高中英语基础写作-人物篇.ppt

基础写作人物介绍,UsainBolt,Born8,21,1986Jamaica,1.96meters,hard-working,love,determined,In2008,attheBeijingOlympicGames,brokeIn2009,intheWorldChampionship,Now,UsainBolt,UsainBoltwasbornonAugust21st,1986inJamaica.Heis1.96meterstallandheishard-working,fullofloveanddetermined.In2008,attheBeijingOlympicGameshebrokethe100-meterand200-meterworldrecords.In2009,intheWorldChampionshiphebrokehisownworldrecordsforthe100-meterand200-meterracesagain.Nowheisworkinghardtorealizehisdreamtobreakmoreworldrecords.,审题的步骤,、,文体,主体时态,人称,信息点整合,不要打草稿，但应有提纲,基础写作人物介绍,人物介绍,三段论,1.主题段-开头段Birthday,birthplaceandfamilybackground,2.拓展段-中间段Appearance,qualities,interest/hobbies,education,bigeventsinoneslife,3.总结段-结尾段evaluation对人物做出综合性的评价。,人物简介的一般步骤：Givetherightorder,()教育：education()外貌性格appearance,character()生平bigeventsinhisorherlife(inorderoftime)()评估evaluation()概况age,sex,birth-place,background,概况,外貌,教育,生平,评估,A.概况:译：钟南山年出生在广州，他是中国最伟大的医生之一.1)ZhongNanshanwasborninGuangzhouin1941andheisoneofthegreatestdoctorsinChina.1)ZhongNanshan,borninGuangzhouin1941,isoneofthegreatestdoctorsinChina.2)ZhongNanshan,oneofthegreatestdoctorsinChina,wasborninGuangzhouin1941.,语法，句法高分tips,可以用分词短语,同位语结构,使文章简洁,通顺,1.A.概况:,语法，句法高分tips,可以用分词短语,同位语结构,使文章简洁,通顺,译：费孝通，我国著名的社会学家和社会活动家，年月日生于一富裕家庭年月日因病逝于北京,Borninawell-offfamilyonNovember2,1910,FeiXiaotong,afamousChineseSociologistandactivesocialworker,passedawayforillnessinBeijingonApril24,2005.,B.外貌,性格:译：我的历史老师是个漂亮女人，她长着两只大眼睛，留着长发.,Myhistoryteacherisabeautifulwomanwhohastwobigeyesandlonghair.Myhistoryteacherisabeautifulwomanwithtwobigeyesandlonghair.,巧用with做定语,C.教育经历：,可以用非谓语动词,使文章精炼,AftershehadgraduatedfromtheEnglishdepartmentofZhongshanUniversity,shewentonfurthereducationandreceivedadoctorsdegree.HavinggraduatedfromtheEnglishdepartmentofZhongshanUniversity,shewentonfurthereducationandreceivedadoctorsdegree.,1.在中山大学英语系毕业后,她继续学习,获得了博士学位.,D生平：,可以用复合句倒装,非限定定语从句等，润色文章,Notonlyisheinterestedinscience,butalsohehasagiftformusic.,Hesetanewworldrecordofswimming,whichwonagoldmedalforChinaTeam.,1.他对科学极有兴趣,也有音乐天赋.,2.他创了一个新的游泳记录,为中国队赢得了一块金牌.,E评估：,注意运用一些动词、形容词等短语、词组,LishizhenmadegreatcontributionstoMedicalliterature.,Leifengsetusagoodexample,soallthepeoplespeakhighlyofhimandallrespecthim.,1.雷锋给我们树立了一个良好的榜样,我们都很敬重他.,2.