《杨益文作文及拼写》PPT课件.ppt

中考英语复习研讨会 书面表达,烟墩中心初中 杨益文 2013.5.9,一、作文形式解读： （1）应用文：包括英文通知、启事、便条、日记、书信、贺卡和 E-mail等形式。 （2）看图作文：可以是一幅图，也可以是多副图；可以是填词、 写句子，也可以是根据提示词写短文。 （3）提示作文：经常是给出英文或汉语提示，提示可以是文字， 也可以是图表。 二、考察能力解读： 1.应用文，要求能够掌握常见几种类的写作技巧； 2.看图作文，要能够根据图画和提示词语，明确考查意图，弄清图画内容，把握情节线索，完整表达意思； 3.提示作文，要根据提示写出意思连贯、符合逻辑的短文。要掌握记叙文、说明文和夹叙夹议文的写作方法及其技巧。能够运用常用词汇、基本句式和语法知识，按要求写出规范的句子，表达自己的思想。,2013中考考纲解读：,命题目的、特点及趋势,书面表达是考查学生综合运用英语知识的一种重要形式，旨在考查学生的英语书面表达能力，突出“用英语做事情”的思想，让所有的学生有话可说，并为能力强的学生提供发挥的空间，减少对学生写作内容的控制，具有一定的开放性。,命题目的、特点及趋势,1.题材选择更加贴近学生的生活实际； 2.通过文字说明，提示词等对学生写的内容加以限制； 3.试题留给学生的发挥空间越来越大； 4.通过书面表达，加强对学生的生活常识、人生观和世界观的教育; 5.字数要求都在80100词。,中考评分原则(内容、层次),1.内容完整、表达充分，层次结构清晰、语言流畅、地道，有少量错误；(1720分） 2.内容较完整、表达较充分，层次结构较清晰、语言较流畅、地道，有少量错误；（1316分） 3.内容较完整、但表达不够充分，层次结构较不太清晰、语言不够流畅、地道，有较多语言错误；（912分） 4.内容不完整，语言表达错误较多，不能完整表达意思；（58分） 5.内容不完整，语言表达错误很多，仅有几个单词可读，不能表达出与提示内容相关的意思。（04分）,日常书面表达训练步骤,审,列,加,连,美,认真审题，找出文章要表达的中心； 格调高雅，避免低俗。,写作第一步,审,健康很重要。在学习和工作的压力日趋增大的今天，会休息的人才会有健康的身体。人们是如何度过假期的呢？国际健康组织对此作了一次调查，右图是他们此次的调查结果。根据你所得的信息，请为国际健康组织写一篇完整的调查报告,并提倡大家进行假日休闲。,审,travel,stay at home,visit friends or parents,work,Teenagers colorful life,We study .,We like listening to music.,We play computer games for long.,We like reading books.,We often play Sports.,We go to KFC .,Sometimes we travel.,Sometimes we stay up studying.,Teenagers healthy life,We study all day.,We like listening to music.,We play computer games for long.,We like reading books.,We often play Sports.,We go to KFC.,Sometimes we travel.,Sometimes we stay up studying.,colorful,healthy,用简单的句子或短语列出文章要点。,列,写作第二步,根据以下关键词及图表用简单的句子列出文章的要点,如何度假 调查报告 倡议假日休闲,stay at home,work,visit friends or parents,travel,A lot of people travel . Some people stay at home. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work. Enjoy your vacation.,列,加,加首尾，使结构完整。 可以采取总分总结构或者总分结构，开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁，漂亮。,写作第三步：,A lot of people travel . Some people stay at home. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work.,How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our survey report.,Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.,a nice head,a nice tail,a nice body,How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our survey report. A lot of people travel . Some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the internet. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work. Come and enjoy your vacation. The people who relax well work well.,连,恰当运用关联词句，使得文章层次清晰，各个部分衔接自然。,写作第四步：,1.表示并列或递进: and, as well as, bothand, not onlybut also, neithernor; 2.表示选择: or, eitheror; 3.表示转折: but, however, although, though, after all, 4.表示因果: because, so, therefore 5.表示条件: if , unless 6.表示对比: instead, notbut, on the one handon the other hand; 7.表示解释: for example, for instance, such as, that is to say, in other words; 8.表示顺序: to begin with, firstly, first (of all), second(ly), next, later, since then, from then on, finally, in the end; 9.表示强调: also, besides, whats more, actually, in fact, 10.表示结论: all in all, altogether, in a word, generally speaking,关联词,How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our survey report. According to it, most people travel. And some people stay at home. Also some other people visit friends or parents. However, a few people work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.,连,美,卷面潦草涂涂抹抹一定会失分! 选好词句，美化文章。在有把握的情况下展示自己的语言功底。,写作第五步：,We interviewed people about the ways to spend the vacation and here is our survey report. According to it, most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays . Then some people like to stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. And to visit friends or parents also makes them relaxed. However, a few people have to work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.,美,平时训练中的几个注意点 A. 平时注重解题技巧的养成,写前 .仔细审题，明确要求。 罗列信息，认真分析，审清题意，列出要点。