商务英语翻译课后作业.ppt

BusinessEnglishTranslation0907班张韵、齐倩、李玲饶均凤、许雪逸、苑佳莉,andhecouldnthaveabetterpartnerthanDECPresidentKennethOlsen.而且他也找不到比DEC的总裁肯尼思奥尔森更好的合作伙伴了。AlthoughDigitalisconsiderablyolderthanApple,Olsenhasneversuccumbedtothehierarchicalcorporatemindset.尽管数字公司的历史远远超过了苹果公司，但是奥尔森从来不受等级体系这种公司思维定势的制约。,LastmonthScullyannouncedthatApplewasjoiningwithIBMrivalDigitalEquipmentCorporation(DEC)inamajorstrategicallianceagainstBigBlue上个月苹果执行总裁斯考利宣布，作为一次重大战略性联盟，苹果公司将与美国国际商用机器公司的竞争对手合作数字设备公司（DEC）共同对抗这个“蓝色巨人”,Translation1,翻译难点及问题,1.公司名称翻译&公司背景2.专业名词&术语3.词汇搭配&词汇空缺,1.公司名称翻译&公司背景,LastmonthScullyannouncedthatApplewasjoiningwithIBMrivalDigitalEquipmentCorporation(DEC)inamajorstrategicallianceagainstBigBlueScully：JohnScully乔治.斯考利，前苹果公司CEO。Apple苹果股份有限公司IBM(BigBlue)美国国际商用机器公司DigitalEquipmentCorporation(DEC)数字设备公司,andhecouldnthaveabetterpartnerthanDECPresidentKennethOlsen.AlthoughDigitalisconsiderablyolderthanApple,Olsenhasneversuccumbedtothehierarchicalcorporatemindset.KennethOlsen:美国数字设备公司前董事长。,2.专业名词&术语,LastmonthScullyannouncedthatApplewasjoiningwithIBMrivalDigitalEquipmentCorporation(DEC)inamajorstrategicallianceagainstBigBlueandhecouldnthaveabetterpartnerthanDECPresidentKennethOlsen.AlthoughDigitalisconsiderablyolderthanApple,Olsenhasneversuccumbedtothehierarchialcorporatemindset.,2.专业名词&术语,Announcevt.宣布；述说；预示；播报vi.宣布参加竞选；当播音员joinwith1.与一起做同样的事(常与in连用)2.同情3.和合作strategicalliance战略联盟（两家公司的合作安排，两者决定分享资源，互补长短）；策略联盟文段翻译时常常有一词多义的情况，这个时候应该根据上下文及语体情况进行选择，如announce在这里为宣布，joinin应该为“和合作”。专业术语应该根据平时积累，迅速确定。,3.词汇搭配&词汇空缺,AlthoughDigitalisconsiderablyolderthanApple,Olsenhasneversuccumbedtothehierarchicalcorporatemindset.Considerably+older相当久远succumbedto+mindset“屈服于思维定势”改为“受思维定势束缚”hierarchical+corporate+mindset公司等级制度的思维定势,3.词汇搭配&词汇空缺,在商业文段翻译的过程中，经常遇见一些不常见或者意义不同的词汇搭配，给我们翻译造成困难，这时应该根据语境充分理解句子意义再在汉语找寻最适合的翻译，在遇见词汇空缺时也要尽量找到最贴近的近义词。,Translation2AvontheCompanyforWomen雅芳女性的知己,WelcometotheworldofAvon.Ourvisionisto欢迎来到雅芳的世界。我们的愿景是成为bethecompanythatbestunderstandsand全球女性的知己，提供优质的产品，满意的satisfiestheproducts,serviceand服务以及自我成就感的需求。self-fulfillmentneedsofwomenglobally.,Ourdedicationtosupportingwomentouches我们以拥护女性为宗旨，目标不仅涉及到美notonlybeautybuthealth,fitness,丽，而且也关注女性的健康活力、适切、Self-empowermentandfinancialindependence.自强与经济独立。,翻译难点,1.LongsentenceandcomplexstructureOurvisionistobethecompanythatbestunderstandsandsatisfiestheproducts,serviceandself-fulfillmentneedsofwomenglobally.Ourdedicationtosupportingwomentouchesnotonlybeautybuthealth,fitness,Self-empowermentandfinancialindependence.,2.DictioninChinesebethecompanythatbestunderstandsandsatisfiesdedicationtouchesSelf-empowermentfitnessBecauseoftheexistofvocabularyvacancyindifferentlanguages,itsdifficulttofindtheappropriatewordstoconveytheoriginalflavorandatthesametimetohavetheidiomaticexpressioninchinese,3.Takethefunctionintoconsiderationthisisapieceofadvertisement,soshortsentencesandphrasesarepreferredtoarousethedesiretobuytheproducts.全球女性的知己优质的产品满意的服务自我成就感的需求以拥护女性为宗旨健康活力、适切、自强与经济独立,武汉博奇装饰布有限公司WuhanBoqiDecorativeFabricCo.,Ltd.在拼音中，博奇与簸箕读音相近，所以我们采用国际拼音，改为“Pochi”.,武汉博奇装饰布有限公司是为汽车、火车、飞机、轮船、酒店和家庭提供高档装饰布的专业制造企业。WuhanBoqiDecorativeFabricCo.,Ltd.isaprofessionalmanufacturingenterprisethatproducestop-gradefabricforautomobile,train,plane,ship,hotel,andfamily.此处都应该是用复数。