c7高中英语作文写作--如何写建议信.ppt

书面表达专题,-Howtowritealetterforadvice,如何算是一篇好文章？覆盖了所有的要点应用了较多的语法结构和词汇有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑，行文连贯，条理清楚。,要点全,词汇,句型（高级）和语法多样化（较复杂）语言地道,连接词,写作要点：1.建议信：作者就有关问题进行分析并针对这些问题提出自己的看法和建议。2.对象：1）写给个人，就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点；2）写给某个组织和机构，就改进其服务提出建议或忠告。,3.基本框架：开头（beginning）-开门见山，向对方陈述自己的观点.(stateyouridea)主体(body)-对所提出的问题进行分析并说明理由，接着提出自己的建议(reasonsandevidence)结尾(ending)-呼应开头，重申观点(restateyouropinion.),4.注意事项：1）建议信要写出写信的原因，建议的内容，提出建议的理由2）建议的角度要多样化，避免重复。3）符合英文信件的基本格式；4）基本时态多用一般现在时和一般将来时。,常用套语,A建议信开头常用句式(照应材料,表明写作意图)1.AfterIreadyourletterinthenewspaper,Iamsorrytoknowthat2.Iamverygladtohearthatyouwantto3.IknowyouhavetroubleinafterreadingyourletterIamwritingtoyouforthepurposeofIamwritingtosharesomeadvice/opinionswithyou.,B.表达建议（body）1.Ithinkitwouldbemorebeneficialifyoucould2.Iwouldliketosuggest/recommendthat3.isagood/greatidea.4.Inmyopinion,itwouldbewisetotakethefollowingaction.5.Whenitcomestosuchasituation,Iwouldliketosuggestthatyoushould,C.建议信结尾常用句式,1.Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposals/suggestions/recommendationspractical/useful/helpful.2.Iwouldappreciateitverymuchifyoucouldconsidermysuggestions.3.Intheend,Iwillbegladifyoufindmysuggestionsuseful.,假如你叫孙军，是实验高中的学生，要给市长写一封信，反映学校门前交通拥挤现象，包括以下要点：,参考词汇:穿行threadonesway天桥overpass,第一步：审题养成重视审题的习惯。虽然基础写作题是半封闭性的，但审题仍然十分重要。现以样题为例，谈谈如何审题：,第一人称,一封信,建议政府采取措施舒缓交通拥挤的状况,说理逻辑性,一般现在时,三个步骤,Step1Listthekeypoints,Step2Makesentences,Step3.Formapassageandpolish,第二步：搜索相关词组或句型,学校和一所小学毗邻，对着大街，高峰期交通繁忙；加之孩子小,家长接送。交通更拥挤；学生过街在车辆中穿行危险。,学校与一所小学毗邻,对着大街,standnexttoprimaryface/befacedwiththemainstreet,Theresaprimaryschoolnearourschool,andbothschoolsfacethemainstreet.,Ourschoolstandsnexttoaprimaryschool,anditisfacedwith/facingthemainstreet.,推荐句型：Therebe+并列句,Standingnexttoaprimaryschool,ourschoolisfacedwith/facesthemainstreet.,stands/lies/isourschool,facedwith/facingamainstreet.,Nexttoaprimaryschool,润色小建议,可将standnextto替换为高级词汇/短语,belocatednextto(near/beside/by),在对面beoppositeto,Thetrafficisbusyduringtherushhours.,高峰期交通繁忙.,traffic.duringtherushhours,Duringtherushhours,therearesomanycarsandbusesgoingontheroadthat,Duringtherushhours,thereisalotoftraffic.,so.that,with结构,Withsomanycarsandbusesgoingontheroad,润色小建议,“高峰期”可意译:,atpeaktime，,“交通繁忙”可译为:,trafficjamcongestion交通堵塞,加之孩子小,家长接送,交通更拥挤,sendto,fetch.,which,非谓语结构.,Manyparentssendtheiryoungchildrentoschoolandfetchthemhome,whichmakesthetrafficheavier.,Manyparentssendtheiryoungchildrentoschoolandfetchthemhome,makingthetrafficheavier.,加之孩子小，家长接送，交通更拥挤Whatsmore,pickup.make.Tomakethingsworse/Whatsworse,manyparentscomingtopickuptheirchildrenmakethestreetmorecrowded.Inaddition/Additionally,manyparentssendtheiryoungchildrentoschoolandfetchthemhome,whichmakesthetrafficheavier.Whatsmore,parentsoftenattendtheirkidstoschool,resultinginmoreserioustrafficjams.Whatmakesthingsworseisthatchildrenhavetobepickedupbytheirparentsowingtotheiryoungage.,学生过街在车辆中穿行危险,threadonesway，whendoing,Itisdangerousforthestudentstothreadtheirwayamongbusesandcarswhencrossingtheroad.,固定句型Itis+adj.fortodo.,Studentsareriskingtheirlivestothreadtheirwayamongcars.,润色小建议,2.Someareexposedtodangerwhencrossingtheocean/seaofcars.,灵活运用其它的短语进行意译：,适当增加形容词和副词：,itisextremelydangerous，itisofgreat/tremendousdanger,suggest/suggestion,takesteps/measures/actiontodosuchas,政府应采取措施,如修天桥等。,Mysuggestionisthatthegovernmentshould,表语从句,固定句型Itishightimethat(虚拟语气),Itishightimethatrelevantauthoritiestooksomemeasureslikebuilding,Isuggestthatthegovernmentshouldtakestepssuchasbuildinganoverpass.,简单句,第三步.