基础写作-地点介绍good.ppt

说明文地点简介,基础写作,How to introduce a place?,Place,ocation,rea,opulation,istory,imate,local pr,cenery,文体特点,l,a,p,h,c,&,ulture,cl,S,oducts,1. “某物位于” e.g. 国家游泳中心位于奥林匹克公园内。 The National Aquatics Center lies / stands / is located /is situated in the Olympic Park.,Relevant expressions,1) Sp. is located/situated in (on/to) the east/ north/center of 2) Sp. lies/stands in (on/to) the top/foot of ,. “东，南，西，北”的表达 sth. is +in/to/on the east (south)of+某处 1) Guangdong is _ the south of China. 2) Beijing is _ the north of Guangdong. 3) Guangdong is _ the east of Guangxi.,in,to,on,B,A,B,A,B,A,A is in the east of B,(A在B的范围之内),A is to the east of B,(A在B的范围之外，且不接壤),A is on the east of B,(A与B相邻接),Relevant expressions,2. “面积”的表达 The area of+某地+is+square meters 某地+covers/takes up an area of +square meters with an area of. e.g. 国家游泳中心的建筑面积有79，532m2。 The area of the National Aquatics Center is 79，532 square meters. =The National Aquatics Center covers an area of 79，532 square meters.,Relevant expressions,1. Tiananmen Square, with / covering an area of, is the largest square in the world. 2. Our school , which takes up 63 thousand square kilometers, is very large in size.,Population:,1) Sp. has a population of 2) The population has grown/ increased/ decreased to 3) The city, with a population of, is,2.介绍人口（Population）:,has a population of, （a city） with a population of,北京是中国的首都，是一个有1200多万人口的大城市。（用一句话）,Beijing, the capital of China, is a large city with a population of over 12,000,000.,_ the east of Asia, China _ 9.6 million square kilometers _1.3 billion.,Location: in the east of Asia Area: 9.6 million K Population: 1.3 billion,Located in,covers an area of,with a population of,Location + area + population,Located in (to/on), Sp. covers an area of with a population of ,3. “长，宽，高”的表达 sp. is +数字+量词+in length/width/height sp. is+数字+量词+long/wide/high e.g. 国家游泳中心的高度是31米，宽是177米，长是177米。 The National Aquatics Center is 31 meters in height, 177 meters in width and 177 meters in length. =The National Aquatics Center is 31 meters high, 177 meters wide and 177 meters long.,Relevant expressions,History:,1) has/owns a long history of 2) with a long history of,History + symbol + culture,With a history of , Sp. , whose symbol is , is famous for ,History: over 4,000 years Symbol: Five Goats Culture: Lingnan Culture,Guangzhou,_over 4,000 years, Guangzhou, _ is the “Five Goats”, _ Lingnan Culture.,With a history of,whose symbol,is famous for,climate:,1) It is very/quite cold (hot)all the year round. 2) Sp. has a warm/cold climate with plenty of 3) The average temperature of is 4) It is neither too cold nor too hot.,2) Sp. has a warm/cold climate with plenty of 3) The average temperature of is ,Climate: warm, plenty of sunshine The average temperature: 25.5,Sanya in Hainan Province, has _climate _sunshine and _ is 25.5.,Sanya,a warm,with plenty of,the average temperature,Places of interest (名胜),1）Sp. has many famous/well-known places of interest, particularly/such as . and so on. 2）Sp. be a famous summer resort.,1）Sp. has many famous/well-known places of interest, particularly/such as . and so on.,Feisha Beach,hot springs,Taishan has many _, _ Feisha Beach in Shuangchuan Island, hot springs and _.,places of interest,such as,so on,Places of interest (名胜) 3)The city, known as, attracts millions of visitors from all over the world. 4)The city is well-known / famous for its/as 5) is a must-see for tourists, as 6) .enjoy the reputation of. 7)serve as the capital of. 8)with.river winding its way through the city.,seafood,Taishan _ rice and seafood.,rice,is rich in,Local products:,Local products:,1) Sp. is rich/abundant in (natural sourses) 2) be famous/well-known for 3) be home to ,Useful Expressions,Located in (to/on), Sp. covers an area of with a population of , Sp. is a city with a long history. With a history of , Sp. , whose symbol is , is famous for , Sp. has a climate with plenty of The average temperature is ,Sp. has many places of interest, particularly/such as . and so on., Sp. is rich in Sp. is famous for/ be home to,Practice,基础写作,Step 1: 审题 （内容、时态、人称） Step 2: 理清要点， 整理成5个句子 Step 3 :句子翻译 Step 4 : 检查、润饰, 添加适当过渡词语,The steps of Basic Writing,假设你是广州亚运会一名志愿者，请你用5个句子写一篇英语短文，向外宾介绍广州。,【写作内容】,Step 1: 审题,第三人称(Guangzhou),审内容：,介绍广州,审时态：,地点简介属于说明文，,用一般现在时,审人称：,Step2: 理清要点整理成5个句子,Step3: 翻译句子,10分钟, Exchange your composition with your deskmate and help each other to improve your writing. 在评改时，应注意以下几个方面： 1、在语言方面,重点评判句子的语法结构是否正确、用词是否规范;是否使用了合适而且较丰富的句型结构;是否用上了较高级词汇 。 2、在内容方面，重点评判是否表达全部规定的5项内容，在表达完整的5项内容时，适当添加一些内容，不扣分。 3、在连贯性方面，重点评判5个句子是否构成一篇连贯的短文；是否合理使用了过渡词语。,Step3 句子翻译,广州，广东省的省府，位于广东的中部， 面积是7434.4平方公里，人口是9，980，000。,_Guangdong province, Guangzhou, _ of Guangdong Province, _ 7434.4 square kilometers _9.98 million.,Located in the middle of,the capital city,covers an area of,with a population of,Step3 句子翻译,不仅历史悠久，还是中国古代“海上丝绸之路”的发祥地。,Guangzhou is _a city _, _the birthplace of the ancient “Silk Road on the Sea”.,not only,with a long history,but also,以“五羊”为象征，以岭南文化著称。,Guangzhou, _ is “Five Goats”, _Lingnan Culture.,whose symbol,is famous for,Step3 句子翻译,气候温暖，阳光充足，雨水(rainfall)充沛， 年平均气温为21.8,Guangzhou has a _climate with_ and _ is about 21.8.,warm,plenty of sunshine and rainfall,the average temperature,旅游资源丰富,如著名的“羊城八景”。,Guangzhou _for tourists to visit, _ the “Eight Scenes of Guangzhou”.,has many places of interest,particularly,Step4 :检查、润饰, 添加适当过渡词语,Located in the middle of Guangdong Province, Guangzhou, the capital city of Guangdong Province, covers an area of 7434.4 square kilometers with a populat