形容词比较级和最高级在写作中的运用-writing.ppt

,unit 3 writing using comparatives and superlatives of adjectives in writing 形容词比较级和最高级在写作中的运用,(small/big) a bee, a butterfly or an ant?,2. (valuable) iron, silver or gold?,change the sentences using comparatives and superlatives of adjectives.,1. Li Ming is 1.60 meters tall, Wu Wei is 1.70 meters tall. Wu Wei is taller than Li Ming. Li Ming is shorter than Wu Wei. 2. Li Ming weighs 56 kilos, Wu Weis weight is also 56 kilos. Li Ming is as heavy as Wu Wei. 3. Wang Gang is 12 years old, Wu Wei is 13 years old. Wang Gang is one year younger than Wu Wei. Wu Wei is one year older than Wang Gang.,4. Li Ming got 100 in the last maths exam, Wang Gang got 90 in the last maths exam, Wu Wei got 60 in thr=e last maths exam. Wu Weis maths is the worst of the three. Li Ming is best at maths. 5.Li Ming is 11 years old, Wang Gang is 12 years old, Wu Wei is 13 years old., Li Ming is 11 years old, Wang Gang is one year older than Li Ming ，and Wu Wei is the oldest of the three. .,make the composition better,修改作文,I have three friends, my first friend is Li Ming, he is 11years old. His weight is 56 kilos, he is 1.60 meters tall. His maths is very good. The second one is Wang Gang, he is 12 years old,he weighs 53 kilos, he is 1.63 meters tall.His maths isnt good. My third friend is Wu Wei. He is 13 years old, He weighs 56 kilos, he is 1.70 meters tall, but his maths is the worst of the three. I like them very much, we are friendly to each other.,He is one year older than Li Ming, but he is thinner than him.,besides, he is taller than Li Ming, and he is worse at maths.,he is the oldest and tallest one, and he is as heavy as Li Ming.,Kindergarten,primary school,Huanggang Middle School Guangzhou Branch,Talk something about your kindergarten(幼儿园）, your primary school（小学） and Huanggang Middle School Guangzhou Branch. 要求： 1. 字数不少于60 2. 可就校园环境，学校生活，老师, 同学等方面进行比较。 3. 至少包含三个方面的内容。 参考词汇： environment, as beautiful as , be kinder than, study harder than.，be busier than., have more activites than. have more homewrok than.,审题,主体时态： 人称： 要点：,一般现在时,第三人称,幼儿园，小学和黄冈中学广州学校的三个方面的对比,make comments,评论作文,此文章最大的问题是审题不清，未抓住三所学校的三个方面情况的对比进行写作，而只是在写我们班级情况的对比，且出现了一些语法错误，书写不工整，按中考评分标准应是第五档的作文（0-3分）,此文章重在分述三所学校的情况介绍，而没有重在学校情况的对比，且出现了一些语法错误，书写不够工整，按中考评分标准应是第三档的作文（7-9分）,此文章包含了所有的要点，且重在三所学校的情况对比，应用了较丰富的语言结构和词汇，用词准确，句子通顺、行文连贯，书写漂亮，美观，按中考英语评分标准是属于第四档的作文（12-15分）,pair work-make your passage better,小组活动-修改自己的作文,A sample passage,I have studied in three schools-knidergarten, primary shcool and Huanggang Middle school Guangzhou Branch, let me tell you something about them. My kindergarten is near my home, my primary school is farther than kindergarten and the middle school is the fathest.so I cannt go home everyday. My primary school is very small,but it is as beautiful as my kindergarten. Huanggang Middle School Guangzhou Branch is the largest and the most beatiful of the three. There are many trees and sweet flowers. I like them very much. In middle shcool , there is a lot of homework everyday, so I am the busiest.there is less homework in primary school. and in kindergarten, we have no homework.at that time, we can play with my friends without thinking about the homework. Although I am busy in the middle school, I feel hapy everyday.I think my school ilfe will be better and better.,What does a good passage look like?,1、内容要完整（抓住要点，注意文体） 2、语句流畅。（要尽量使用自己能够正确运用的语句和表达方式。注意句子之间的连贯性-连接词的使用） 3、没有语法错误。 4、书写规范，漂亮。,英语课堂当场测试卷,翻译下列句子。 1. 李明和吴伟一样重。 _ 2. 吴伟的数学最差。 _ 3. 王刚比李明大一岁。 _ 4. 幼儿园比小学漂亮。 _ 5. 黄冈中学广州学校的老师是最好的。 _,英语课堂当场测试卷,翻译下列句子。 1. 李明和吴伟一样重。 li Ming is as heavy as Wu Wei 2. 吴伟的数学最差。 Wu Weis maths is the worst/Wu Wei is worst at maths. 3. 王刚比李