初三英语写作训练.ppt

初三英语写作训练,什么是好篇章结构？,三段式作文,Middle正文,Ending结尾,concludingsentence结论句-对全文的总结和概括。【结尾画龙点睛，首尾呼应】,supportingsentences支持句-用例子、实事或数据围绕主题开展叙述、讨论。【注意使用连接词】,topicsentence主题句-说出文中的要点、核心问题【写好开头，好的开始是成功的一半】,Beginning开头,开头万能句型：1).playsanimportantpartinthe.2)Asweallknow,.becomesmoreandmore.3)Aseverybodyknows,.isoneofthemost.in.4)Manypeoplesaythat.ButIdontthinkso.5)Iwillneverforgetthe.,造主题句训练Makeatopicsentence.1）SmokingAsweallknow,smokingisabadhabit.Manystudentssaysmokingisfun,butIdontthinkso.Aseverybodyknows,smokingisbadforourhealth.,TheSpringFestivalIwillneverforgettheSpringFestival.TheSpringFestivalplaysanimportantpartinourlife.ManypeoplesaythatChristmasismorepopularthantheSpringFestival.ButIdontthinkso.,LearningEnglishAsweallknow,Englishbecomesmoreandmorepopular/important.ManypeoplesayitsdifficulttolearnEnglish.ButIdontthinkso.,TobeavolunteerAsweallknow,the16thAsianGamesiscomingsoon.Iwanttobeavolunteerforit.Avolunteerplaysanimportantpartinourlife.,ASchoolTripIwillneverforgettheschooltriplastweek.,【写好结尾画龙点睛，首尾呼应】1.与开头呼应，再次重申自己的观点,注意避免重复句式。2.结尾经典词组、句型：Atlast/Finally.最后Inaword,.总而言之Inshort,.简言之Wehopethat我们希望Letstryourbestto.Ibelieveifwecan.,.willbe.Whata.!/How.!,.根据主题概括训练Makeaconcludingsentence1）KeepinghealthyLetstryourbesttokeephealthy.Inshort,itsimportanttohavegoodhabitsandkeephealthy.,）HelpingothersIbelieveifwecanhelpothers,theworldwillbemoreandmorebeautiful.,ProtecttheenvironmentLetstryourbesttobeagreenconsumer.Inoneword,itsnecessaryforustoprotecttheenvironment.,Trips/XiamenHowbeautifulXiamenis!WhynotconsidercomingtoBeijingandenjoyingyourself?,开头、结尾的实战训练,书面表达在日常生活中你主动帮助你的父母做家务活吗？请你根据提示用英语写一篇80字左右的短文，描述你平时所做家务以及你对家务的看法。提示：1.扔垃圾2.扫地3.帮助妈妈做饭4.洗衣服5.为花浇水6.饭后洗碗要求：语句通畅，语法正确。不得逐句翻译。,满分作文（25分）Asweallknow,itsimportanttohelpparentsdohouseworkduringourdailylife.Ioftenhelpthemdohousework.Ithrowtherubbishawayandcleanthefloorinthemorning.Ihelpmymothercooklunch.Aftersupper,Ialwayswashdishes.Ithinkitcanmakemyparentsfeelmoreenjoyableafterwork.Ialwayswashclothesformyfamily.Besides,wateringtheflowersisalsomyduty.Ilikethemverymuchandtakegoodcareofthem.Inaword,themorehouseworkIdo,thehappiermyparentswillbe.（即总括又阐明看法）,常用于第一个推展段落开头的字词：,EverybodyknowsthatItistruethatThereasonwhyisthatWhatismoreseriousisthatWehavereasontobelievethatItcanbeeasilyseenthat,常用于第二个推展段落开头的字词（语气与第一个推展段不同或相反）：,ButitisapitythatHowever,Ontheotherhand,【正文：语言简洁，层次分明】1.长句短句交叉使用最好。2.基础一般的同学要尽量使用简单句，文章算不上完美，但很实用，基础好的同学要恰当写些从句提高档次。3.把握要点，层次清晰。4.注意句子与句子、段与段之间过渡自然，行文连贯，注意适当使用连词，例如：and,so,or,but,become,正文：巧用连接词，赋予语言灵气需要熟记的连接词有：1、按事情发展的先后或时间顺序1）Firstly,Secondly,Thirdly,2）first,then/next,afterthat/next,finally3)soon,suddenly,atthatmoment,assoonas,fromnowon,atthesametime,not.until,before,after,when,while,during,2、表示并列notonly.butalso,both.and,either.or,neither.nor，on(the)onehandontheotherhand3、表示举例或补充1）forexample2）besides/whatsmore/whatsworse,4、表示转折ho