高三英语二轮复习 第二篇 分类写作9 观点议论课件.ppt

,分类写作,九、观点议论,for the following reasons 由于以下的原因 take examinations 考试 cheat in examinations 考试作弊 please their parents 取悦他们的父母 break the rules 违反规则 be honest 诚实的 get good grades 取得好成绩 improve ones study methods 改进学习方法 principles of nature 自然的法则 science subjects 自然科学学科 arouse our curiosity 激发我们的兴趣 recommend 推荐 great thoughts 伟大的思想 fascinating stories 极好的故事 think critically 批判性地思考 enrich the mind 丰富思想,【必备词语】,a diversity of 多种多样的 science and literature 科学和文学 appeal to sb. 吸引某人 broaden ones horizon 扩大视野 sharpen ones mind 提高思维能力 reflect 反思 live ones life to the full 让人生丰富 column 栏目 express ones thoughts 表达某人的思想 strengthen ones ties 增强某人间的关系 lie in 在于方面 remind sb. of sth. 使某人想起 best companion 最好的伴侣 encourage sb. to do sth. 鼓励某人做某事,【必备词语】,1. There are different opinions among people as to this issue. 人们对此事有不同观点。 2. It has brought us a lot of benefits but created some serious problems as well. 它给我们带来了很多好处，但同时也引发了一些严重的问题。 3. Everything has two sides and this is not an exception. It has both advantages and disadvantages. 事情都有两面性，这件事也不例外。它既有优点也有缺点。 4. Just as a popular saying goes, “Every coin has two sides.” 就像一句流行的话所说的：“每件事都有两面性。”,【好句朗诵】,5. Views vary from person to person. 仁者见仁，智者见智。 6. In their view, there are two factors contributing to this attitude. 在他们看来，产生这种态度的原因有两个。 7. As far as I am concerned, they do so for the following reasons. For one thing . For another . 依我之见，他们这样做的原因如下。一方面 另一方面 8. In my opinion, it is wrong to cheat in examinations because . 依我之见，考试作弊是错误的，因为 9. Ill be glad if you can consider my recommendation. 如果您能考虑我的推荐，我会很高兴。,【好句朗诵】,1. There are different opinion among people as to whether it is necessary to start learning English from childhood.,1. opinion改为opinions,2. As the saying goes, every coins has two sides.,2. coins改为coin,【单句改错】 每句只有一个错误,3. As far as I am concern, I firmy support the view that students should learn some English from childhood.,3. concern改为concerned,4. Nowadays, more and more people are beginning to be aware of the serious of pollution.,4. serious改为seriousness,5. In my opinion, the Internet is very of helpful rather than harmful.,5. 删掉of,【单句改错】 每句只有一个错误,6. On the other hand, others insist on not having it build in the city.,6. build改为built,7. First of all, it is very convenient for peope to purchase that they want or like with the Internet.,7. that改为what,8. Second, shop on line is able to save time as well.,8. shop改为shopping,【单句改错】 每句只有一个错误,9. On the contrary, some people in favour of the method.,9. people后加are,10. But when we enjoy the convenience it brings to us, we should be careful because sometimes the quality of goods cannot be guaranteed.,10. 删掉to,【单句改错】 每句只有一个错误,【2014山东卷改编：我喜欢的英语谚语】 某英文报社组织了题为“我喜欢的英语谚语”征文活动，你有意参加。请从下面两句谚语中任选一句作为标题写一篇英语作文，内容须包括： 1. 该谚语的含义； 2. 体现该谚语含义的个人经历。 .A friend in need is a friend indeed. .Where theres a will, theres a way. 参考词汇： 谚语 proverb,【真题满分佳作赏析】,满分佳作（一） A Friend In Need Is A Friend Indeed. A life without friends is a life without sunshine! Friends try their best to help you without thinking of what they can get from it. Once I doubted the usefulness of study, losing my interests and direction, even confidence. Finally, I decided to stop studying. After knowing the news, my friend encouraged me patiently. She insisted on persuading me until I promised to give up this thought. Later, I made up my mind to study hard so as to enter my dream university. Many people will be in and out of your life, but only true friends will leave footprints in your heart. True friends always come to you when you need help,满分赏析 第一段先阐述了作者对朋友的理解；A life without friends is a life without sunshine!这一比喻也让文章立刻增分。注意：这样的语言是作者积累来的，而不是想象出来的。 第二段用例子证明朋友在困难时期给自己的帮助。第一句用到了现在分词短语作伴随状语。 insist on doing sth.(坚持做某事)，体现了朋友对自己帮助之心的真切。 “很多人会在你的生命中来来去去，但是只有真正的朋友会在你的心中留下足迹。”这样的语句用在中文作文中也属佳句。,满分佳作（二） Where Theres A Will, Theres A Way. Among all the instructive I proverbs, the one I like most is “Where there is a will, there is a way”, which tells us that we should stick to our dreams. For me, the saying has a special meaning. When I was in Junior Middle School, I was so poor in my studies that I nearly gave up. But my head-teacher was always there and gave me confidence every time I lost heart. He used to say, “A little more effort and you will make it.” Thanks to my dearest teacher, all my efforts paid off and finally I became a top student. Nothing is impossible to a willing heart. As long as you keep trying ,youll make it.,满分赏析 本句自然地引出了论题；且用到which引导的非限制性定语从句和stick to ones dreams这样增分的短语。 