,其前身是成立于1995年的武汉冰川集团汽车装饰材料有限公司，ItspredecessorisAutomobileDecorativeMaterialsCo.,Ltd.ofWuhanBingchuanGroupestablishedin1995.,现有总资产1.07亿元，年生产汽车装饰部558万米，年销售收入一亿元。Itnowownstotalassetsof107millionRMB,producing5,580,000metersofautomobilefabricannuallywithanannualsalesof100millionRMB.Own一般是用人作主语；annually与annual重复,基地位于武汉市蔡甸区博奇路1号，占地面积300,000平方米，其中一期工程建筑面积24，600平方米。与京珠高速毗邻，交通极为便利。ThebaseofWuhanBoqiDecorativeFabricCo.,Ltd.liesatBoqiRoadNo.1,CaidianDistrict,Wuhan,coveringanareaof300,000squaremeters,oneoftheconstructionsiteof24,600squaremetersadjoiningwithJingzhuHighwaywhichfacilitatesthetrafficgreatly.,BoqiRoadNo.1,应该改为No.1BoqiRoad；一期工程oneoftheconstructionsiteof这样理解语义有问题。应该为“first-stageconstruction”。JingzhuHighwayistooinformal，应该改为“Beijing-ZhuhaiExpressway”,武汉博奇装饰布有限公司提出了公司的发展战略目标，在未来五年，建成专业化多功能内饰面料开发和生产企业。2003年销售收入已实现一个亿，2005年将实现2.5个亿，成为中国前两强的汽车装饰布生产企业,Thedevelopmentstrategicobjectivehasbeenputforwardbyusthatbuildsupspecializedenterprisefordevelopingandmanufacturingmulti-functionalfabricmaterialandbringstherevenuesofthecompanyto100millionRMBin2003,and250millionRMBinthe2005,soastomakeitbecomeoneofthetoptwoautomobileupholsteryfabricmanufacturingenterprises.,Thedevelopmentstrategicobjectivehasbeenputforwardbyusthatbuildsupspecializedenterprisefordevelopingandmanufacturingmulti-functionalfabricmaterial武汉博奇装饰布有限公司提出了公司的发展战略目标，在未来五年，建成专业化多功能内饰面料开发和生产企业。,TheattributiveclauseisimproperlyusedThedevelopmentstrategicobjectiveputforwardbyusistobuildupspecializedenterprisefordevelopingandmanufacturingmulti-functionalfabricmaterialSomewordsaremissed在未来五年：Inthenextfiveyears,bringstherevenuesofthecompanyto100millionRMBin2003,and250millionRMBinthe2005,2003年销售收入已实现一个亿,2005年将实现2.5个亿Tense已实现：broughttherevenues将实现：willreachto250millionRMB,TheEnglishsentenceistoolong,itcombinedtwoChinesesentencestogether.Thedevelopmentstrategicobjectiveputforwardbyusistobuildupspecializedenterprisefordevelopingandmanufacturingmulti-functionalfabricmaterial.webroughttherevenuesofthecompanyto100millionRMBin2003,andwillreachto250millionRMBinthe2005,soastomakeitbecomeoneofthetoptwoautomobileupholsteryfabricmanufacturingenterprises.,合作品牌：PotentialClients（CooperativeBrands）（Potential意为“可能的，潜在的”，不准确，应为cooperativebrands。）在国内市场，我们成为主要的OEM配套商；Domestically,weremainaleadingsupplierofmainOEMDomestically,ourcompanyremainsaleadingsupportingsupplierofOEM（配套商为supportingsupplier“主要的”出现了重复表达）,在欧洲市场，我们进行了广泛的技术合作；InEurope,wehavejoinedextensivetechnologicalco-operationsInEurope,ourcompanyhasjoinedextensivetechnologicalco-operations(使用we容易产生歧义，指代不明。用ourcompany更清晰明确。）,在北美市场，我们与GM的伙伴达成战略协议；IntheNorthAmerica,anstrategicagreementwiththepartnersofGMhasbeenreached,在日本市场，产品的开发正不断进行；InJapan,thedevelopmentofproductsisbeingcarriedoutconstantlyInJapan,theconstantdevelopmentofproductsisbeingcarriedout（副词constantly离需要修饰的词太远，可适当换词语的位置）,在俄罗斯市场，以每月两个集装箱货柜的面料供应市场；InRussia,twocontainersoffabricmaterialisprovidedpermonthInRussia,twocontainersoffabricmaterialisprovidedformarketpermonth（此处出现漏译的情况，完整的翻译可使译文更清晰）,博奇公司正成为OEM越来越信赖的伙伴，正越来越广泛地参与国际合作。WearetakenasamoreandmoretrustworthyinternationalpartnerbyOEM.OurcompanyistakenasamoreandmoretrustworthyinternationalpartnerbyOEMandparticipatesinincreasinglywide-ranginginternationalco-operations.(此处漏译了“正越来越广泛地参