. When he told Mary that not only he was more handsome than Tom，but also he had a car，a flat and more money， Mary said softly but firmly，“ I am very very sorry，Jack. You should know the fact that liking you does not mean loving you. To have money is not to have everything. However，we remain good friends as before. ”,Step 1. Finish reading the following paragraph in one minute to get the main idea.,It was obvious Jack was unhappy. made him angry was the diamond ring he had bought for Marys birthday was refused by her. he told Mary that not only he was more handsome Tom，but also he had a car，a flat and more money， Mary said softly firmly，“ I am very very sorry，Jack. You should know the fact liking you does not mean loving you. To have money is not to have everything. ，we remain good friends as before. ”,that,What,that,When,than,but,that,However,Step 2. Fill in the missing words according to the context.,Step 3. Read aloud the following paragraph , ready to repeat it.,It was obvious that Jack was unhappy. What made him angry was that the diamond ring he had bought for Marys birthday was refused by her. When he told Mary that not only he was more handsome than Tom，but also he had a car，a flat and more money， Mary said softly but firmly，“ I am very very sorry，Jack. You should know the fact that liking you does not mean loving you. To have money is not to have everything. However，we remain good friends as before. ”,It was obvious that _. What _ was that the diamond ring _ was refused by her. When he told Mary that not only _ than Tom，_ he had a car, a flat _. Mary said _ but _, “You shoul