英语写作常见语法错误.ppt

2019/11/23,英语写作常见语法错误,1,英语写作常见语法错误-1,常见语法错误举例：NowisgoldentimeforustoattainafaircommandofEnglish.(词性使用不当。now是副词，不能作主语。可改为：Nowitisthegoldentimeforus)2.Myroommateissotroublesome,Icanhardlyputwithhimanymore.,2019/11/23,英语写作常见语法错误,2,英语写作常见语法错误-2,(标点符号错误。两个句子之间缺少连词。可改为：MyroommateissotroublesomethatIcanhardly)Atypicalfamilynowadaysisconsistedofthreetofourmembers.(语态错误。consistof一定要使用主动语态。可改为：Atypicalfamilynowadaysconsistsofthreetofourmembers.),2019/11/23,英语写作常见语法错误,3,英语写作常见语法错误-3,4.Theabove-mentioneddisadvantageswhicharebroughtaboutbyenvironmentalpollutionisverydetrimentalbutoftenmisspeoplesattention.(句子的主语是advantages，要用复数动词。可改为：Theabove-mentionedadvantageswhicharepollutionareverydetrimental),2019/11/23,英语写作常见语法错误,4,英语写作常见语法错误-4,Ifyoutryyourbesttogetmoreaerobicexerciseandpracticeitwheneverandwhereverpossible,wecanmaintaingoodphysicalcondition.(指代不清。you与we指代不一致。可改为：Ifyoutrywhereverpossible,youcanmaintain),2019/11/23,英语写作常见语法错误,5,英语写作常见语法错误-5,6.Inmyopinion,Ithinktheownerisjustifiedtodoso.(inmyopinion与Ithink重复累赘。可改为：Ithinktheowneris或：Inmyopinion,theowneris)Ifadopted,wehopethelawwillresolvetheproblem.,2019/11/23,英语写作常见语法错误,6,英语写作常见语法错误-6,(ifadopted的逻辑主语是thelaw，与句子的主语we不一致，为悬垂分词。可改为：Ifthelawisadopted,wehope或：Ifadopted,thelawwillresolvetheproblem.)以上错误如果稍加小心，尚可避免。但下文中的错误则需要考生格外注意。,2019/11/23,英语写作常见语法错误,7,英语写作常见语法错误-7,Inmodernsociety,computersarebecomingmoreandmorepopular.Theyarewidelyusedfordifferentuses.Manypeopleusethemtotypeletters,somepeoplestillwriteletterswithapen.Iprefertotypeletteronthecomputer.Becauseitisfast,correct,andclean.,2019/11/23,英语写作常见语法错误,8,英语写作常见语法错误-8,First,fast.Youcantype90to100wordsinoneminute.Thepersonwhoisgoodatitcanevenmore.Andnowadays,alotofpeopleareworkinghardtoobtainthecertificateofcomputertyping.Manyofthemgetcertificates,however,somedonot.,2019/11/23,英语写作常见语法错误,9,英语写作常见语法错误-9,Inmodernsociety,computersarebecomingmoreandmorepopular.Theyarewidelyusedfordifferentuses.(1)Manypeopleusethemtotypeletters,somepeoplestillwriteletterswithapen.Iprefertotypeletteronthecomputer.(2)Becauseitisfast,correct,andclean.在上一段落中，划线部分属于句子结构方面的错误。（1）两句话之间不能用逗号隔开，应加上并列连词and。（2）sentencefragment。这种断句只能使用在英语口语、某些文学作品或非正式的写作中。,2019/11/23,英语写作常见语法错误,10,英语写作常见语法错误-10,(3)First,fast.Youcantype90to100wordsinoneminute.(4)Thepersonwhoisgoodatitcanevenmore.Andnowadays,alotofpeopleareworkinghardtoobtainthecertificateofcomputertyping.(5)Manyofthemgetcertificates,however,somedonot.（3）这根本不是一句话，至少应改为：Firstly,itisfast.（4）can是情态动词，后面缺少实义动词，因此意思表达不清。可改为：Thepersonwhoisgoodatitcantypeevenmorewords.（5）however是副词，不能连接两个句子。可改为：Manyofthemgetcertificates.However,somedonot.或：Manyofthemgetcertificates;however,somedonot.,2019/11/23,英语写作常见语法错误,11,句子改错（1）,Educationisnolongerfreeasitusetobe.Educationisnolongerfreeasitusedtobe.Forexample,thecomputerthatisusedeverywheretodaytoincreaseefficiencyandsavethecostoflabor.Forexample,thecomputerthatisusedeverywheretodayincreasesefficiencyandsavesthecostoflabor.Inourcountrywevoteforourgovernment,(?)thenextfederalelectioniscomingagain.Inourcountrywevoteforourgovernmentwhenthenextfederalelectioniscomingagain.,2019/11/23,英语写作常见语法错误,12,句子改错（2）,Aftertheyexpressthereopinion,hedicidedtoreducestheoperationalexpenses.Aftertheyexpressedtheiropinion,hedecidedtoreducetheoperationalexpenses.Manypeoplearedishonestwithgovernment.Althoughtheyaremarried,buttheydontwanttodeclaretheyaremarried.Manypeoplearedishonestwithgovernment.Althoughtheyaremarried,theydontwanttodeclaretheyaremarried.,2019/11/23,英语写作常见语法错误,13,句子改错（3）,TheclosingdownofhospitalscausesinconvenienceforthegrowingnumberofpatientsinOntario.TheclosingdownofhospitalscausesinconveniencefortheincreasingpatientsinOntario.“Howdoyouthinkofmyboyfriend,Dad?”thegirlask.“Howdoyouthinkofmyboyfriend,Dad?”thegirlasked.Winterstormsthatbringice,sleet,andsnowtheycancausetrafficproblem.,2019/11/23,英语写作常见语法错误,14,句子改错（4）,Winterstormsthatbringice,sleet,andsnowcancausetrafficproblem.（or:Winterstormsbringice,sleet,andsnowwhichcancausetrafficproblem.)Thecakewassupposetobetasty.Thecakewassupposedtobetasty.Theriverwillfloodagainnextyearunlesswewillbuildabetterdam.Theriverwillfloodagainnextyearunlesswebuildabetterdam.,2019/11/23,英语写作常见语法错误,15,句子改错（5）,Therunnerlookerasifhewaswinded.Therunnerlookedasifhewaswinded.IfIwouldhavetrainedfortherace,Imighthavewon.IfIhadbeentrainedfortherace,Iwouldhavewon.TheinstructordividedtheworkbetweenSamandI.TheinstructordividedtheworkbetweenSamandme.,2019/11/23,英语写作常见语法错误,16,句子改错（6）,HermothertoldhershewasgoingtovisitBeijing.Hermothertoldher,“IamgoingtovisitBeijing.”Becauseourcarwasoverheating,itcameasnosurprisethatitbrokedownjustasitbegantorain.Becauseourcarwasoverheating,itcamewithnosurprisethatitbrokedownjustasitbegantorun.,2019/11/23,英语写作常见语法错误,17,句子改错（7）,Themoon,alongwithVenus,arevisibleinthenightsky.Themoon,alongwithVenus,isvisibleinthenightsky.Threehundreddollarsarewhatwemustpay.Threehundreddollarsiswhatwemustpay.Thecandidatefeltunusualenergetic.Thecandidatefeltunusuallyenergetic.,2019/11/23,英语写作常见语法