李时珍为医学做出了巨大的贡献.,话题词汇，词组，句型：,外貌：good-looking相貌英俊的，funning-looking外表可笑的，ugly-looking丑陋的，ordinary-looking外貌平平的，white-haired白头发的，near/far-sighted近/远视的，charming有魅力的,时尚的fashionable,苗条slim性格气质：kind-hearted好心的，warm-hearted热心的，absent-minded心不在焉的，bad-tempered坏脾气的，astrongwill很强的意志力，naughty淘气的，smart/bright聪明的，wise睿智的，diligent勤奋的，humorous幽默的，attractive有魅力的，talkative能说会道的，confident有信心的，independent独立的，patient有耐心的,生日、出生地、年龄,(whowas)bornin,isa,a,isawithaheightofandaweightof家庭背景：wasbornin/intoapoor/richfamily出生在贫穷的/富裕的家庭asachildofyearsold,he还是个岁的孩子时spendhischildhoodin在度过了他的童年liveahappy/hardlife生活很幸福/艰苦,教育背景：beadmittedtouniversity考取大学graduatefromdepartmentofuniversity从某大学某系毕业receive/getadoctorsdegree获取博士学位主要事迹：serveas做某种工作devoteoneself/oneseffortto/bedevotedto一生致力于concentrate/applyoneselfto专注于makeuponesmindtodo/bedeterminedtodo决心做haveagiftfor/begiftedin有的天赋,成就：oneofthebest/mostimportant最好的/重要的之一2.setaexampleto为树立榜样3.behonouredas被授予；wintheprize获得荣誉4.makegreatcontributionto为作出巨大贡献,根据下表内容写一篇120词左右的英语短文介绍美国总统奥巴马。,提示：文体分段时态人称信息点整合,subject主语predicate谓语object宾语attribute定语adverbial状语complement补语predicative表语appositive同位语Cclause从句,Shortforms缩略语,P.,S.,O.,Att,Adv,com,pre,app,BarackObama,thesonofablackfatherfromKenyaandawhiteAmericanmother,wasborninHonolulu,HawaiionAugust4th,1961.,S.,P.,app,Adv,Whenhewasonlyasmallaboy,hedreamtofbecomingthePresidentoftheUnitedStates.,=Inhischildhood,/Asasmallboy,hehadagreatdreamthathewouldbecomethePresidentoftheUnitedStates.,S.,P.,O.,Adv.c,In1988,hewasadmittedintoHarvardLawSchool,wherehegainedhisdoctorsdegreein1991.,=In1988,hewasadmittedintoHarvardLawSchoolandhegainedhisdoctorsdegreein1991there.,S.,P.,Adv,Attc,Aftergraduation,heworkedasalawyer,lecturerandthentookuppolitics.,=AfterhegraduatedfromHarvard,heworkedasalawyer,lecturerandthentookuppolitics.,S.,P.,O.,P.,Adv,OnNovember4,2008,BarackObamadefeatedJohnMcCaininthegeneralelectionandbecamethefirstAfrican-AmericanPresidentoftheUnitedStates.,=OnNovember4,2008,BarackObamawonthegeneralelectiondefeatingJohnMcCainandbecamethefirstAfrican-AmericanPresidentoftheUnitedStates.,P.,S.,O.,P.,Adv,Adv,ThesuccessofObamainspiresAfrican-Americangreatly.Hisachievementsshowthatanyonecansucceedaslongasheworkshard.,S.,P.,O.,S.,P.,Oc.,Adv.c,StudenttimesNo6B3,著名歌手丛飞的爱心事迹传遍全国，深入到每个人的心中。现在请你根据下面的写作内容和写作要求，写一篇短文，介绍丛飞的感人事迹。写作内容生平1.1969年生于辽宁省盘锦市.1992年毕业于沈阳音乐学院。2、2006年4月20日病逝于深圳。主要事迹1、从1994年8月开始资助贫困儿童，坚持11年之久，共捐献300多万，多达178名贫困儿童受助。2、生前立下遗嘱捐献眼角膜。荣誉一生获得许多荣誉，其中包括获得“2005感动中国年度人物”的称号写作要求必须使用5个句子介绍全部所给的内容.参考词汇：捐献眼角膜donatecornea沈阳音乐学院ShenyangConservatoryofMusic2005感动中国年度人物2005CCTVMovingChinaAward,CongFeisspiritlivesonCongFei,borninPanjin,LiaoningProvincein1969,graduatedfromShenyangConservatoryofMusicin1992.FromAugust1994,hebeganhis11-yearcauseofaidingpoorchildreninmountainousareas,donatedmorethan8millionyuanandaidedupto1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