浙江新高考作文续写公开课.ppt

To continue a story,续写 之 如何构思,What is a STORY /Why do we make STORIES?,A story is to entertian, to amuse, to educate, to enlighten. Basically, a story is to deliver a piece of mind to us. So, how to deliver it well?,What makes a story?,Simply put:,Who Where What When How Why,Literarily put:,Characters(Main&Minor) Plot(Beginning, Rising Action, Climax, Falling Action&Resolution),Think For a good story, which is more important, the character, or the plot?,1.CaoRui is easy-going and he is never seen getting angry, but _. 2.ShenMengyan is a lady-like girl when she_, but when _ she will_. 3.LiJinying is very gentle to her deskmate and she _.,he was a little annoyed when his food was taken by ChengSihan,is in the classroom,in the dorm,be totally a crazy one,always speaks softly to him,Characterization Practice (Writing),4.WangChen hao is a quiet boy, he _. 5.ZhaoHanbin considers himself THE most handsome in the world, and he _. 6.After discovering ZhangKaiheng is after the same girl he likes, the fearless ZhaoYonghao _.,can sit silently for a day without a word to his deskmate.,looks down upon all the other boys in the class who he thinks ugly.,felt he must do something,Make it a one-sentence story!,1.Framton wanted to clam his nerves in Mrs Samptons house, only to _. 2.Matilda put on the necklace and looked foward to the coming of the party. Her dream was _. 3.Although Laurie wanted to win very much, when she found Jinnys tape, _.,be made lose his nerves by a little mischievous girl,to become the queen of the party of the upper class,didnt let the desire to win get the better of her and returned it to Jinny,4.Larry angrily opened the car door, trying to rush away from his terrible boss, but to find_ 5.Tim was a good student in the teachers eyes, yet he _. 6.It was very late, and Helen was very anxious for her husband to return, when the doorbell rang, she _.,a Christmas gift from the boss,never likes any teachers class,Lets read and pay attention to the red part.,One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom, “Im going to find a better spot for us to camp” and walked away. With no path to follow, Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place, she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost.,What would she do or experience next?,cried for help? regretted what she had done? tried to go back on her own? waited for her husband? came across some bad or good guy? .,No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him.,Began to regret,Things got worse,miss her husband and family,Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling (滴落) somewhere at a distance. Quickly she followed the sound to a stream. To her great joy, she also saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now, Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake.,1. Its lucky she had someting to drink and eat, but would the luck continue? 2.Why were the berries most delicious to her?,As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a helicopter. Is that for me? Unfortunately, the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow