北京高中英语会考作文练习.ppt

会考模拟作文练习,Tips,表达方式9：0011:30Webeganourworkatnineoclockandendedathalfpasteleven.Weworkedfromninetoeleventhirty.结尾的感受要联系文章内容。描述活动的形容词ameaningfulexperienceanunforgettableexperienceabeneficialexperience,LastSaturday,myclassorganizedavolunteeractivity.MyclassmatesandIwenttothecityparknearourschool,wherewedidsomevolunteerwork.Wegotthereatnineoclock.Assoonaswearrivedthere,weweredividedintothreegroups,andthenwebegantowork.Somehelpedwatertreesandflowers.Somecleanedthebenchesandpickeduplitter.Otherscleanedthechildrensplayground.,Timepassedquickly.Beforeweknewit,ithadbeen11:30andwehadtogoback.Wedidntfinishtheworkuntil11:30.Itwastimeforustoleave.,Allofuswerehappybecausewedidsomethinggoodtoothersandtotheenvironment.Ibelievethisactivitycanincreasepeoplesawarenessofenvironmentalprotection.Protectingtheearthisprotectingourselves.,LastSaturday,myclassorganizedavolunteeractivity.MyclassmatesandIwenttothecityparknearourschool.Assoonaswegotthereatnineoclock,weweredividedintothreegroups.Somehelpedwatertreesandflowers.Somecleanedthebenchesandpickeduplitter.Otherscleanedthechildrensplayground.Althoughwewereverytired,wefeltveryhappybecausewedidsomethinggoodtotheenvironment.(73words)12-14分,上周六我们班组织了一个志愿者活动。我和我的同学们去了学校附近的城市公园。九点我们到达那个公园。一到那儿我们就被分成三组，然后开始工作。有的帮忙浇树和花，有的擦长凳，还有的捡垃圾。时间过得很快，不知不觉，就到了11:30.我们该回去了。我们所有人都很高兴，因为我们为他人和环境做了好事。我相信这个活动可以提高人们环保的意识。,节水周志愿者作文-tips,认真审题，“请参考以下信息，完成你的个人简介，并说明你申请成为志愿者的目的。”确定以下内容内容：个人简介+目的或原因时态：一般现在时结构：2段或3段,应当适当加入连接词以使内容连贯，条理清晰Foronething,Foranotherthing,whatsmore/besides/inaddition/furthermoreinaword/inshort,节水周志愿者作文-tips,在所给的每一条要点后，可以有适当的展开或补充，以达到丰富内容的目的。,节水周志愿者作文-tips,对有兴趣sb.beinterestedinsb.bekeenonsb.beenthusiasticaboutsb.have/show/expressaninterestin,正确的语言表达,我想要成为一名志愿者。IdliketobecomeavolunteerofIdliketoworkasavolunteerfor.Idliketotakepartinasavolunteer.,正确的语言表达,我擅长说英语，因此我能够和外国人流利地/自如地交谈。IamgoodatspeakingEnglishsoIcancommunicate/talkwithforeignersfluently/freely.,正确的语言表达,我有的习惯。Iaminthehabitofdoingsth.Ihavethehabitofdoingsth.Ihaveagoodhabitofdoingsth.养成的习惯form/getintothehabitofdoingsth.摆脱的习惯getridofthehabitofdoingsth.,正确的语言表达,阐述做某事的原因Iwanttodobecause+句子ThereasonwhyIdoisthat+句子Iwanttodo.ThatswhyIwanttodo,正确的语言表达,阐述目的IwanttodosothatIcandoIwanttodoinorderthatIcandoInordertodo,Iwanttodo,正确的语言表达,为做贡献makecontributionstosth./doingsth.将自己致力于devoteoneselftosth./doingsth.将自己的时间，精力，金钱贡献给devoteonestime/energy/moneyto,正确的语言表达,正确的语言表达,介绍姓名，身份，来自何方Mynameis.IamaSenior2studentfrom.IamLiHua,aSenior2studentstudyingat.IamaSenior2studentcalledLiHuastudyingat/whostudyat,TIPS,文体：议论文时态：现在时结构：3段：一方的看法；另一方的看法；我的看法,议论文常用句型,开头句：Differentpeoplehavedifferentopinionsontheproblem/thematter.陈述一方观点：Somepeoplethink/considerthatSb.areinfavoroftheideathatSb.areinfavorofdoingsth.Sb.holdtheideathat,陈述另一方观点：Theotherpeopleareagainstthisidea/opinion/view.Sb.dontagreetotheidea.Sb.dontthinkthatsb.shoulddo陈述自己的观点：Inmyopinion,AsfarasIamconcerned,议论文常用句型,连接词,首先，其次：ononehand,ontheotherhandforonething,foranotherthing递进关系：also,besides,whatsmore,inaddition,furthermore,moreover转折关系：but,however,onthecontrary,Differentstudentshavedifferentopinionsonit.Somestudentsthinkitisagoodideatokeeppets,Petscancomfortoldpeoplewholivealone.Besides,petscanmakeourlifeinteresting.,Examplewriting,because,Petscancompanypeopleandbringhappinesstothem.,Onthecontrary,theotherstudentsareagainsttheidea.Iftoomanypeoplekeeppetsathome,itsbadfortheenvironment.Also,petsmaybenoisyandevenattackpeople.Whatmore,theyspreaddiseases.,Examplewriting,benoisy吵闹；喧杂makenoise制造噪音,Inmyopinion,wecankeeppetsathome.Butmeanwhileweshouldpayattentiontotheenvironmentwhenwalkingpets.Onlyinthisway,canweenjoythepleasurewithpetsandprotectourworld.,Examplewriting,改错,Theythinkkeeppetsisbadfortheenvironment.Theythinkkeepingpetsisbadfortheenvironment.,theWinterAsianGames志愿者,将写作要点合理组合：*年龄，性别*学历及英语水平*爱好体育，熟悉本地*善于交往，乐于助人*承诺：提供最好服务*合适的结尾,theWinterAsianGames志愿者,DearSir/Madam,MynameisLiHua.IwouldliketoworkasavolunteerfortheWinterAsianGames.（写信的目的）Iamaboy/girlof17andIamstudyingathighschoolnow.IamgoodatEnglishandIcantalkwithforeigntouristsinEnglishfreely.,IbelieveIcandoagoodjobfortheGames.First,IlikesportsandIknowtheplaceverywell(Iamfamiliarwiththehostcitybecauseitismyhometown).Second,Igetalongwithotherseasily.I