非谓语动词在写作中的运用 李萍.ppt

Non- finite Verbs in writing 非谓语动词在写作中的应用,Teaching goal: Master the use of non-finite verbs in writing. Teaching important point: Three forms of non-finite verbs. Teaching important difficult point: How to use non-finite verbs to make sentences.,Forms of non-finite verbs,V-ing V-ed to V,Eg. work-working-worked-to work,Revision. Do 1-15 on Page 21-22. 总复习目标,Revion.,1. They arrived at the school. They felt the happy atmosphere. 2. I am given another chance. I will succeed. 3. He wants to improve his English. He studies harder.,Arriving at the school, they felt the happy atmosphere.,Given another chance, I will succeed.,To improve his English, he studies harder.,Join the sentences with non-finitive verbs.,On National Day, I had very bad luck. When I woke up , I found it was too late for school. And I found the alarm clock was turned off. I hurried downstairs and found my bike which was broken was stolen. I felt exhausted when I arrived at school. After the school guard told me, I knew it was holiday for National Day. Then when I came back home, I realized I had left my keys in the door and I found my house was broken into.,Read the passage aloud.,On National Day , I had very bad luck. _ (wake) up, I found it was too late for school and the alarm clock _ (turn) off. I hurried downstairs and found my _ (break) bike _(lose).So I had to run to school. _ (exhaust), I arrived at school. _ (tell) by the school guard, I knew it was holiday for National Day. Then when _ (come) back home, I realized I had made my keys _ (leave) in the door and I found my house _ (break into).,Waking,turned,broken,lost,Exhausted,Told,coming,left,broken into,Read again and compare.,用非谓语结构改写和美化句子,1.因为在这国家没有朋友，她觉得要想找到工作是不可能的。 用连词because Because she had no friend in the country, she found it impossible to find a job. 用非谓语结构 Having no friend in the country, she found it impossible to find a job.,2.这本用简易英语写成的书很容易读懂 用定语从句 The book, is easy to understand. 用非谓语结构 The book , is easy to understand,用非谓语结构改写和美化句子,which was written in simple English,written in simple English,3. 他们是来自于几个国家的游客。 用定语从句 They are visitors who come from several countries. 用非谓语结构 They are visitors coming from several countries.,用非谓语结构改写和美化句子,4.发现他好朋友沮丧，他竭尽所能让他朋友开心。 用并列句 He found his best friend frustrated and he did everything he could to make him happy. 用非谓语结构 Finding his best friend frustrated, he did everything he could to make him happy.,用非谓语结构改写和美化句子, It is high time we took part in some activities. We want to make ourselves more healthy.,It is high time we took part in some activities to make ourselves more healthy.,4. 用非谓语结构合并下列句子,用非谓语结构改写和美化句子,Nowadays, some students often cheat in exams .It is popular among students who are lazy and dont work hard at their lessons. They cheat for they want to get higher marks so that they can be praised or even admired. Also, some students who work hard at their lessons will cheat in exams because they are afraid of failing in exams.,用非谓语结构美化文章,Nowadays, some students often cheat in exams .It is popular among students who are lazy and dont work hard at their lessons.,Nowadays, cheating in exams is popular among students who are lazy and dont work hard at their lessons.,用非谓语结构美化文章,They cheat for they want to get higher marks so that they can be praised or even admired.,They cheat to get higher marks so that they can be praised or even admired.,用非谓语结构美化文章,Also, some students who work hard at their lessons will cheat in exams because they are afraid of failing in exams.,Being afraid of failing in exams, some students who work hard at their lessons will also cheat in exams.,用非谓语结构美化文章,Nowadays, cheating in exams is popular among students who are lazy and dont work hard at their lessons. They cheat to get higher marks so that they can be praised or even admired. Being afraid of failing in exams, some students who work hard at their lessons will also cheat in exams.,用非谓语结构美化后的文章,要求：1. 用2- 3句话表达表格内容 2. 2- 3句话要有连贯性,necessary,an effective way to improve our learning in the class.,the basis for our further study and work.,高考临近，保持良好的心态有助于减轻焦虑，还能增强克服困难的勇气 。,Having a try,翻译: 高考临近，保持良好的心态有助于减轻焦虑，还能增强克服困难的勇气 。,高考临近。 (National College Entrance Examination) 保持良好的心态很重要。 (have a right attitude) 它有助于减轻焦虑（relax）和勇敢地克服困难。