2018届高考英语二轮复习书面表达针对练六推荐信.docx

书面表达针对练(六)推荐信题目要求(2017陕西省重点中学协作体高考适应性考试)假设你是李华，计划今年暑假去美国旅游两周，请给你的美国朋友David写一封电子邮件，主要内容包括：1提出你对旅游地点的要求并请David推荐地点；2你对住宿和交通的要求；3请他代为预订宾馆并对他表示感谢。注意：1.词数100左右；2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear David，_Best regards!Yours，Li Hua四步作文法第一步审题谋篇1体裁推荐信2时态一般现在时3人称第一人称为主第二步要点要全1一想到假期里要去美国旅游我感到很兴奋。I feel very excited at the thought that I_am_going_to_visit_America_in_the_holiday.2对我来说，这是第一次独自出国旅行，所以我需要你的帮助。Its the first time for me to travel_abroad_on_my_own,_so I_need_your_help.3我想游览一些有美景的地区，如高山、峡谷、河流和森林，在那里我可以享受大自然的美。Id like to visit some areas of scenic beauty, such_as_mountains,_valleys,_rivers_and_forests. There I could enjoy_the_beauty_of_nature.4我更喜欢住在宾馆，我希望周围的交通不太拥挤，我要租一辆车开始我的旅行。I prefer_to_live_in_the_hotel and I hope the_traffic_around_isns_too_heavy. Im going to rent_a_car_to_start_my_travel.5请帮我预订一个宾馆。Please help_me_book_a_hotel.第三步句式要美1句3合并升级为where引导的定语从句Id_like_to_visit_some_areas_of_scenic_beauty,_such_as_mountains,_valleys,_rivers_and_forests,_where_I_could_enjoy_the_beauty_of_nature.2句4合并升级为because引导的状语从句I_prefer_to_live_in_the_hotel_and_I_hope_the_traffic_around_isnt_too_heavy_because_Im_going_to_rent_a_car_to_start_my_travel.第四步衔接要顺用适当的衔接词串句成文Dear_David，The summer holiday is drawing near. I feel very excited at the thought that I am going to visit America in the holiday. Its the first time for me to travel abroad on my own, so I need your help. Id like to visit some areas of scenic beauty, such as mountains, valleys, rivers and forests, where I could enjoy the beauty of nature. Please recommend several places to me. Besides, I prefer to live in the hotel and I hope the traffic around isnt too heavy because Im going to rent a car to start my travel. Please help me book a hotel. Thanks a lot.Im expecting to hear from you, and Im looking forward to meeting you.Best_regards!Yours，Li_Hua改写两用这是根据本题目学生完成的一篇习作，文中有10处错误，请改正。Dear David，The summer holiday is around the corner and my dream of travelling to America is to come true, which makes me to feel excited. Which you know, this is my first visit to your country, so I have a request you (should) do me a favour. I would visit some places of great interests, which can stand by the characteristic of your country. Would you please recommend my some scenic spots?As for accommodation, Id like to live in a peace place, around which the traffic should not be too heavy, for I would rent an mountain bike for convenience. Please help me book so a hotel in advance. Much thanks!Looking forward to your early reply.Best regards!Yours，Li Hua答案：Dear David，The summer holiday is around the corner and my dream of travelling to America is to come true, which makes me feel excited. you know, this is my first visit to your country, so I have a request you (should) do me a favour. I would visit some places of great ， which can stand the characteristic of your country. Would you please recommend some scenic spots?As for accommodation, Id like to live in a place, around which the traffic should not be too heavy,