cet4写作第四讲道理论证.ppt

道理论证型作文,四级作文(四),2003年1月考试作文真题及范文Directions:Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowriteacompositiononthetopicItPaystoBeHonest.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsaccordingtotheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese.1.当前社会上存在许多不诚实的现象2.诚实利人利已,做人应该诚实ItPaystoBeHonestHonestyisoneofthevirtuesinChina,andmostofthechildrenaretaughttobehonestsincechildhood.Butasamatteroffact,thingsarequitedifferentincurrentsociety.Forexample,somestudentscheatinexams;falseadvertisementsmisleadpeopletospendmoneyonfakecommodities;employeesmakeuseoffalseachievementsforpromotion,etc.Thosepeople,Thosepeoplemaybenefitfromdishonestyforawhile,buttheywillbegivenagoodlessonsoonerandlater.Iinsistthathonestyistheoneofthebasicvirtuesforourhumanbeingsandwemustkeephonest.Actually,wewillbenefitalotfrombeinghonest.Forinstance,beinghonestwithotherscanwinyoumanyfriends;anhonestbusinessmancanhavetheconsumerstrust,whichisessentialtohisfinalsuccess;anemployeewiththequalityofhonestycanbeentrustedwithimportanttasksandsoon.Weareinterdependentintodaysworld,andhonestyshouldbethebasicruleforpeoplessocialorcommercialintercourses,whichwillbringgreatbenefitstobothpartners.Inaword,honestyisthebestpolicyinourdailylives.Ifeveryonecouldbehonesttoothers,thesocietywillbeabeautifulone.,ItPaystoBeHonest,(1)Nowadays,dishonestyisacommonphenomenoninoursociety.(2)Forexample,poorstudentstendtocheatonexams,andadvertisersmakemisleadingadvertisementtocheatcustomers.(3)However,mostpeopleholdthathonestyisthebestpolicy,anditpaystobehonest.(4)Thereasonsareasfollows:(5)Firstly,toindividuals,beinghonestcanaffordusrealrespectfromothersandearnyoumorefriends.(6)Secondly,honestyishelpfultomaintainanormalorderofsocietyandmarket.(7)Forexample,ifeveryonetreatedeachotherfairlyandhonestly,wewouldntbeafraidoffakecommoditiesandcheatingat,all.(8)Whatsmore,honestyalsocontributetoourfriendshipwithothercountriesandourstatusandimageintheworld.(9)AsfarasImconcerned,honestybenefitsusineveryrespectinthelongrun.(10)Foronething,weshouldformahabitofhonestyfromtheverybeginning.(11)Foranother,everyonehasadutytofightagainstdishonestyinordertobuildabeautifulandpeacefulworld.(12)Inaword,trytobehonestforthesakeofourselves,oursociety,ourcountryandeventhewholeworld.,点评:开头段:以Nowadays开始概括现状:不诚实现象非常普遍,接着以Forexample给出具体的实例,然后以However转变话题,引出本文主题:诚实利己利人.最后一句Thereasonsareasfollows:承上启下,点明下文内容-原因.中间段:以Firstly,Secondly,Forexample,Whatsmore列出三个原因并加以举例,说明诚实对个人,对社会,对国家都有害无利.结尾段:以AsfarasImconcerned表明自己的观点态度:从长远观点来看,诚实有百利而无一害,接着以Foronething,Foranother进行进一步的补充说明,最后以Inaword收尾提出倡议.以此重申诚实的重要性为了自己,社会,国家乃至世界,请保持诚信.,TheImportanceofConfidence,Itiswidelyrecognizedthatconfidenceplaysanimportantpartinpeopleslifeandactivities.Forexample,ifyoushowenoughconfidenceinajobinterview,youarelikelytodowellandgetthejobappliedfor.Or,ifyoutakeanimportantexaminationwithconfidence,youwillprobablypassitandthusseizeagoodopportunity.Whenyouplayaroleinaplay,theconfidenceshowninyourperformancecanhelpyougetapplausefromtheaudience.However,noteveryonehasenoughconfidenceinhimself.Therearemanyreasonsforlackofconfidence,butingeneral,theycomedowntotwomajorones.First,somepeopletendtoimproperly,First,somepeopletendtoimproperlybelittlethemselves.Withoutacorrectestimateofthemselves,theyoftenhesitatetogoforwardinthefaceofdifficulties.Second,somepeopleoverestimatedifficulties.Forthem,difficultiesarealwayslikehighmountainswhichtheycannevergetover.Facingdifficultproblemsorhardtasks,weshouldhavefaithinourselves.Theworldisfullofhardships,andwecannotchangethisreality.Theonlythingwecandoistoimproveourselves.Itispossibletobuildupconfidenceinourselvesifwetaketherightattitudetoourabilities.Alwaysrememberthatconfidenceisthepromiseforovercominganydifficultiesintheworld.,模板一：(1)Nowadays，-.(2)Forexample，-.(3)However，-.(4)Thereasonsareasfollows:(5)Firstly,-.(6)Secondly,-.(7)Forexample,-.(8)Whatsmore,-(9)AsfarasImconcerned,-(10)Foronething,-.(11)Foranother,-.(12)Inaword,-填充内容(1)概括现状,指出问题(2)举例说明,(3)转变话题,引出主题(5)原因一(6)原因二(7)例证”(8)原因三(9)自己的看法(10)具体阐述一(11)阐述二(12)总结归纳,模板二：(1)Itistruethat-.(2)Forexample,-(3)But-.(4)Therearethreereasons.(5)Tobeginwith,-(6)Inaddition,-(7)Takeforexample,-(8)Whatsmore,-.(9)Formypart,-.(10)Ontheonehand,-.(11)Ontheotherhand,-.(11)Therefore,-填充内容(1)概括现状,指出问题(2)举例说明,(3)转变话题,引出主题(5)原因一(6)原因二(7)例证”(8)原因三(9)自己的看法(10)具体阐述一(11)阐述二(12)总结归纳,模板三：（1）Peoplebelivevein-owingtothemoralitteaches:-(2)Whatsmore,-.(3)Take-forexample,-.(4)Asaresult,-.(5)Whatsworse,-(6)Anothercaseinpointis-.(7)-,butfinally-.(8)Theaboveexampleshowsthat-.(9)Therefore,-.(10)Foronething,-(11)Foranother,-(12)Inaword,-填充内容(1)填入题目中蕴涵的观点或谚