高考英语写作提升.ppt

2011届高考英语二轮书面表达提高、升格及分类训练,ByMsSun,一、快速升格你的作文,使用高级词汇1.常用到的高级词汇例如：“此外”：whatsmore()“同样地”inthesameway()“然而”however()“因为”becauseof()“虽然”though/although()“总之”inaword/inshort/allinall()“现今”today/now()“应该”should（）,Inaddition,furthermore,likewise,similarly,equally,incomparison,incontrast,ontheotherhand,onthecontrary,dueto,owingto,onaccountof,thanksto,asaresultof,despitethefactthat,inspiteofthefactthat,inbrief,insummary,tosumup,tosummarize,toconclude,nowadays,currently,besupposedto,“有时候”sometimes又如：beinterestedinverygoodmostof.bemadeupofas/solongastryonesbesttodo.growfast再如：SuddenlyIhadanideathatsomeonehadbrokenintomyhouse.Thankyouverymuchforyouhelp.PlentyofmemoryworkisundoubtedlyhelpfultoEnglishstudy.,occasionally,becrazyabout/beabsorbedin,perfectlygood,themajorityof.,consistof,onconditionthat,sparenoefforttodo.,growrapidly/growamazinglyfast,Anideaoccurredtomethatsomeonehadbrokenintomyhouse,Weappreciateyourhelpverymuch.,PlentyofmemoryworkwillundoubtedlycontributetoEnglishstudy.,2.用短语代替单词例如：Asaresult,theplanwas/afailure.ShewenttoAustriatostudy/music.Becausetheweatherwasgood/,ourjourneywascomfortable.Shecantcorrectlypronounce/theword.,turnedouttobe,/forthepurposeofstudying,Thankstothegoodweather,hastroublepronouncing,使用复杂结构1.改变语态Peoplesuggestthattheconferencebeputoff.(一般)2.使用不定式Heissokindthathecanhelpme.(一般)3.使用过去分词Shewalkedoutofthelabandmanystudentsfollowedher.(一般)4.使用Ving形式Whenhearrives,pleasegivemeanemail.(一般),Itissuggestedthattheconferencebeputoff.(高级),Heissokindastohelpme.(高级),Followedbymanystudents,shewalkedoutofthelab.(高级),Onarriving/hisarrival,pleasegivemeanemail,5.使用名词性从句Itdisappointedeverybodythathedidntturnup.(一般)6.使用定语从句Thegirlisspokenhighlyof.Hercompositionwaswellwritten.(一般)7.使用强调句、倒装句、感叹句Regularradiobroadcastsbeganin1920.(一般)ThoughImweak,Iwillmaketheeffort.(一般)Weweregladtoseethecropsandvegetablesgrowingwell.(一般),Thefactthathedidntturnupdisappointedeverybody.(高级),Thegirlwhosecompositionwaswellwrittenisspokenhighlyof.(高级),Itwasnotuntil1920thatregularradiobroadcastsbegan.(高级),WeakasIam,Illmaketheeffort.(高级),Howgladweweretoseethecropsandvegetablesgrowingwell!(高级),二、单句习练,翻译下列句子1不用说早睡早起是值得的。_2我深信预防胜于治疗。_3在各种运动中，我尤其喜欢慢跑。_4时间最珍贵是很容易证明的。_5就我所知，下列方法对我帮助很大。_,Itgoeswithoutsayingthatitpaystokeepearlyhours.,Iamgreatlyconvincedthatpreventionisbetterthancure.,Amongvariouskindsofsports,Iamfondofjogginginparticular.,Itcanbeeasilyprovedthatnothingismorepreciousthantime.,Asfarasmyknowledgeisconcerned,thefollowingwaysareofgreathelptome.,6毫无疑问，近视在我国的年轻人中是一个严重的问题。_7根据我个人经验，微笑已带给我许多好处。_8在我的求学过程中，我忘不了学习英文所遇到的大困难。_9随着台湾经济的快速发展，许多社会问题产生了。_,Thereisnodoubtthatnearsightednessisaseriousproblemamongtheyouthofourcountry.,Accordingtomypersonalexperience,smilehasdonemealotofgood.,Inthecourseofmyschooling.IwillneverforgetthegreatdifficultyIencounteredinlearningEnglish.,WiththerapiddevelopmentofTaiwanseconomy,largequantitiesofsocialproblemshavecomeout.,10在这信息的年代，计算机扮演非常重要的角色。_11世上没有什么比到快餐店吃汉堡更令我高兴的。_12我们保持公共场所清洁是应当的。_13每当我想到我家附近那一条清澈的小溪，我就忍不住感到悲伤。_,Inthisageofinformationandcommunication,thecomputerplaysanextremelyimportantrole.,Nothingintheworldcandelightmesomuchashavinghamburgersinfastfoodrestaurants.,Itisproperthatwearesupposedtokeepthepublicplacesclean.,WheneverIthinkofthecleanbrooknearmyhome,Icannotbutfeelsad.,14一般相信阅读增加我们的知识、扩大我们的心胸。_15青少年犯罪的主要理由是社会环境日益败坏。_16俗话说得好：诚实为上策。_17人们学外语有三个理由。_18为了维护健康，我们每天至少可做三件事。_,Itisgenerallybelieved(that)readingincreasesourknowledgeandbroadensourmind.,Themainreasonwhytheteenagerscommitcrimesisthatsocialenvironmentisbecomingworse.,Asanoldsayinggoes,“Honestyisthebestpolicy.”,Peoplelearnaforeignlanguageforthreemajorreasons.,Inordertokeephealthy,thereareatleastthreethingswecandoeveryday.,19相反，多数学生似乎还是对课外活动感兴趣的。_20政府应严格执法，另一方面，大众也应该培养减少污染的好习惯。_21换言之，我会尽最大的努力完成我的目标。_22从此之后，我已发现微笑是日常生活中避免冲突的最好办法。_,Onthecontrary,amajorityofstudents,itseems,arestillkeenonafter-classactivities.,Thegovernmentshouldenforcelawsstrictly.Ontheotherhand,thepublicalsoshoulddevelopthegoodhabitofreducingpollution.,Toputitdifferently,Iwillsparenoefforttoattain(gain,liveupto)mygoal.,Eversincethen,Ihavefoundsmileisthebestwaytoavoidanypossibleconflictsinourdailylives.,23更严重的是，我们不珍惜野生动物。_24做这些简单之事，我们一定可以快乐出门平安回家。_25唯有通力合作，我们才能期望台湾不久有新的面貌。_26最后，但并非最不重要，教育上的缺失是助长青少年犯罪的原因。_,Whatismoreseriousisthatwedonotcherishthewildlife.,Bydoingthesesimplethings,wesurelycangooutofthedoorhappilyandcomebackhomesafeeveryday.,OnlywithcombinedeffortscanweexpectTaiwantotakeanewfaceinduecourse.,Lastbutnoleast,theshortcomingineducationisthecausecontributingtothecrimeofyoungsters,27总而言之，好国民应该遵守交通规则。_28因此，我们能下个结论，那就是世上自由最珍贵。_29如果我们能做到如上所述，毫无疑问，我们就能精通英语。_30目前根据一项调查，中国学生半数以上患有近视，位居世界第一。_,Inconclusion,agoodcitizenshouldabidebytrafficregulations.,Wecan,therefore,cometotheconclusionthatnothingissopreciousasfreedomintheworld.,Ifwecandoasmentionedabove,therecanbenodoubtthatwecanmasterEnglish.,Currentl