书面表达专项突破-日记.ppt

1.日记,文体概述英语日记一般记录一天发生的事件或是自己感受最深的事，可分为记事、议论、描写、抒情等。写英语日记要注意下面几点：一、格式英语日记由书端和正文组成。书端指写日记的星期、日期和天气，顶格写在左上角，先写星期，再写日期，最后写天气。(例如：FridayFebruary26th,2016Sunny)二、时态谓语动词多用一般过去时态，但是要根据具体情况使用其他时态。,三、写正文时应注意的问题1.围绕一个主题来展开。2.若无法用已学语言知识来表达某种意思，可采用“同义转换法”。3.结尾最好用一句话来总结自己的感想或体会。,常用语块因为_2.对感到惊讶_3.对严格要求_4.为做好准备_5.到达_,getto/reach/arriveat(in),becauseof(doing)sth./because+句子,besurprisedat,bestrictin/with,get/bereadyfor,6.给一些忠告/建议_7.帮助某人做某事_8.出发；动身_9.发生_10.积极参加_,takeanactivepartin,givesomeadviceon,helpsb.withsth.,setoff,takeplace,11.散步/休息_12.采取有效措施做某事_13.乘坐公交车/火车/自行车_14.拍照_15.在家/在上班_,beathome/beatwork,takeawalk/takearest/break,takeeffectivemeasurestodosth.,bybus/train/bike(takeabus/train/biketo),takephotos/pictures,套用句式今天我在广州经历了一件难忘的事。2.昨晚我和一些好朋友去KTV唱歌。3.这是我第一次做,2.LastnightIwenttotheKTVwithsomeofmygoodfriends.,1.IhadanunforgettableexperienceinGuangzhoutoday.,3.ThiswasthefirsttimethatIhaddonesth.,4.在公园散步的时候，我遇到一个外国人正在欣赏城市的美景。5.首先，其次，此外，最后，,4.WhenIwastakingawalkinthepark,Isawaforeignerenjoyingthebeautyofthecity.,5.First,Besides,Whatsmore,Finally,习作修改(做短文改错，背经典范文)WednesdayJuly20,2015FineYesterdayIwenttoQingdaowithmyfamilybythetrain.Thesunshineandfreshairtheremadeuscomfortably.Wewenttotheseaside,wheretheseawasasblueasthesky.Bathinginthesunshineonthebeachwerereallyanenjoyablething.Ipickedupalotofcolorfulshellswithmylittlesister.,comfortable,was,Therewebuymanyinterestingsouvenirs.Iwasplanningtosendthemmyfriends.Weatemanythingthere,suchasfish,prawn(大虾),beefandsoon.Theywereverydelicious.Atnighttheylivedinahotelnearbywherewascleanandtidybutthepricewasreasonable.Qingdaoissuchabeautifulandinterestingplacethatitiswellworthseeasecondtime.,bought,things,we,which/that,and,seeing,1.去掉train前的the因为乘坐交通工具不用定冠词the。fortablycomfortable作宾补用形容词。3.werewas动名词作主语谓语动词用单数。4.buybought这是一篇日记，讲述过去发生的事情用一般过去时。5.在myfriends前加to表示“把某物送给某人”用sendsth.tosb.。,6.thingthings根据前面的many可知要用thing的复数形式。7.theywe根据上下逻辑关系，应是“我们”晚上住在宾馆。8.wherewhich/that先行词是hotel，指物，故用which/that引导定语从句。9.butand表示“顺承”关系用并列连词and，译为“而且”。此处并无“转折”关系。10.seeseeing固定结构bewellworthdoing意为“某事很值得做”，是主动表被动。,课堂练习假设你是李华，今天(星期日，3月20日，晴)在公园爬山时遇到一个外国人来旅游。你和他进行了交流。请围绕这个事情写一篇日记。要点如下：1.想跟他谈话却不知所措。2.你向他介绍你的城市。3.他给你一些学习的建议。注意：1.词数100左右。2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3.开头语已为你写好。,SundayMarch20,2016Fine,ThismorningwhenIwastakingawalkinthepark,Isawaforeignerenjoyingthebeautyofthecity.ThiswasthefirsttimethatIhadseenaforeigner.Iwantedtotalkwithhim,butIwassoexcitedandnervousthatIdidntknowwhattodoandhowtostartaconversation,thoughIdidwellinEnglishclasses.,EagertopractisemyspokenEnglish,Iencouragedmyselfandwenttosayhelloandwelcometohim.Hewasveryfriendlyandwetalkedforabout15minutes.Asanative,Iintroducedsometouristattractionsandtastyfoodtohim.Finally,hegavemesomeadviceonhowtofurtherimprovemyEnglish.Itwasmorethananexperience!,课外作业假设你是李华，今天(星期六，4月2日，多云)学校组织去科学馆参加题为“HumanActivitiesandWildlifeProtection”的活动。请围绕这次活动写一篇日记。要点如下：1.野生动植物的现状。2.保护野生动植物的意义。3.保护野生动植物的措施。注意：1.词数100左右。2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3.开头语已为你写好。,SaturdayApril2,2016Cloudy,ThisafternoonItookpartinanorganizedactivitywiththethemeof“HumanActivitiesandWildlifeProtection”inthesciencemuseum.Fromtheactivity,Ilearnthatatpresenttheenvironmentisbeingdestroyedbecauseofpeoplesharmfulactivities,whichcausesadecreaseofwildlife.Besides,manypeoplehuntwildanimalsfortheirmeatandmoney.,Tomakemattersworse,inresponse,thedecreaseisdoingharmtopeopleslife.Soitisnecessarytotakeeffectivemeasurestoprotectourenvironment,suchascreatingwildlif