高考英语写作人物篇.ppt

Howtointroduceaperson?,AdescriptionofDr.Yuan,YoumayincludethefollowinginformationBirthofdate/placeEducationAppearanceinventsuperhybridriceAchievements:circulatehisknowledgeHobbies-givesomeexamplesHisdreams-twodreamsYourideasabouthim,Inmyeyes,Dr.Yuanisconsideredtobeapioneerforallpeople.-thebeginning-Birthofdate/place-wasbornin_Education-graduatedfrom_Appearance-adj.(s)inventsuperhybridriceAchievements:circulatehisknowledgeHobbies-givesomeexamplesHisdreams-twodreams-thebody-Yourideasabouthim-theending-,人物简介的写作步骤,1.Birthdayandbirthplace2.Familybackground3.Education4.Bigeventsinhisorherlife(inorderoftime)5.Evaluation,OurMonitorOurmonitorWentaoisnottallorhandsome,butheisverypopularatschool.Hehasagoodpersonality.Heisfunnyandforgiving.Hisstoriesandjokesmakeallofuslaugh,especiallywhenweareinlowspirits.Yetwhensomeonetriestomakefunofhim,henevergetsangry.Asamonitor,Wentaoisfriendlytoeveryclassmate.Nomatterwhoaskshimforhelp,heisalwayswarm-heartedandgenerous.Heisalsoareliableperson.Bothteachersandstudentstrusthim.Everydayheisthelastonetoleavetheclassroom,makingsurethatallthewindowsarelockedandthelightsareoff.Suchisourmonitor,Wentao.Wealllikehim.,Asamonitor,Wentaoisfriendlytoeveryclassmate.,Nomatterwhoaskshimforhelp,heisalwayswarm-heartedandgenerous.,Wentaoisfunnyandforgiving.,Hisstoriesandjokesmakeallofuslaugh,especiallywhenweareinlowspirits.Yetwhensomeonetriestomakefunofhim,henevergetsangry.,Heisalsoareliableperson.,Bothteachersandstudentstrusthim.Everydayheisthelastonetoleavetheclassroom,makingsurethatallthewindowsarelockedandthelightsareoff.,Howtodescribeapersonspersonalityorcharacteristics,Whenyoudescribeapersonscharacterandbehaviour,pleaseremembertosupportyourdescriptionwithexamples.,Organizationofacomposition,BriefintroductionNameofthepersonTherelationshipbetweenyouandhim/herMainbodyPersonalitycharacteristicsHis/HeractivitiesorachievementsConclusionYourcomments/feelingsabouttheperson,写人常用结尾句：,他不仅是我们的老师也是我们的朋友，我们尊重他,爱戴他。他是我们学习的榜样。有他这样的朋友我感到很骄傲。这就是我的父亲：勤劳、善良。我爱我的父亲。,Heisnotonlyourteacherbutalsoourfriend.Weallrespectandlovehim.,Hehassetaverygoodexampleforusalltofollow.,Ifeelproudtohavesuchafriend.,Myfatherissuchaperson:kind-heartedandhard-working.Ilovemyfather.,1.性别与婚姻（Sex&Marriage）Imamanoffortyandhavea9-year-olddaughter.Shegotmarriedin1980andnowshehasbeenmarriedformorethan20years.Im35,maleandunmarried.IgotmarriedfiveyearsagobutnowImsingle.,Bytheageof14,hehadsetupachemistrylabofhisown.,1他出生在2000年,现在10岁了.2他1992年出生,今年18岁,是一名大学生.3在14岁时候,他开始自己谋生.4在他50岁时,他感到自己老了.5到他14岁的时候,他已经建立了他自己的化学实验室.,Hewasbornin2000andistenyearsoldnow.,Bornin1992heisnowan18-year-oldstudent,studyinginauniversity.,Hebegantomakealivingattheageof14/atanearlyage.,Inhisfifties,hebegantofeelhisage.,2.年龄（Age）,Heisatallman,withblueeyesandblondhair.,1她是一个圆脸,大眼睛,皓齿长发的可爱的女孩.2他又瘦又高戴着一副深度近视镜.3他是一个很好看的男人,留着浓密的小胡子但是却没有头发.4他是一个高个子男人,有着蓝眼睛黄头发.,Sheisalovelygirl,witharoundface,bigeyes,whiteteethandlongwavinghair.,Heisthin,tallandwearingapairofthickglasses.,Heisagood-looking/funny-lookingman,withathickmoustachebutnohairleft.,3.