高中短文改错解题技巧.ppt

ProofReading,短文改错,欢迎添加微信公众号：Emily英语（由高中英语教师创建，每天为你献上新鲜的英语歌曲、视频、听力、口语、美文、学习干货等，让你在不知不觉中提高英语水平另外，如有任何英语方面的疑问和困惑，欢迎在对话栏处留言）,LearningObjectives,Afterthisperiod,youllbeableto:knowthestepsofcorrectingacomposition.knowthecommontypesofmistakesappearedinproofreading.besensitivetothesekindsofmistakeswhilecorrectingacomposition.,Howtocorrectapassage,下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写上该加的词。删除把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。2、只允许修改10处，多者（丛第11处起）不计分,Therules,Ilikeplayingpiano.Icanreturntohomenow.Imajorataccounting.,the,in,Stepsofcorrectingacomposition:,1.gothrough.forageneralidea.,2.sentencebysentence.fordetails,3.check.forperfection,OurEnglishteacherbegintoteachuslastyear.ShehavebeenteachingEnglishformorethantwentyyear.Shelikeswe,andsheisverystrictinallofus.Althoughsheisabitoldandnotsobeautifully,butweconsiderherasourmother.Sheisreallygoodteacher.Welovedherverymuch.Weresurewellgetinwellwitheachother,began,has,years,us,with,beautiful,a,on,cooperation,love,1.通读全文，把握大意,2.细读全文，仔细斟酌,3.再读全文,复核审查,Themethodofcorrecting,改明显错误对照考点，排除法,Note:,例题错误点归纳,动词时态,主谓一致,名词,代词,介词,形、副,连词,冠词,动词,习惯用法,动词形，名词数，还要注意形和副；非谓语，细辨别，代词格，细领悟；介词短语常常考，习惯用法要记住；句子成分多分析，逻辑错误须关注，冠词连词常光顾。,短文改错口诀：,一、动词形,主要包括两类错误：动词的时态和语态错误，以及主、谓不一致的错误。,2007四川卷：Whenhegetshome,hesawtheanimalwaitingatthedoor,stillwearinghisjacketwiththewalletinthepocket.2007天津卷：InGradeEightItookphysics.InonetestIgetonly36percentoftheanswerscorrect.,got,got,2006安徽卷：Anyonecanborrowbooksifheorshewish.2006安徽卷：Youcansitatthedeskandreadthedailynewspapers,magazinesandtheotherbooks,butyouarenotpermittotakethemout.,wishes,permitted,Notonlythestudentsbutalsotheteacherlikethefilm.,likes,二、名词数,指名词单、复数形式的用法错误。,2007陕西卷：Personally,Ifoundmostlessonratheruninteresting.2008浙江卷：Anearbycompanywaslookingafterstudentswithgoodhandwritingtowriteaddressesonevenlope.Thepaywere10centsperenvelope.,lessons,evenlopes,三、还要注意形和副,注意形容词和副词在句子中的作用和具体用法。这也是高考短文改错题的常考点。,2007浙江卷：Igottothefinishinglinefirst.Iwontherace.Ifeltveryproudlyofmyself.2006福建卷：Wecanhearbirdssinginghappyallaround.,proud,happily,四、非谓语，细辨别,这是考查最多的错误形式之一。主要有现在分词、过去分词，动名词和不定式错误。,2007浙江卷：Icouldnottorunveryfastandfellbehind.2007宁夏卷：LiMengcameseemeeveryday.,to,2008辽宁卷：Weallenjoyedthispreciousdaygreatly,rememberthetimewespenttogetherandthepeoplewewerefamiliarwith.,remembering,五、代词格，细领悟,2008全国II：Ishouldbeabletotellvisitorsaboutourhistoryandcultureandshowthemtheirgreatachievement.2007陕西：JustatthattimeIwokeupandfoundmestillinbed!,our,myself,主要考查习惯搭配方面的基础知识，其错误表现形式主要有三种：多词、少词和搭配错误。,inSundayafternooncatchasightoflosemyheartinhurry,a,on,六、介词短语常常考，习惯用法要记住,七、句子成分多分析,不同的句子成分要用不同的词类；不同的语境要选择不同的词语。只有对句子结构和成分作细致的分析，才能找出用词不当的错误。,2008年安徽卷:Shelookedatmeandstartedtolaugh.“Howareyoulaughing?”Iasked.2007天津卷：Iwasluckyenoughtohaveateacherwhichdidnttakemybadgradesasajudgementofmyabilities,but,who/that,Why,八、逻辑错误须关注,与句子的上、下文不一致，甚至相矛盾，属于逻辑性错误，如称谓上的张冠李戴。,NMET2005:Somestudentsmayalsosaveupforourcollegeorfutureuse.,their,Forexample,whenheboughtachocolatecake,heputtheminasecretplacethatIcouldntfind.,it,常考的错误形式有：连词but,however,and,or,because,so,when,before,after的用法错误，以及冠词的用法错误等。,2007全国II：ImeanttowritelongletterandtellyouallthethingsImdoingattheschool2007四川卷：AnAustralianfarmerfoundthekangaroocaughtinthefencearoundhisfarms.,a,a,九、冠词、连词常光顾,2007浙江卷：TodayIwashavingaPElessonwhileIfelldownandhurtmyfoot.2006辽宁卷：Shealwaysmadesurethatourhomeworkwasfinishedontime,butshemarkedstrictlyonouractualperformance.,when,and,改错命题统计,简便记法：一增一减八修改,1.通读全文，把握大意,2.细读全文，仔细斟酌,3.再读全文,复核审查,Themethodofcorrecting,改明显错误对照考点，排除法是否满足“一增一减八修改”，题量分布是否符合命题规律,Note:,Consolidation,AtChristmasEve,JimwentwithhisfathertochooseaChristmastree.Theychooseabigone.Itwasalmostastallerastheroom!Theyputtheminthecornerofthesitting.room.KatewascovereditwithalotofChristmaslight.Thesittingroomlookedreallybeautifullyatthemoment.Therewasafireburninginthefireplace,buttheChristmastreelightswereshinningbrightly.Jimandherparentssinginganddancinghappily.,AtChristmasEve,JimwentwithhisfathertochooseaChristmastree.Theychooseabigone.Itwasalmostastallerastheroom!Theyputtheminthecornerofthesitting,_,On,_,chose,_,tall,_,it,动词形,介词短语常常考，习惯用法要记住,还要注意形和副,逻辑错误需关注,consolidation,room.KatewascovereditwithalotofChristmaslight.Thesittingroomlookedreallybeautifullyatthemoment.Therewasafireburninginthefireplace,buttheChristmastreelightswereshinningbrightly.Jimandherparentssinginganddancinghappily.,_,lights,_,beautiful,_,and,his,were,动词形,还要注意形和副,动词形,名词数,冠词连词须关注,consolidation,逻辑错误须关注,_,短文改错口诀：,动词形，名词数，还要注意形和副；非谓语，细辨别，代词格，细领悟；介词短语常常考，习惯用法要记住；句子成分多分析，逻辑错误须关注，冠词连词常光顾。,短文改错应注意的问题,四不改:标点符号不改。大小写不改。词序错误不改。单词拼写不改。,Dontforget!,practice,2009.辽宁卷短文改错WhenIwasinhighschool,mostofmyfriendhadbicycles.IhopedIcouldalsohaveit.OnedayIsawasecond-handbicycle,thatwasonlyonehundredyuan.Iaskedmyfatherwiththemoney.Buthesaidhecouldonlygivemehalfof