英语专业四级便条写作解读.ppt

英语专业四级便条写作解读,fossil,便条写作概述,便条是一种简单的书信形式。要求学生仔细阅读和分析所给的情景，确定便条所涉及的内容，如写便条者与便条接收者的身份、两者之间的关系及情景的正式程度等。便条的特点在于内容简短，大多是临时性的询问、留言、通知、要求等。与正规书信相比，便条的语言更为口语化。有急事需告诉别人而又不能面谈时，就可以写便条，如请假条、留言条等。一般不写地址，与普通书信基本相同。结尾时也无需要结尾礼词，只需要写上便条者姓名。便条的日期一般只要写上星期几，也可以写明上午、下午的具体时间。便条具有用途广泛、形式简单、文字要求不十分严格的特点。,1.邀请便条：,发出邀请aApril20,2008DearFiona,Iamgoingtoholdadinnerpartywithseveralotherfriendsofours.ThepartywillbeheldinRoom6ofLijingHotelat5:00p.m.today,Isincerelyhopeyoucanattendandwewillhaveaveryhappytimetogether.Pleaseletmeknowwhetheryoucanmakeit.Yours,Amelia,发出邀请b,April20,2008DearFiona,Hereisapieceofgoodnewsforyou.The*willgiveaperformanceinthe*tomorrowevening.Iamsurethatyouwillbehappytowatchit.Theperformancewillbeginatsevenoclocksharp.Iwillwaitforyouatthetheaterentrance.Pleaseletmeknowwhetheryoucanmakeitatyourearliestconvenience.Yours,Amelia,发出邀请c,April20,2008DearProfessorZhou,IamAmeliafromclass052;Ineedyoutogivemesomesuggestiononmyproject.Ifitdoesnttroubleyoutoomuch,shallwehaveameetatyourofficetomorrow?Timeisuptoyou.Respectfulyours,Amelia,发出邀请d（通知）,April20,2008DeargirlsandboysinClass0403,ThisSaturdayevening,from7p.m.to9p.m.,atSingeingdininghall,therewillbeaballheldbyClass0301.Wewarmlyinviteyoutotakepartinit.Thereyoucanenjoyyourselveswithdance,musicandvariousgames.Andwellhaveachanceofcommunication,whichwillenhancethefriendshipbetweenus.Comeandenjoyourselvestogether.Yours,MikeMonitorofClass0301,接受邀请,April20,2008DearAmelia,Itssokindofyoutoinvitemetothedinnerparty,Iwouldliketocome.IwillgototheplacerightafterIfinishmyworkatabout5p.m.thisevening.(如果是办在家里：IshallbeveryhappytocallatyourhouserightafterIfinishmyworkat6:30thisevening.)ThankyouagainforyourwonderfulhospitalityandIamlookingforwardtoseeingyousoon.Yours,Fiona,拒绝邀请,April20,2008DearAmelia，Itssokindofyoutoinvitemetothedinnerparty,IwouldliketobutIhaveameetingtoattendthisevening,pleasegivemybestregardstothemallandIhopemyabsencewillnotcauseyouanyseriousinconvenience,havefun.Yours,Amelia,2请假条,April20,2008DearMs.Jiang,IamterriblysorrythatIshallbeunabletoattendthismorningtwoperiodsofEnglishClass（ImterriblysorrytoapplyfortendaysleavefromtheAug.23rdtoSep.3rd）duetoabadcoldandhighfever.Iwillshowyouthecertificatefromthedoctortosupportmyapplication.IwillgobacktoschoolassoonasIrecover.（IpromiseIwilldomybesttocatchthemissedlessonsonafterIcomeback.）Wishforyourallowance.Yoursrespectfully,Amelia,3请求便条,a讲清事情的因由（为什么请求）b请求行为c请求实现方式d致谢,套句：,请求帮助：Wouldyoudomeafavor?Wouldyoubesokindasto?/CouldItroubleyoutosendthisbookforme?/Iwonderifyouwouldtellme?/Ifitisnottootroublesome,couldyou?