CET作文写作技巧.ppt

评分依据,写作的评分依据是：切题、条理、语言和字数。所谓切题就是看你写的作文是否跑题。所谓条理是指每一段的议论的正反论点是否清楚，要说明的几个方面是否清晰，描述是否正确。语言主要是指语法结构规范，用词正确恰当。字数符合要求。,一、审题我们拿到作文后第一件事要做的就是审题。审题的作用在于使你的写作不跑题（如果跑题，条理和语言再好，也得不到及格分，甚至0分。）审题就是要审作文的体裁和题材。就四、六级考试体裁而言，它包括议论文、说明文和描述文。,议论文的写作特点是要有论点和论据，而且往往可以从正反两面来论述。说明文的写作特点是从几方面或几条来说明一个问题，就跟某一机器的说明书一样通过1、2、3说明它的用途。描述文也有它自身的写作特点，特别是时间、地点人物要交待清楚。同时，要注意到这三种文体并不是独立的，通常它们会互相交叉出现在作文中。,2005年1月作文题Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacampaignspeechinsupportofyourelectiontothepostofchairmanofthestudentunion.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese.1你认为自己具备是什么条件（能力，性格，爱好）可以胜任学生会主席工作，2如果当选你将会为本校同学做什么？ACampaignSpeech,2004年6月作文题Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositionentitledABriefIntroductiontoaTouristAttraction.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsaccordingtothefollowingguidelines.Yourrole:atourguideYouraudienceagroupofforeigntouristsYourintroductionshouldincludesomewelcomingwordsthescheduleforthedayadescriptionoftheplacethetouristswillbevisiting(e.g.ascenicspotorahistoricalsite,etc.)Youshouldmaketheintroductioninterestingandthearrangementsforthedaycleartoeverybody.ABriefIntroductiontoaTouristAttraction,2003年6月CET作文题目四级作文题目：假设你在某日某时某地目击一起车祸，就此写一份见证书。见证书须包括以下几点：1、车祸发生的时间及地点2、你所见到的车祸情况3、你对车祸原因的分析AnEye-WitnessAccountofaTrafficAccident,2003年1月CET作文题目四级作文题：Directions:Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowriteacompositiononthetopicItPaystoBeHonest.Youshouldwriteatleast100wordsaccordingtotheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese.1.当前社会上存在许多不诚实的现象2.诚实利人利已，做人应该诚实ItPaystoBeHonest,二、主题句通过审题，知道了写作的思路，下边第一步就是要写主题句。主题句是确保不跑题的前提，只有不跑题才有可能得及格分。写主题句最保险的方法就是把各要求句译成英语。,三、条理保证不跑题是写作当中第一重要任务，第二个重要任务就是条理清楚。对于议论文来说，正反面论点要清楚。对于说明文来说，说明的事要一一清晰，对于描述文事要一目了然。,四、字数控制在作文的评分标准中字数也是一个要求。四、六级的作文要求是要写出120-150字。四、六级作文大都是三段式。，如果在每一段中写上三、四句话，即主题句加两三句扩展句和一个结论句就可以了。这样全篇在十二句左右。每一句十多个词，这样就是120-150字。同时，不能写得太多，写得多一是容易跑题犯错，二是浪费宝贵的时间。,写作练习,IsenvironmentPollutionaCrime?破坏生态是一种犯罪行为。破坏生态给人类造成经济损失及生存危机。保护环境人人有责。,破坏生态是一种犯罪行为。Environmentpollutionisakindofcrimesbecauseit,likesuchcrimesasstealing,robbingandkilling,willcausedamagestopeoplespossessionsanddoharmtopeopleslive.Inviewofitsseriousconsequences,theactofpollutionshouldbepunishedbythelaw.,破坏生态给人类造成经济损失及生存危机。,Thereisnodoubtthateversincetheindustrialrevolutionourlivingenvironmenthasbeenbecomingworseandworse.Theburningofcoalhasturnedtheskydark.Theexhaustedgasgivenoffbythecarshasmadeusdifficulttobreathe.Manyspeciesoffishhavebeenkilledbythewaterpollution.Allthishascausedagreatlosstooureconomicdevelopmentandwearenowinthedangerofsurvival.,保护环境人人有责。,Fortunately,wehavecometoseetheimportanceofenvironmentprotection.Everyoneshouldtaketheresponsibilitytoprotecttheenvironment.Weshouldalwaysbearthisinmind,“Protectingtheenvironmentistoprotectourselves.”,BuildingtheCivilizedCampus,大学校园里仍存在一些不文明现象（课桌文化、逃课、偷盗自行车等）分析问题存在的原因。提出解决建议。,大学校园里仍存在一些不文明现象（课桌文化、逃课、偷盗自行车等,Collegestudentsaregenerallybelievedtobemorecivilizedandmoralbecausetheyarehighlyeducated.However,someofthemarefarfromwhattheyshouldbe.Deckculture,spittinginpublic,skippingclassesandbikestealingareoccasionallyfoundaroundusonuniversitycampus.,分析问题存在的原因。,Therearevariousreasonsforsuchthingsthathappenoncampus.Firstly,itisduetotheseverecompetitionofschoolsandsociety.Thusourchildrensearlyeducationisonlyfocusedonknowledgelearning.Theeducationofbasicmoralvaluesissomewhatneglected.Secondly,universitycannotberegardedasan“ivorytower”andsomeimmoralbehaviorswillcertainlypenetrateintotheuniversitycampus.,提出解决建议。,Inordertodoawaywiththesebadhabits,Ithinkthatweshouldlaunchacampaignoncampuscivilizationtoraisetheawarenessonmoralprinciples.Weshouldalsosetupsomerulestoregulatethestudentsbehavior.Inthiswaywecanbuildthecivilizedcampus.,课外练习,当前不少大学生缺乏创新思维能力。导致大学生缺乏创新思维的原因，应试教育，缺少发挥机会等。采取有效措施，鼓励大学生创新。,当前不少大学生缺乏创新思维能力。Asweallknow,theabilitytothinkcreativelyplaysacrucialroleinbothindividualandsocialdevelopment.However,arecentsurveyshowsthatmostofthecollegestudentslacktheinnovationalideasnowadays.Itissaidthatcollegestudentsaregoodatlearningknowledgefromtextbooks,buttheyareratherweakingeneratingtheirownideastosolvetheproblems.,导致大学生缺乏创新思维的原因，应试教育，缺少发挥机会等。Whatcausesthisphenomenon?Ithinktheanswerliesmainlyonthewaythatoureducationoperates.Thetest-orientededucationmodelistheprimarycause.Inthismodel,ourcollegestudentsareaccustomedtosolvingtheproblems,ofwhichthestandardanswerisknown,buttheyarehardlytaughttotrytheirownideas.Moreover,schoolsandsocietyhavenotprovidedenoughopportunitiesforstudentstotrytheirownideas.Whenastudentthinksupanewone,hewillfinditisnotsoeasytotryitout.,采取有效措施，鼓励大学生创新。Theeducationalauthorityshouldattachgreaterimportancetodevelopingthestudentscrea