,Step2：分别翻译这几个简单句,National College Entrance Examination is coming., It is important to have a right attitude., It helps us to relax and overcome difficulties bravely.,Having a try,Step1：拆分成几个简单句(中文),Step3：合并句子,With National College Entrance Examination coming, it is important to have a right attitude to relax and overcome difficulties bravely., National College Entrance Examination is coming., It is important to have a right attitude., It helps us to relax and overcome difficulties bravely.,Sentence1:,Having a try,Step3：合并句子,With College Entrance Examination coming, it is important to have a right attitude which helps us to relax and overcome difficulties bravely.,College Entrance Examination is coming., It is important to have a right attitude., It helps us to relax and overcome difficulties bravely.,Sentence2:,Tip: Try to use different ways to express.,Having a try,要求：1. 用2- 3句话表达表格内容 2. 2- 3句话要有连贯性（2011高考模拟）,Having a try,necessary,an effective way to improve our learning in the class.,the basis for our further study and work.,2019/11/17,23,可编辑,Having a try,It is necessary to have enough sleep . Having enough sleep is necessary.,It will be an effective way to improve our learning in the class.,Keeping healthy is the basis for our further study and work.,To Keep healthy is the basis for our further study and work.,Passage： Having enough sleep is necessary, because it will be an effective way to improve our learning in the class. Moreover, to keep healthy is the basis for our further study and work.,Tip: Never ignore the conjunction.,Having a try,With College Entrance Examination coming, it is important to have a right attitude which helps us to relax and overcome difficulties bravely. Having enough sleep is necessary, because it will be an effective way to improve our learning in the class. Moreover, to keep healthy is the basis for our further study and work. Besides, doing exercise regularly is of great benefit to our health. Last but not least, it is very important to keep a balanced diet.,二. 使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档,三. 巧用倒装增强句子表现力,四. 尝试多 样化表达方式,一.使用较高级词汇使文章增加吸引力,强调句,With短语复合结构,定语从句,名词性从句(主宾表同从句),各种状语从句,被动语态,书面表达评分档次,情景作文共分6档给分 第1档 18-20 分 第2档 15-17 分 第3档 12-14 分 第4档 6 -11 分 第5档 1 - 5 分 第6档 0 分,08北京高考： 假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华，为校刊英语园地写一篇题为 “Our Spring Outing” 的英文稿件。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，叙述上周你们班从准备春游到春游结束的完整过程。 注意：词数不少于60。 提示词：游乐园 amusement park 垃圾箱 bin,讨论,爬山,捡拾别人的垃圾,投放垃圾,常用语： 1.Last Friday left me a deep impression, which I will never forget. Last week, I / my brother had an unforgettable experience. 2. In order to improve our abilities of facing danger, our school organized an activity. 按时间顺序描写 3. Early in the morning, we met at the school gate and went toby bus. One Sunday morning, my classmates and I went to the park for an picnic. 4 After doing, we went to do. 5.Having done,we 6. And then, we,结尾语： I was tired, but I was happy that I did a good deed. I have learned a great deal through the activity. It is an unforgettable day / experience 评论语/感慨 I think the activity is both necessary and meaningful. It not only makes us aware of the importance of self- protection/helping others/protecting our environment but also develop our abilities of dealing with things /communicating with others. 2.The activity can develop /promote our sense of social responsibility.,.心情语 We were in high spirit. With excitement filling our heart, we said thanks/goodbye to sb. With our hearts filled with excitement, we. To our joy/delight, we saw 景色： 1. The view was beautiful. 2. The sun was shining. 3. Gently came the soft wind. 4. The weather was clear , the wind calm and the sun shining,时间顺序： 要点： 细节： 适当添加：,时间顺序： 要点： 细节： 适当添加：,时间顺序： 要点： 细节： 适当添加：,时间顺序： 要点： 细节： 适当添加：,Early in the morning set off climb 爬山、天气 心情，景色,When we got to the top of 到处垃圾 情绪-惊讶 心情,Finally或few hours later,或After 投放垃圾 可回收, 不可回收 感受,Before the Spring outing 讨论 不同的想法 心情,好作文的要素：具体生动,We started our spring outing on a fine day., In high spirits, we started our spring outing on a fine day. In high spirits, we started our spring outing early in the morning on a fine day. Flowers greeted us with their sweetest smiles and we were soaked up in the warm sunshine.,上周我们班组织了一次春游。 我们先召开了班会讨论春游去哪儿。 我们提出了很多不同的想法,例如去游乐园,去划出和去爬山。