英语毕业论文致谢范本.doc

英语毕业论文致谢范本 一、问题与分析 学生论文“致谢”写作时存在的问题主要表现在以下三个方面 1.对象不明例如: iamgratefultomyparentswithouttheirsupporticannotfinishmythesis.iamalsothankfultoallmyclassmatesandteacherswithouttheirencouragementicannotgetdowntowritingthethesis.andfinallyiwanttothanktheforeignlanguagesdepartmentofxxxuniversityforprovidingmeaputertotypeandprintoutmythesis. 从对象分析该“致谢”尽管提到了父母、同学和老师但排名先后顺序不当而对导师(supervisor)的指导却只字不提 看来学生还不清楚“致谢”的主要对象应该是谁 2.文体混乱例如: itwasreallyalaborioustasktoacplishmythesis.manypeoplegavemesupportandhelpintheprocessofwritingthepaper.idlikefirsttogivemygratitudetomydearteacherpro.fxxxwhogenerouslygavemeherkindhelpandinstructionsduringthewholeprocessofmypaperwriting.thenidliketogivemymanythankstomyclassmateswhohelpedmealotwithmyinformationcollectingandpaperpolishing. 从文体上分析此“致谢”混用了正式文体和非正式文体 如laboriousgratitude属正式文体语言短语alot和缩合词id属非正式文体语言另外在此用dearteacher来表示“导师”也不当或欠妥可见学生尚未掌握“致谢”写作的文体 3.内容牵强例如: iwouldliketothankmysupervisormrs.xxxwhohelpedmedrawanoutlineofthethesisandcorrectmymistakesinthethesis.alsoiwanttothankallmyteachers.ilearnedalotfromthemnotonlytheknowledgebutalsotheworkingattitude.moreoverithankmyclassmatesaswel.lduringthestudywebecamegoodfriendsandspenthappytime.andfinallyiamgratefultomyparentswithouttheirsupporticannotacplishmystudy. 从内容来看本“致谢”除第一句外其他句子都与撰写论文无关这表明学生不知道“致谢”内容实质 二、解决对策 在对以上所存在问题的分析过程中笔者对论文“致谢”的写作也进行了一些研究英语科研论文写作概要一书中这样指出:“inwesternacademiccirclestherearestrictconventionsaboutwhatshouldbeputinsuchanacknowledgementandthewayinwhichitshouldbewritten.”1由此可见“致谢”写作是有一定规定的因循惯例是关键也是解决“致谢”写作问题的对策具体对策有以下三点: 1.明确“致谢”的对象 英语科研论文写作概要一书中还指出:”generallyspeakingthanksarerenderedonlytothosewhohavehelpedthewriteracademically.”2具体说来“致谢的对象是在研究过程以及在论文的写作过程中、对作者的研究和成文起了一定的指导、帮助、支持和鼓励作用的人员”3由此看来英语专业学士学位论文“致谢”的对象应主要是对论文进行指导的导师同时包括对论文提出过建议或意见的教师、同学和朋友以及对论文写作提供具体帮助的机构和关心论文的作者家人等 2.采用“致谢”写作的文体 “毕业论文或学士论文是一种研究性论文(researchpaper)它的语气、格调和格式不同于非正式文体毕业论文是一种正规作文必须遵循正规作文的规范”4英语毕业论文属研究性论文在写作上理应采用正式文体“致谢”的文体也在其中包括宜用学术性词汇、采用单个动词、使用单词的全拼形式、多用平行句子例如:ialsoextendmysinceregratitudetoprofessorxxxforhisconstantsupportthroughoutmyworkonthisthesisandforhisinformedguidanceandadvice. 本句中使用的学术性词汇有extendsinceregratitude和informedguidance这些词汇的使用可使“致谢”严谨、庄重 iammostgratefultomysupervisorprofessorxxxwithoutwhosesupportandpatiencethisthesiswouldnothavebeenpleted. 此句中用了单个动词“pleted”意思比较明确在此则不可采用短语动词“carriedout”因为短语动词为非正式语言“短语动词往往不止一种含义而且常常难以确定写专业论文时往往要用意义比较明确的单个动词来代替”5carryout就有“实施(计划)”、“举行(义务、约定)”、等含义 iwouldliketothankmysupervisorprofessorxxxwithoutwhosemosthelpfulinstructionsandguidancethepletionofthisthesiswouldhavebeenimpossible. 