外貌特征（Appearance）,(deep-seteyes,bigbrighteyes,longstraightnose,browncurlinghair,broadshoulders),4.身高（Height）Heis1.76meterstall.Heis176centimeterstall.Heis176centimetersinheight.Theboyisnottallenoughtoreachtheappleoverhead.Heisreallyatallman,about1.98metersinheight.Myheightis1.76metres.(不合英语习惯)Im1.76metershigh.（身高不宜用high）,5.健康状况（Health）1)由于被照顾的很好,孩子们看上去很健康.2)我身体不强壮,但是很健康.3)住了六周的院,现在她看上去很虚弱.,Welllookedafter,thechildrenlookhealthy.,Imnotsostrong,but(Im)ingoodhealth.,Havingbeeninhospitalforsixmonths,nowshelooksveryweak.,6.教育状况（Education）1我1984年入学,12年后毕业.21984年我进入北京大学,4年后毕业.3我们学很多课程,包括4我已经在天山小学上了2年多了,下学期就毕业了.51998年4月我获得了数学学士学位.,Istartedschoolin1984andleftschool12yearslater.,IwenttostudyinBeijingUniversityin1984and4yearslaterIgraduated(fromthatuniversity).,Welearnedmanycourses,including,IvebeenstudyinginTianshanPrimarySchool(No.1SeniorMiddle/HighSchool)formorethantwoyearsandwillgraduatenextsemester.,Igotmybachelors(masters,doctors)degreeinmathematicsinApril1998.,7.特长爱好（Specialty&Hobbies）1我很擅长口语,计算机是我的强项.2我在去年的英语演讲竞赛中获得了第一名.3他在网页设计大赛中获得了第一名.4我最喜欢的运动是游泳和打乒乓.5在我的业余时间里,我喜欢读书和旅游.,ImgoodatspokenEnglishandevenbetteratusingcomputers.,IwonthefirstprizeintheEnglishspeechcontestatschoollastyear.,Hegotthefirstplaceinthehomepagedesigningcontest.,Myfavoritesportisswimmingandplayingtable-tennis.,Inmysparetime,Ilikereadingandenjoyingtraveling.,8.详细特色（Somethingindetail）举例法（Givingexamples）Hewasstrictwitheverybodyandineverythinghedid.Oneday,wewerehavingclasseswhenHewasveryforgetful.Oncehecameacrossanoldfriendofhisinthestreetand.Hehadastrangewayofmakinghisclasseslivelyandinteresting.Istillremembermyfirstdayasachemistrystudent.,写作练习：你是李华,申请到一家外企工作.对方要求你用英语写一篇短文,介绍自己的基本情况.短文应该包括下表所列全部内容.姓名：李华出生年月：1977年2月出生地：辽宁大连学历：1984-1990年光明小学1990-1996年大连市第六中学所学主要课程：语文、数学、英语、物理、化学、电脑特长：英语、电脑、（去年在全校电脑竞赛中获第一名）业余爱好：游泳、滑冰、集邮、流行音乐,MynameisLiHua.IwasborninDalian,LiaoningprovinceinFebruary1977.Istartedschoolin1984whenIwasseven.IstudiedinGuangmingPrimarySchoolfrom1984to1990.AfterthatIwenttoNo.62MiddleSchoolofDalianandgraduatedthissummer.ThemainsubjectsIstudiedatschoolincludedChinese,English,physics,chemistryandcomputer.IlikecomputerandEnglishbestandIamverygoodatthem.Lastyear,Iwonfirstprizeintheschoolcomputercompetition.InmysparetimeIenjoylisteningtopopularmusicandcollectingstamps.Myfavoritesportsareswimminginsummerandskatinginwinter.,写作练习：刘华是我市去年的高考状元，被北京大学录取。假若你是她的好朋友，请你介绍一下她的情况。要点如下：1.有目标（考取北大）有信心；2.有周密计划，知道每天干什么；3.有良好的学习习惯，不拖拉，不开夜车；4.乐意助人，同学和老师都喜欢她；5.你从她身上学习了许多东西，对你有很大帮助。注意事项：1.要按要点进行写作，根据行文需要，内容可不分先后。2.不要逐条翻译，根据行文需要可适当增加细节。,LiuHua,agoodfriendofmine,isnowquitewellknownbecauseshetookthefirstplaceinthecollegeentranceexaminationandwasenrolledbyBeijingUniversitylastyear.Iamproudofherandenjoyhersuccess.Whenshestudiedinthemiddleschoolweoftenexchangedlearningexperience,soIknowclearlywhyshewasabletoachievesuchasuccess.F