,.紧扣要点，寻求思路。 草拟提纲，确定开头，选词、选句，拟好结尾（可适当发表自己的观点）。,写中,.开门见山，紧扣主题 。,.语言正确, 规范地道。,参观农场的日记： 关于度假：,句型、结构，避免中国式英语。 I spent 10 yuan buy the book. He by bike to school. 标点符号,Last Sunday we visited West Hill Farm.,We had a happy holiday in Jiaxin last weekend.,.重短轻长, 就易避难。,.过渡自然, 表达流畅。,以写正确、通顺为最基本要求。,正确使用连词，保持行文的流畅。 不重复使用可置换的词。,.适当评论, 发表己见。,How friendly they are! We can learn from them. They enjoyed themselves very much. What a happy family.,3.写后,. 一般语法项目的检查,人称: Mr. Green works hard, she is the best worker in their office. 时态: One day, they are going to the island. 主谓一致: Everyone in our class work hard. 习惯用法: He helps me in my English.,. 注意语序 (感叹句，疑问句，宾语从句),Jim works very hard. So does Jack.(前后主语非一人) A: Jim works very hard. B: So he does.(前后主语为一人) He didnt know where the bookshop was. The boys want to know how they should do it.,. 符合习惯 My work is very busy.,I very much like it.,Im very busy with my work.,I like it very much.,. 书写规范, 卷面整洁。,仔细检查，认真抄写,抓住主题，描写细节,开门见山,发表己见，画龙点睛,收集信息，列出提纲,结尾有力,坚持循序渐进的训练原则。,提醒学生注意老师的讲评。,单词拼写,中考考纲解读： 考查不同词类的单词 在句子中的灵活运用,在中考的单词拼写题目中，名词和动词 所占的比例最大，其次是形容词、副词、 代词、数词、介词。,可数名词和不可数名词 以及可数名词的单、复数形式 解题思路： 1. 判断是可数名词还是不可数名词 2. 可数名词要注意单、复数形式变化 3. 注意大小写,名词考点：,1. That is one of the worst _ (战争) on record in this area. 2. Do you believe a heavy _ (物体) falls faster than a light one?,1. We usually do our _ (作业) in the evening. 2. There is lots of _ (雪) on the ground.,homework,fights,object,You can find much information on the _ (因特网).,Internet,不可数名词只有单数形式,可数名词要注意单、复数形式,注意大小写,snow,Exercises: 1. She bought some new _ (胶卷) for her holiday. 2. Do you like eating _ (西红柿). 3. I took a lot of _ (照片) in Beijing last year. 4. There are several _ (头发) on the floor. 5. Whats on _ (频道) 4 tonight? 6. The _ (俄国人) are friendly to me when I was in their country. 7. My father likes reading _ (报纸) at breakfast.,films,tomatoes,photos,hairs,Channel,Russians,newspapers,1. 时态和语态 2. 主谓搭配一致 3. 非谓语动词 解题思路： 1. 判断时态和语态 2. 单词的形式变化 以上判断的依据是找准关键词,动词考点:,判断语句的时态和语态 ; 注意单词的形式变化 1. They are _ (摘) apples on the farm. 2. It _ (吹) a lot in autumn. 3. I will _ (接) him at the railway station. 4. He _(跌倒) off a tree yesterday and hurt himself. 5. He has _ (借) the book for one week? 6. Bananas are _ (种植) in the south of China. 7. _ (种植) more trees is good to our environment. 8. I prefer to go out for a walk rather than _ (看) a film on TV at home,picking,blows,fell,kept,grown,Planting,meet,watch,(进行时),(一般现在时),(将来时),(一般过去时),(现在完成时),(被动语态),(v-ing形式作主语),(固定搭配: prefer to do rather than do),Exercises: 1. This kind of book _ (卖) well. 2. He _ (基于) his last novel on a true story. 3. My heart is _ (跳动) fast at the moment. 4. All the food was _ (吃) up soon. 5. I have _ (放置) away my things as you told me. 6. _ (喝) more water after sports than usual. 7. Wed better keep practising _ (说) English every day. 8. I prefer listening to music to _ (看) novels.,beating,eaten,Drink,sells,speaking,reading,put,based,1. 原级、比较级、最高级三种形式之间的转化 2. 形容词和副词两种词类之间的转化 解题思路： 1. 判断是形容词还是副词 2. 判断该用原级、比较级还是最高级 以上判断的依据是找准关键词,形容词和副词考点：,形容词or副词 ; 原级、比较级、最高级 1. Your plan sounds _ (有趣的). 2. When he heard this, he became even _ (生气). 3. The _ (高的) one of the two girls is Jessy. 4. Cats sleep _ (两倍) as much as people. 5. I _ (曾经) met her mother. 6. He does _ (差的) in math in our class. 7. I cant go any _ (远).,interesting,angrier,once,worst,taller,farther,twice,Exercises: 1. The meeting has been _ (结束) for half an hour. 2. Both Jim and Jack are top students, but Jim studies _ (努力). 3. The rain today is much _ (大) than it was yesterday. 4. Today is her _ (幸福的) day in her life. 5. He is always _ (迟到) for school than any other student in our class. 6. Jack doesnt write as _ (仔细) as Mary?,harder,heavier,happiest,later,carefully,over,代词考点： 主格、宾格、形容词性物主代词、名词性物主代词、 反身代词之间以及不定代词,For example: 1. They lost _ (他们自己) in the beautiful music.