,Last week our class organized a spring outing. We first held a class meeting, discussing where to go for our spring outing. We came up with several choices, such as going to an amusement park, going boating and going mountain climbing. Finally, we decided to go mountain climbing.,1.第二天，我们一大早儿就出发了。 2.当我们爬山的时候,我们享受着温暖的阳光和欣赏着美丽的景色。 3.没过多久我们便来到了山顶。,The next day, we set off early in the morning. While climbing the mountain, we enjoyed the warm sunshine and a beautiful view. It didnt take us long to arrive at the top of the mountain.,4. 最后我们决定去爬山。,然而，当我们到达山顶的那一刻我们惊讶地发现这里到处都是游客留下的垃圾。 我们毫不迟疑地开始捡垃圾。,However, we were shocked to see litter here and there left by tourists the moment we reached there. Without any hesitation, we set out to pick up the litter at once.,捡完所有垃圾后，我们把垃圾分别扔到附近的可回收和不可回收的垃圾桶里。 虽然很累，但我们很有成就感。 因为我们为保护环境尽了我们的绵薄之力。,Having collected all the rubbish, we put the rubbish into the nearby recycling bin and non-recycling bin respectively. Tired as we were, we had a sense of achievement because we did our small part to protect the environment.,最基本的范文,Last Thursday, we_ a class meeting _where to go for our spring outing. We _up with several choices, such as_ boating, _a mountain, and _to an amusement park. Finally we decided_ mountain climbing. The next day, we set off early in the morning, while _the mountain, we _ the warm sunshine and a beautiful view. However, when we _the top, we _to see litter here and there, such as bottles and bananas peels. Then we started _the litter. Afterwards, we put the rubbish into the nearby _bin and_ bin respectively. We _tired but happy.,had,to discuss,came,going,climbing,going,to go,climbing,enjoyed,reached,were shocked,to pick up,recycling,non-recycling,were,38,Last week, our class organized a spring outing. To make this memorable activity more wonderful, we discussed the destination carefully and finally decided to go mountain climbing instead of other choices like playing in an amusement park and going boating. With high spirits, we started our spring outing on a fine day. Flowers presented us with their sweetest smiles and were soaked up in the warm sunshine. However, we were shocked when we reached the top of the mountain. Waste bottles and used packages were thrown everywhere which totally ruined the beauty of the nature. Feeling a great pity for the tourists, we picked up the rubbish and carefully divided them into two groups: the recycle ones and the non-recycle ones. After that, we put the rubbish,39,into the bin differently. We call on awareness on protecting our environment which is of great importance. Though cleaning up the rubbish was a tough task, our hearts were filled with joy and we will remember this outing for ever.,19,Gently comes the Spring. As the wind softly blows, it brings back the vitality to the great outdoor. Students in our class were excited, too, and eager to have a spring outing in the weekend last week. A heated discussion was held: Some students suggested we go boating, some insisted that going hiking was the best idea, while some thought the amusement park was of more fun. Finally, we decided to go hiking in the mountains on a sunny day. The flowers were blooming happily and sent their welcome to us. With excitement in our heart, we climbed the mountain easily and reached the peak soon.,优秀作文欣赏,To our surprise, what we found on the peak was not only beautiful scenery, but also rubbish here and there. Feeling so bad for the environment spot, we changed our plan and began picking up the rubbish. Afterwards, we brought the rubbish down the mountain and sorted them into “can be recycled” and “cant be recycled”. We finally dropped them into different bins set at the foot of the mountain. Fun as we had during the trip, we still felt so sorry for the ruined nature. I think it is everyones duty to take care of the environment so that we can contribute to a better living and relaxing space for others.,得分：18分 内容要点齐全，连贯，恰当使用了连接成分，所用句式和词汇较丰富；体现了较强的语言运用能力。,假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华，为校刊英语园地写一篇题为“Our Social Practice Activity”的英语稿件。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，叙述上周你们班从准备参观首都博物馆到参观结束的完整过程。 注意：次数不少于60,Our class visited the Capital Museum last week, and it is one of the most impressive social practice activities since high