/Ihopethisrequestwillnottroubleyoutoomuch.请求允许：Pleasegivemeafewmoredays./MayIhavealookatyourdictionary?/WouldyoumindifIopenedthewindow?/IwonderifIcouldopenthedoor./Woulditbepossibletohaveatalkwithyou?,请求做事(要求与暗示),：Letsgotothebookstorethisafternoon./Iwanttohavealookatyourbook./Iwishyoucould/Iwouldlikeaskyoutocleantheroom./Youaremakingabigmess./Ifeelabithungrynow.Whattimeisitnow?,范文：,April20，2008DearProfessorHu,Iamveryhappytohavethechancetolistentoyourlectureon“AmericanLiterature”.ButitisapitythatIwaslatethatdayduetoanaccidentonmywaytothelectureandfailedtogetthehandout.YourlectureisreallyinstructiveformyEnglishstudy,soIwonderifyoucouldkindlye-mailthehandouttotheaddress:zhang123.Heartfeltthanks.Respectfullyyours,Amelia,4抱怨投诉便条(关键词complain,dissatisfaction),a抱怨投诉行为b投诉内容具体描述c要求弥补纠正赔偿d抱怨投诉者对弥补纠正赔偿等的敦促或威胁,套句：,行为描述ImwritingtobringyourattentiontotheproblemsIhavehadwithHerestheproblem解决方式的要求：Itwouldbeverykind(considerate)ofyoutoaddressthisproblemsoon./takestepstorectifythissituationsoon./turnitdownalittle?/敦促或威胁:Frankly,Ireallycantputupwiththesituationanymore.Youmustrectifythesituation,orIwilltakeittothecourt./Ifyoucantgivemeasatisfactoryanswer,IwillcomplainittotheConsumerAssociation.,范文：,April20，2008DearSirorMadam,IwenttoyourstoretobuyaRadiowatchlastSunday.WhenImentionedthehighprice,theNo.5saleswomanrepliedinasarcastictone,“Youcangoaheadandbuyacheapfakefromotherstores”.Shedidntknowhowtotreataprospectivebuyer!Ihopeyoucanimproveyourserviceandgivemeaface-to-faceapology.MytelephonenumberiSincerelyyours,Amelia,5.道歉便条,a道歉的行为与内容，b具体理由，c弥补方法，d进一步致歉。,套句：,道歉行为：Imwritingtoshowmyapologyfor/Iwouldliketoexpressmyapologiesfornotbeingableto/ImsorrytosaythatIvenotfinishedreadingitthrough,andhavetokeepituntilnextSunday./Excusemeformydelayinginturninginmyassignment.道歉理由：Ihadaminoraccident./Ihadaminoroperation.弥补纠正及其承诺：IamsureIcanmakeupthelossby/Ipromiseitwillneverhappenagain./Itwouldbeverykind(considerate)ofyoutogivemeanotherchanceto(togivemeanothertwodays进一步致歉：Manyapologies./Dopleaseforgiveme.,范文1,：April20，2008DearFiona,IamwritingtoyoutoapologizefortheabruptwayIdepartedjustaftertheexamsfinished.Itwasterriblyrudeofmetohaveleftwithoutsayinggood-byetoyou.ThefactisthatIwassoexcitedwhenIlearnedIhadpassedtheexamswithhighmarksthatIcouldntwaittogethomeandtellmyparents.Iamsureyouwillunderstandmyfeelings.Pleaseacceptmysincereapology,andwithyouareallyhappyholiday.Yourstruthfully,Amelia,范文2,April20，2008DearFiona,IamsorryImissedseeingyouyesterday.Iknowthatyoumusthavebeendisappointed.Ialsofeelworriedandanxiousinmyheart.Thefactisthatmymanager