公开课：应用文写作之建议信.ppt

课程名称：应用文写作之建议信,复习内容：建议信基础写作,书面表达（满分25分)假设你是李华，你的朋友Mike与父母一道来到中国。他发现自己所学的汉语根本就不够用。因此，他给你发来一封电子邮件，向你请教如何提高汉语听说能力。请给他回一封邮件。要点如下：1.邮件已收到，理解他所遇到的问题。2.提出如下建议：在课内课外要多说汉语，多注意电视节目主持人的发音等3祝愿他学习取得进步。注意：1.词数100左右2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文流畅。,一、欣赏与学习（见巩固练习第一题）,DearMike,IamgladtoreceiveyouremailaskingformyadviceonhowtoimproveyourChineseandIunderstandyourproblem.HereismyadviceforimprovingyourChinese.Firstly,itisimportanttospeakChinesemore,bothinandoutofclass.TryyourbesttocommunicatewithyourclassmatesinChinese.Ithinkthemoreyouspeak,thebetteryourChinesewillbe.Secondly,itshouldbeagreatideatopaymoreattentiontoTVhostswhenyouarewatchingTVathome.Imsureyouwillmakegreatprogresssoonerorlater.Inconclusion,Isincerelyhopemysuggestionwillhelpyou.Wishyoueverysuccesswithyourstudies.YoursFaithfully,LiHua,ALetterofAdvice,Raisetheproblem,Advice,Wishes,Firstperson,Presenttense,Letter,DearMike,IamgladtoreceiveyouremailaskingformyadviceonhowtoimproveyourChineseandIunderstandyourproblem.HereismyadviceforimprovingyourChinese.Firstly,itisimportanttospeakChinesemore,bothinandoutofclass.TryyourbesttocommunicatewithyourclassmatesinChinese.Ithinkthemoreyouspeak,thebetteryourChinesewillbe.Secondly,itshouldbeagreatideatopaymoreattentiontoTVhostswhenyouarewatchingTVathome.Imsureyouwillmakegreatprogresssoonerorlater.Inconclusion,Isincerelyhopemysuggestionwillhelpyou.Wishyoueverysuccesswithyourstudies.YoursFaithfully,LiHua,ALetterofAdvice,Usefulexpressions:,1.Iamgladtoreceiveyouremailaskingformyadviceon.2.Hereismyadvicefor3.itisimportanttodosth.4.themore,thebetter.5.itshouldbeagreatideatodosth.6.Imsureyouwillmakegreatprogress.7.Isincerelyhopemysuggestionwillhelpyou.8.Firstly,.Secondly,.Inconclusion,.,Learntomakesentences.（见巩固练习第二题）,1.我收到你的来信询问我关于学习压力的问题，我深感遗憾。（Iamsorryto.）_2.劳逸结合很重要。（combinewith）_3.强烈建议你保持均衡的饮食习惯。（keepabalanceddiet）_4.适当的户外运动是一个好主意。（outdooractivities）_5.你吃的健康食品越多，你的身体就会越好。_,Doyouknowanyotherusefulexpressions?,Iamsorrytoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonpressure.,Itisimportanttocombinestudywithplay.,Istronglyadviseyoutokeepabalanceddiet.,Itshouldbeagreatideatodoproperoutdooractivities.,Themorehealthyfoodyoueat,thebetterhealthyouwillhave.,UsefulSentences,假设你是李华，你的笔友Tony写信告诉你他最近在学习中的一些困难。他感到学习压力大，正常生活也受到影响，如睡眠不足，身体也开始亮起了红灯。请你给他写一封信，给他提供帮助。注意：1.词数100左右2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文流畅。,Learnwritealetterofadvice.（见巩固练习第三题）,Raisetheproblem,Advice,Wishes,Firstperson,Presenttense,Letter,Para1.Raisetheproblem问题1：_问题2：_Para2.Adviceonhowtodealwithpressure.建议1：_建议2：_建议3：_Para3.Wishes_,havesomesleepingproblems,haveabadhealth,Itisimportanttocombinestudywithplay.,Istronglyadviseyoutokeepabalanceddiet.,Itshouldbeagreatideatodoproperoutdooractivities.,Isincerelyhopemysuggestionwillhelpyou.,别忘了连接词：Firstly,.Secondly,.Inconclusion,.,参考范文：DearTony,Iamsorrytoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonstudypressure.Youhavesomesleepingproblemsandabadhealth,whichhaveabadeffectonyourstudy.Hereismyadvice.Firstly,itisimportanttocombinestudywithplay.Secondly,Istronglyadviseyoutokeepabalanceddiet.Themorehealthyfoodyoueat,thebetteryourhealthyouwillhave.Finally,itshouldbeagreatideatodoproperoutdooractivities.