连句成文,但要注意：篇章的连贯性,Nexttoaprimaryschoolstandsourschool,facingamainstreet._,itscrammedwithcarsduringtherushhour._childrenhavetobepickedupbytheirparentsowingtotheiryoungage._,itsofgreatdangerforthestudentstogothroughthetraffic._,itishightimethatrelevantauthoritiestooksomemeasureslikebuildinganoverpass.,A.Asaconsequence,B.Accordingtothephenomenonstatedabove,C.Whenitcomestotrafficjams,D.Whatmakesthingsworseisthat,A.,C.,D.,B.,反面范例,反面范例,反面范例,反面范例,不推荐字体,优点：考生能灵活地处理各个信息点，大量运用非谓语，介词短语，从句，连词等来提亮句子，使得文章更彰显个性和语言功底。,优秀作文范例1,优秀作文范例2,优点：考生的书面整洁，字体美观，运用therebe句型，介词短语，从句，非谓语，套用句式等来提亮句子，使得文章更彰显内涵和语言功底。,优秀作文范例3,优点：考生运用倒装句，sothat句式，精彩的表达以及虚拟语气等来提亮句子，使得文章更彰显内涵和语言功底。,优秀作文范例4,优点：该考生最大的特色是运用了大量的高级词汇等来提亮句子，使得文章更彰显深厚的语言底蕴。,优秀作文范例5,优秀作文范例6,Congestionn.阻塞,拥挤,充血,Nexttoaprimaryschoolstandsourschool,facingamainstreet.Whenitcomestotrafficjams，itscrammedwithcarsduringtherushhour.Whatmakesthingsworseisthatchildrenhavetobepickedupbytheirparentsowingtotheiryoungage.Asaconsequence,itsofgreatdangerforthestudentstogothroughthetraffic.Accordingtothephenomenonstatedabove,itishightimethatrelevantauthoritiestooksomemeasureslikebuildinganoverpass.,如何给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象,整体三部分,Heading点题；一两个句子；概括性；暗示性2.Body中心记述部分；层次分明3.Ending小结；呼应主题,适当运用模板,Dear_(对象)，Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerning_(问题).Firstandforthemost,_(建议一).Inaddition,_(建议二).Whatsmore_(建议三).Ihopeyoullfindtheseproposalsuseful.Yourssincerely,LiMing,Dear_,Youhaveaskedmeformyadvicewithregardto_,andIlltrytomakesomeconductivesuggestionshere.Inmyhumbleopinion(以我拙见),youwouldbewisetotakethefollowingactions:_.IhopeyoullfindtheseproposalsusefulandIwouldbereadytodiscussthismatterwithyoutofurtherdetails.Goodluckwithyou/your_(祝愿).YourssincerelyLiMing,DearBob,Imgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowto(引出主题).Hereareafewsuggestions.First,itisimportantto.Then,italsohelpsto.Besides,itshouldbeagoodideato.Youcanalso.(此三句不同的句式提出建议)Asto,Isuggest(有时根据需要具体到某一反面).Inaddition,(其他建议).Imsure(预测可能的结果，给对方以行动的信心和决心).Imlookingforwardto(表达愿望).Sincerelyyours,LiHua,假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。注意：可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；开头语已给出。DearPeter,ImgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowtolearnChinesewell._Bestwishes,LiHua,参加中文学习班；看电视，报纸，杂志；学唱中文歌曲；交中国朋友；,DearPeter,ImgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowtolearnChinesewell.Hereareafewsuggestions.First,itisimportanttotakeaChinesecourse,asyoullbeabletolearnfromtheteachersandpracticewithyourfellowstudents.Then,italsohelpstowatchTVandreadbooks,newspapers,andmagazinesinChinesewheneverpossible.Besides,itshouldbeagoodideatolearnandsingChinesesongs,becausebydoingsoyoulllearnandrememberChinesewordsmoreeasily.Inaddition,YoucanalsomakemoreChinesefriends.TheywilltellyoualotaboutChinaandhelpyoulearnChinese.TrywritingtomeinChinesenexttime.Bestwishes,LiHua,为了迎接即将到来的期末考试，你校要取消所有的体育课。请你以学生王丽的身份给校长写一封信，建议不要取消体育课。注意：1.词数：120左右；2.文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。DearHeadmaster,Imwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerningourschoolsdecisionthatallphysicaleducationshouldbecancelled.,常见连接词,表时间关系：when/after/before/until/notuntilassoonas/later/afterwards/soon/lately/recently/since/eventually/fromthenon/inthemeanwhile(meantime)/then/finally/atlast/allofasudden/afterawhile/sincethen/immediately/instantly/everytime/eachtime/thefirsttime,常见连接词,罗列观点：Firstly/Firstofall/Tobeginwith/Aboveall/Inthefirstplace/OnonehandForonething,Secondly/Besides/Apartfrom/Whatsmore,/Inaddition，/Furthermore,/Moreover，/Worsestill,/Tomakemattersworse,/aswell/Ontheotherhand/Foranotherthing,/Next,Finally/Inthee