every time属于用作连词的名词，是正确恰当的语法。 dearest一词体现了作者对老师的情感；my efforts paid off(我的努力有了回报)运用正确，pay off的主语应是“efforts, hard work”等。 用谚语来论证谚语，增加了说服力。多记谚语，写作将顺手拈来,【2005福建卷改编：考试作弊现象】 作文原题 目前，学校存在少数学生考试作弊现象。某英文杂志社对此现象向中学生征文，标题是“My opinion on cheating in examinations ”。请根据下列提示用英语写一篇征文稿。 内容要点如下： 参考词汇：作弊cheat (n. ),【模仿翻译】,作文翻译 关于考试作弊的看法 我们都知道，一些学生在学校里考试作弊。依我之见，他们这样做的原因如下。一方面，作为学生，我们在学校经常考试，但是有时候我们有太多考试，它们很难。另一方面，有些人很懒，不想认真学习功课。所以，当考试时，他们有时候作弊，以取得更好的成绩来取悦他们的父母和老师。 我认为，考试作弊是不对的，因为它违反了校规。我们学生应该诚实，尝试通过努力学习而不是考试作弊来获得好成绩。而且，我们应该改善我们的学习方法，考试前做好准备。,My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations It is known to us all that some students cheat in examinations at school. As far as I am concerned, they do so for the following reasons. For one thing, as students, we often take examinations at school, but sometimes we have too many examinations, which are too difficult for us. For another, some of us are lazy and dont work hard at their lessons. So when taking examinations, they sometimes cheat in order to get better results to please their parents and teachers. In my opinion, it is wrong to cheat in examinations because it breaks the rules of schools. We students should be honest and try to get good grades by studying hard instead of cheating in examinations. Whats more, we should improve our study methods and get well prepared for examinations.,【2014浙江卷改编：推荐书目】 作文原题 学校图书馆需要购置一批新书，现向学生征求意见。假如你是李华，你认为学校图书馆最需要购置科普类图书（popular science books）和文学类图书（literary books）。请你用英语给图书馆王老师写一封信推荐这两类书，并分别说明推荐理由。,作文翻译 亲爱的王老师， 得知我们的图书馆将要买书，我想给一些建议。 我们最需要的是科普类图书。通常，科普类图书以一种简单有趣的方式解释了自然界的基本原则。它们帮助我们更好地理解理科科目，激发我们科学发现的兴趣。 除了为获取知识而阅读外，我们也为愉悦和灵感而读书。这就是我为什么推荐另外一类书：文学类图书。大师们写的经典著作通过有趣的故事和语言呈现了伟大的思想。它们不仅给我们快乐，而且鼓励我们批判性地思考。 如果您能考虑我的推荐，我会很高兴。 您诚挚的， 李华,Dear Mr. Wang, Knowing that our library is going to buy books, Id like to give some suggestions. What we need most are popular science books. Usually popular science books explain basic principles of nature in a simple and interesting way. They help us understand science subjects better and arouse our curiosity about scientific discoveries. In addition to reading for knowledge, we read for fun. That is why I recommend another category of books：literary books. Classic works, written by masters, present great thoughts through fascinating stories and language. They not only offer us joy and excitement, but also encourage us to think critically. Ill be glad if you can consider my recommendation. Yours sincerely, Li Hua,【2012江西卷改编：喜欢读什么书】 某英文报社正举办以 “I Like Reading”为主题的征文活动，你打算投稿。请根据以下要点写一篇短文： 1你为什么喜欢读书； 2你喜欢读哪一类的书（例如：历史、科学、文学等）。请给出至少两个理由。,【全真考场】,【2012江西卷改编：喜欢读什么书】 I Like Reading Just as the saying goes, by reading we enrich the mind. Actually, a good book is a great friend, and I have benefited a lot from reading good books. There are a diversity of books for us to choose from, like those about history, science and literature, but what appeals to me most are those about the development of human society. For one thing, they offer me a window into how human society has developed into what it is now, which can surely broaden my horizon. For another thing, books of this kind can sharpen my mind, giving me a chance to reflect on the meaning of life, and therefore, I can live my life to the full.,【2007安徽卷改编：推荐刊物栏目】 假设你是李华。美国一所友好学校准备与你们学校共同创办一份中学生英文刊物，该校格林先生来信询问有关情况。请你给他写封回信，主要内容如下： 1. 表示赞成； 2. 提出你喜欢的栏目； 3. 简要说明理由。 参考词汇：栏目 column June 8 Dear Mr.Green, I am very excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine together. Yours faithfully, Li Hua,【2007安徽卷改编：推荐刊物栏目】 June 8 Dear Mr. Green, I am very excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine together. It is indeed a wonderful idea and everyone hopes for its success. I would like the magazine to have three columns: News, Teachers Advice and Students Voice. From the News column we can learn about what is going on in both of our schools. In Teachers Advice, our teachers can give us such help as we may not be able to get in the classroom. Students Voice will allow us to freely express our thoughts and feelings about our lives and studies. I be