英语记叙文的写作(匡世怡).ppt

英语记叙文的写作,记叙文,记叙文用于记叙过去发生的事件或经历，以写人、叙事为主要内容。它可以包括历史，游记，报道，回忆，故事，琐事等。这样的文章也要有中心。一般从第一或第三人称角度出发，表达自己或他人的经历或感受，使读者对事情十分明了以获得强烈感受。记叙文通常以一般过去时为主，根据上下文用各种时态。,记叙文写作的注意事项,一、交代背景文章的开头应概括地介绍事件发生的时间、地点、人物以及事件等二、详略得当过多不必要的细节会冲淡文章的主题。因此，在细节的选择上应注意选择与主题密切相关的内容，从而点明文章中心。三、条理清晰记叙文一般按照时间顺序或空间顺序来描述，要求层次清晰、条理清楚。,记叙文常用句式首段：交代主题,ItwasthemostexcitingmomentthatIhaveeverexperienced.Allthroughmyseniorhighschool,IcouldntforgetIntheyearsthatfollowedtheeventfrequentlyfloatedinmymind/oftenrecurredtomymemory/kepthauntingme.Lastweek,whenIwasonmywayhomesomethingterriblehappened.Iquicklyturnedaround,justintimetoseethewholeprocessoftheaccident.,记叙文常用句式首段：交代主题,补充交代时间Theeventtookplace/happened/occurredintheearlymorning.Thewholestoryhappenedthe(first)dayIenteredtheseniorhighschool.,记叙文常用句式主体部分：,（一）作者心理活动的描写Icouldhardlybelievemyeyes.IfeltasifIwereontopoftheworld.Iwascompletelyshocked.Iwasburstingwithjoy.,记叙文常用句式主体部分：,（二）人物外貌和性格的描写Heisofmediumheight.Heisgood-looking/ordinary-looking.Sheisplump/slim,withfairskinandcurlyhair.Helookshandsomeinasportssuit/bluejeans.Heisofmild/badtemper.Atfirstglance,youwouldsayheistheperfectimageofanobedientboy,butdeepdown,heisnotthatwayatall.,记叙文常用句式主体部分：,（三）物体的描写Itcomesinavarietyofcolors/shapes.Itconsistsofseveralintegratedparts.Itisshapedlikeacircle.Itisflatinshapeandsmallinsize.Attachedtothebottomis,记叙文常用句式主体部分：,（四）景物的描写Thereisawonderfularrayofflowersalongthestreet.Theairisfilledwiththescentofroses.Thetreesstoodthereonguardforgenerations,withbranchesreachingoutlikeacanopyovertheroad.Ifeelmiserablyinsignificantapproachingthemountain.Evenjudgingbymodernstandards,thetownwaslargeinpopulation.Thecampushasauniqueatmosphere.,例文TheDayMyClassmateFellIll(orGotInjured).,实战演练2003年9月英语四级作文及其范文PartWriting(30minutes)Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicTheDayMyClassmateFellIll(orGotInjured).Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsaccordingtotheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:简单叙述一下这位同学生病（或受伤）的情况2.同学、老师和我是如何帮助他/她的3.人与人之间的这种相互关爱给我的感受是,词汇拓展,扭伤twistonesankle/giveawrenchtoonesankle/sprainonesankleonessprainedankle喉咙疼痛haveasorethroat痛苦的表情anexpressionofpainHerfacewascontortedwithpain.她痛得脸都变了样。量体温takeonestemperature轮流照顾某人takecareofsb.byturns/taketurnsatcaringsb.发高烧have/runahighfever健康状况health/condition请假askfora(sick)leave/askforafour-dayleave/beonsickleave,例文TheDayMyClassmateFellIll(orGotInjured).,写作模板：架构阶段第一段：开篇句：about_oclockoneeveningin_,_.扩展句：_.(展开描述一下事件)第二段：主题句：withouthesitation,_.itwasntlongbefore_.扩展句：1、one_.2、another_.3、ourteacher_.第三段：结尾句：is_?whocantell?but_.扩展句：1、when_,peopleshowed_spiritregardlessof_.2、thiskindofcarebetweenpersonsistheverykindgiving,unselfishandpricelessdevotionorsacrifice.3、anditisjustbecauseofthiscarethatwecanhavewarmfamilies,ahappylifeandabeautifulworld.,例文TheDayMyClassmateFellIll(orGotInjured).,写作模板：填充阶段第一段：开篇句：aboutnineoclockoneeveninginmay,myroommatelimingwaslyinginbed,tremblingwithcoldandhavingacough.扩展句：hisheadwasachingsointenselythathekeptgroaning.hisforeheadfeltveryhot.wetookhistemperature.itwas38.5.第二段：主题句：withouthesitation,idialed120.itwasntlongbeforeanambulancearrived.扩展句：1、oneroommatebroughtablanketforhim.2、anothersupportedhimintheambulance.3、ourteacherinsistedongivinghimsomemoney.第三段：结尾句：isheasuspedtedsarspatient?whocantell?butwedidtretreat.扩展句：1、whenthesavagesarswasspreading,peopleshowedfearlessspiritregardlessofdangerstotheirownhealth.2、thiskindofcarebetweenpersonsistheverykindgiving,unselfishandpricelessdevotionorsacrifice.3、anditisjustbecauseofthiscarethatwecanhavewarmfamilies,ahappylifeandabeautifulworld.,例文TheDayMyClassmateFellIll(orGotInjured).,范文AboutnineOclockoneeveninginMay,myroommateLiMingwaslyinginbed,tremblingwithcoldandhavingacough.Hisheadwasachingsointenselythathekeptgroaning.Hisforeheadfeltveryhot.Wetookhistemperature.Itwas38.5.Withouthesitation，Idialed“120”.Itwasntlongbeforeanambulancearrived.Oneroommatebroughtablanketforhim.Anothersupportedhimintheambulance.Ourteacherinsistedongivinghimsomemoney.IsheasuspectedSARSpatient？Whocantell？Butwedidntretreat.WhenthesavageSARSwasspreading,peopleshowedfearlessspiritregardlessofdangerstotheirownhealth.Thiskindofcarebetweenpersonsistheverykindgiving,unselfishandpricelessdevotionorsacrifice.Anditisjustbecauseofthiscarethatwecanhavewarmfamilies,ahappylifeandabeautifulworld.,学生作品中的常见问题,在叙事时，一般用过去时，但在表述个人观点时可以用现在时。在叙述部分缺少所对叙述事件的结果。Lastweek,myclassmatehadabadcold.不要用或A,B,C来表示人，可以取一个恰当的名字，或是用JohnDoe或JaneDoe来表示“某人”。,记叙文练习题目,）Directions:NowyouareallowedthirtyminutestowriteapassageonthetitleMyBestFriend.Youshouldwriteatleast100-120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:1.简要介绍你最好的朋友。2.你们之间的故