此句中的“iwouldliketo”不宜缩写为“idliketo”英语缩写词“一般用于非正式文体”6iwouldliketoexpressmydeepgratitudetomysupervisorprofessorxxxforspendingmuchtimereadingandimprovingthisthesis. iwouldalsoliketoextendmysincerethankstomr.xxxforevaluatingmythesisandofferingvaluableinput. finallyiwouldliketogivethankstomyclassmatexxxforfindingmemanyvaluablereferencesinthecourseofmywriting. 此“致谢”中的三个句子相互平行结构相似均采用的是“iwouldliketodosth.tosb.fordoingsth.”这一句子结构 带有平行结构的句子常用于正式文体7以表强调 3.掌握“致谢”内容的实质 尽管英语毕业论文“致谢”的篇幅不大但其内容安排要求对其排列有序、段落层次分明、理由实在具体篇例如:iammostgratefultomysupervisorprofessorxxxwithoutwhosemosthelpfulinstructionsandwarmencouragementthisthesiswouldnothavebeenfinished. iamalsogratefultomyclassmatesxxxandxxxfortheirtimespentwithmediscussingquestionsconcerned. andlastlyspecialthanksgotomyparentsandmybrotherwhohavealwayssupportedmeinmyendeavorstofinishthisthesis. 此“致谢”的对象包括导师、同学和家人其感谢的顺序是先导师、再同学、后家人符合“致谢”写作的对象排序 mysincerestgratitudegoestomysupervisorprofessorxxx. shehashelpedmeinchoosingasuitabletopicandguidedmethroughmythesiswriting. myspecialthanksalsogotoxxxandxxxmygoodfriends.theyhaveremendedtomesomeusefulbooksrelatedtomythesis. finallyawordofappreciationtotheschoolofforeignlanguagesforallowingmetousethereferenceroomandputerroomformyresearch. 本“致谢”采用了分段感谢第一段感谢导师帮助“我”选出论文的合适题目并指导完成论文;第二段感谢好朋友推荐给“我”一些与论文有关的有用书籍;最后一段感谢外国语学院允许“我”使用资料室和计算机室进行研究“致谢”对象各成一段内容明确、层次分明 iwouldliketothankmysupervisorassociateprofessorxxxwhohasgivenmetheconsiderableacademichelpandconstantsupportduringmythesiswriting. iwouldalsoliketothankmyclassmatesxxxandxxxwhohavespenttimediscussingquestionsconcernedwithmeandofferedmekindadviceaboutthethesis. finallyiwouldliketothankxxxlibrarywhichhasprovidedmewithusefulreferenceneededinmythesis. 该“致谢”中感谢理由都与完成论文有关而且具体实在向导师致谢是因为在“我”论文写作期间导师提供了很大的学术帮助和不断的支持向同学致谢是因为他们花时间跟“我”讨论论文中的有关问题并提出了好的意见向xxx图书馆致谢是因为它给“我”提供了有关论文的所需资料 三、佐证示例 以下“致谢”对象具体、文体正式、格式规范实事求是态度诚恳比较符合西方英语学位论文“致谢”的写作这一具体要求:“laudingonesprofessorsandhumblingonesowneffortsareconsideredinappropriate.”8acknowledgementsiwouldliketoexpressmyheartfeltgratitudetomysupervisorprofessorxxxforherencouragementguidanceandadvicetomethroughoutthewritingofthisthesis. iwouldalsoliketoextendmysincerethankstoprofessorxxxforhisinsightfuladviceonmychoiceoftopicandhishelpfulsuggestions. inadditioniwouldliketothankmyclassmatesxxxandxxxfortheirt